3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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Author, please keep on updating >]] I enjoyed the first chapters, and the food elements is mouthwatering... Lol we have been spoiled by the ML in the first chapter already [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] The update schedule is always on time and I don't think author is trying to write a comedy, but some parts made me laugh a lot :D :D I'm looking forward more fluffy moments and maybe something a bit juicier :D [img=update]
Hello everyone, this is the shameless review from the author here :) I rewrote the early chapters again because I believe the new version will make the novel more interesting and the flow of the story will be better. Thank you for being here and please enjoy this novel ...
My only problem is being too broke to afford more chapter... fr the, good quality overall
Author, please keep on updating >]] I enjoyed the first chapters, and the food elements is mouthwatering... Lol we have been spoiled by the ML in the first chapter already [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] The update schedule is always on time and I don't think author is trying to write a comedy, but some parts made me laugh a lot :D :D I'm looking forward more fluffy moments and maybe something a bit juicier :D [img=update]
Hello everyone, this is the shameless review from the author here :) I rewrote the early chapters again because I believe the new version will make the novel more interesting and the flow of the story will be better. Thank you for being here and please enjoy this novel ...
My only problem is being too broke to afford more chapter... fr the, good quality overall