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It would have been great if the author could have explained the time dilation between game world and real one as it's not making sense coz the 8hrs of sleeping time of game world seems equivalent to 16hrs of real world when mc is in real world. similarly, when mc is in game world 16hrs of game world is similar to 8 hrs of real world. This seems a bit contradictory. further, when is the mc sleeping?
please release some more chapters author. and thank you for all creative work till now
Superb.. Superb.. Nice and Realistic story without exaggeration.... Nice job author.. Nice job author.. Nice job author.. Nice job author.. Nice job author..
It would have been great if the author could have explained the time dilation between game world and real one as it's not making sense coz the 8hrs of sleeping time of game world seems equivalent to 16hrs of real world when mc is in real world. similarly, when mc is in game world 16hrs of game world is similar to 8 hrs of real world. This seems a bit contradictory. further, when is the mc sleeping?
please release some more chapters author. and thank you for all creative work till now
Superb.. Superb.. Nice and Realistic story without exaggeration.... Nice job author.. Nice job author.. Nice job author.. Nice job author.. Nice job author..
where can I find more chapters of this ? Raw name? Source?