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The story is good for the first part but it devolves into world building and the protagonist is not shown for many chapters. I like reading the story with the protagonist himself in action, using his wits to strengthen himself but not showing him for so many chapters is just absurd!
Awesome novel. The story is goin good, the plot is quite fresh though the idea actually pretty common with some regression and dungeons. I can only say good work and please don't drop this sir author, thank you for your hard work!
honest review!! so far I already read 30 chaps.and I notice some misspelled and word using that's all and I enjoyed the chapters so far. that's all and Keep up 5he Good Word Author Nim [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Big fan of your I created magic book, till you stopped, which I understand cause you're sick. But more importantly, what app do you use for the art and for the text design?!
Love the whole premise and concept, it’s like a cake where all my favorite things were meshed into one, I can’t wait for it to reach a hundred chapters!
one of the best on the platform about awakening trope novels. author has done his work with utmost creativity and imagination. all the best to author. i liked this very much.
Should have named the ability fake it till you make it but great novel so far keep up the good work.
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it's awesome, the plot is great, the characters are also good, it's worth the time.It's just a suggestion I would hope for author to not make the MC real persona(Ye Tian) look very weak. As I said it's just a suggestion so author ignore it if you have other plans in the bag for MC
a very good novel can only say that everybody should ready it . pls Update more but everything else IS verry nice thank you For writing such a good novel 👍
The story is refreshing and fun to read. I hope the mc keeps developing in a fun and exciting way. I personally hope it won't become a harem. it would be disappointing to ruin a good novel. it would be great if the author keeps to his own artistic ideas. long story short a masterpiece in the making.
Author here! If you have any questions regarding this novel, be sure to ask them here, I'll definitely answer!🙂
The story is good for the first part but it devolves into world building and the protagonist is not shown for many chapters. I like reading the story with the protagonist himself in action, using his wits to strengthen himself but not showing him for so many chapters is just absurd!
Awesome novel. The story is goin good, the plot is quite fresh though the idea actually pretty common with some regression and dungeons. I can only say good work and please don't drop this sir author, thank you for your hard work!
honest review!! so far I already read 30 chaps.and I notice some misspelled and word using that's all and I enjoyed the chapters so far. that's all and Keep up 5he Good Word Author Nim [img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Big fan of your I created magic book, till you stopped, which I understand cause you're sick. But more importantly, what app do you use for the art and for the text design?!
Love the whole premise and concept, it’s like a cake where all my favorite things were meshed into one, I can’t wait for it to reach a hundred chapters!
one of the best on the platform about awakening trope novels. author has done his work with utmost creativity and imagination. all the best to author. i liked this very much.
Should have named the ability fake it till you make it but great novel so far keep up the good work.
揭示劇透 it's awesome, the plot is great, the characters are also good, it's worth the time.It's just a suggestion I would hope for author to not make the MC real persona(Ye Tian) look very weak. As I said it's just a suggestion so author ignore it if you have other plans in the bag for MC
a very good novel can only say that everybody should ready it . pls Update more but everything else IS verry nice thank you For writing such a good novel 👍
The story is refreshing and fun to read. I hope the mc keeps developing in a fun and exciting way. I personally hope it won't become a harem. it would be disappointing to ruin a good novel. it would be great if the author keeps to his own artistic ideas. long story short a masterpiece in the making.
Author here! If you have any questions regarding this novel, be sure to ask them here, I'll definitely answer!🙂