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At the moment, I'm really enjoying the story. The rhythm itself is very pleasant. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is ChatGPT in its full glory.The low rating is not because AI was used...as a customer what I am interested is the end result not caring about the tools used to write this.The low rating is because the author didn't even took the time to make some editing to get rid of the generalist and impersonal tone of the AI , instead just copy paste entire paragraphs .
If you like any of Soldier’s other books I think this is his best work yet. Good steady growth, good system, good supporting characters and more uplifting than many of his previous works. I still think he always skimps out on epilogues though, either way this is a great story & I enjoyed it a lot.
l just unlocked a new path, Broke path. Broke path : the feeling of missing out on great novels because u can't afford coins, and free passes will get u nowhere seeing the 1500+ chapters. 🤣🤣🤣 the novel has a good development we can see the MC growing absurdly but not over the top that usually ruins a novel. There is more to uncover on his path but I can't give a full review when I don't know his future. I recommend it to all who wish to try it , believe me U..Will..Like ..It .. Very Much😁😁 Now to await a future where we novel puts this book on free limited so I can binge read 😎👋🏿
Starting off, it’s my first time delving into this author’s work, and I must say, I’m not a fan of using paraphrasing like the Rocky quote to pad out word count. If there’s more of that, it’s an automatic 2/5 for me in terms of writing quality. I’ve reached Chapter 55 and intend to continue until Chapter 150 before providing further feedback on the pacing. So far, the story shows promise, but it comes with a hefty price tag. I could recommend several novels with superior world-building and character development. As for this author’s style, it seems quite generic, relying heavily on tropes from previous works(note I haven’t read his previous works but I’m sure if I were to look 80% positive I would see some parallels). Despite covering some aspects of world-building, by Chapter 55, readers are still in the dark about the system’s possibilities. Removing the fastest way to gain that knowledge(School) through war feels like a misstep. While it’s understandable to show the world progressing without the MC’s involvement, the narrative feels stale. War is happening, yet we’re confined to the MC’s home until events conveniently move the plot forward. There’s a disconnect between what characters in the story know about the war’s progress and what readers are privy to. It doesn’t make sense for outlying villages, unaffected by the war and days away, to possess more knowledge than the capital(2 days from the fight), especially with its greater resources and influence. This lack of coherence in world-building detracts from immersion. In summary, the attempt to keep readers in the dark feels forced and doesn’t align with the story’s setting, particularly given the capital’s status as the hub of civilization. It’s unlikely that other nobles wouldn’t spread information about the war to the common people. Apologies for the rant, but this is my honest critique based on my reading experience.
This novel is one of the good novels, If I get more chances for free read I can read all chapters and complete it in few days of possible. The characters is designed in a good way too.
really like up to now , very interesting omg i hate the minimum words to send a review aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
realy nice story, looks ike good development, main character is kinda bland in the beginning but i can imagine quite a big growth, world buildding is amazing. all the side character a realy nice, in the moment a littel better than the main char
good writing, Author is awesome and super responsive. His update schedule is crazy, 1000 chapters in 6 months with decent length on each is crazy. it just seems like recently the quality dropped a little and he needs to take time to himself.
This book is really good!! It gives me "The Beginning After The End" vibes. I really like the premise of the book. the development is relatively fast, but still slow enough to get to know the characters and the world. Rain is also a great mc. He strong willed and is an mc that doesn't make me cringe for once! despite that, he also has room for improvement and does. That being said, I'm not gonna finish the book because of webnovels coin system. Author!! if you ever update and put the rest of the novel on amazon, I will buy it and finish it, so please do! 🙏🙏🙏
Dude i love this story so much like sooo much plzzz drop chapters as fast as possible also i dont have money to buy this book plzzz if anyone can gift me this book i will be Very thankfull to him i want this book like crazy i can live without this book plzzzzzzzzzzz if the author can give me free access or anyone can gift me this plzzzzz
A very promising webnovel! The story is going good so far but just to point out few things that can perhaps enhance the reader’s experience. I’ve noticed spelling errors, confusing grammatical structures, and some smaller details that were mentioned from the early chapters seems to be forgotten by author-san like the inspection skill that mc received on early chapter but later mentioned that he needs a skill akin to it? Then there’s the weird path development too, for example, wouldn’t it make more sense if the fighter/brawler path started as it is? Then progress to Battle Master? The word “master” implies mc has mastered this path so shouldn’t it be the last ascension or at least second to the last then ascend its rank to higher realm? 🤔 I really do hope you put extra love and attention to the details of your work author-san cuz I believe this novel is going to be one of the best out novels there 🙂 please keep up the good work and looking forward to your work’s development!
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is there a cheaper way to buy this book? Author, sorry your story is good, just not worth 200$
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
Can someone please tell me where to find Trial Reads. The ones with a few chapter to try. There is a side for both Male leads and Female leads. There is also the books that were upgraded from Trial reading and have new chapter. I can’t find that page on the new version of WebNovel.
It's a very interesting concept with characters that seem to have life in them, not just npcs. My main problem is all the plot holes/times the author contradicts himself. It's frustrating to try and read. Especially since the author talks about improving the mcs intelligence as he progresses being a mage. Then, to only show what I feel is a decrease in intelligence.
I haven't seen any romance so far, I've only seen an antisocial guy who keeps coming up with talk about mental age as an excuse to distance himself from others, even accepting a subordinate position even though he could, with some effort, earn some title of respect, without holding onto some land and being able to have greater capacity to protect their family and develop. Where is the promised romance?
Hello author, I have a question about the title "infinite paths", does it mean that he will be able to use all paths (at the same time) or not? I just want to get an answer to this question. Regards
AUTHOR/ TRANSLATER I MUST APOLOGIZE, I irresponsible left tablet open and don't know who wrote a 'few' terrible comments. I am sincerely sorry for any difficulties the comments may have caused you. Could you possibly find them all and erase, please. Will say, though, love your work and due look forward to reading more.
read 40 chapters and gotta say it was good .if I wrote a novel it would probably have started the same way.
In many of your previous tries I have given you actually 0 stars maximum 1. You have developed way better than expected. This may be a novel we will enjoy. It will be the most enjoyable I may say so.
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good read ...................................................................................................................................................................
J'attends qu'ils soit gratuit ! Haha. Les 40 chapitre superbe ! J'aurais juste quelques lignes familiales en plus ^^ 2€ pour le lire mais je pourrais jamais mettre 100€ dommage si j'avais les sous je l'aurai fait mdr
I’ giving this 4 stars even though I haven’t read yet because I love the authors other works but I’l come back and do an honest review (I probably won’t because my memory is bad)
its a good story """""""""""""""""""""""""""" """"""""""""""""""""""""" """"""""""""""""""" """""""""""""""" """""""""""" """"""""" """""" """ "" "
Finally something decent to read on this page waiting for more ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
(May be a little biased because I've read Alot of this author's past work)Chapter 28 at time of postAlright let's start out with the System, it reminds me of a mix between the first "I can make everything level up" and "The Arcane path" if you've read any of this author's past work. While it may be a system it is more of just a status that details his skills and abilities.The story is very well written and I'm not talking only about the grammar. The description that goes into some of the characters seems very thought out.Character Design... My only problem with what I've read so far is that the MC has the attitude of a turtle(Might change cause lil man is 5) but other than that every Character has Alot of depth and aren't Npcs.World Background is pretty good because we have gotten a general history of the world and some recent history.Summary: Yea I'd say it's definitely a good read for what has been released and it seems to have a lot of potential to be great because of the way it is set up.
At the moment, I'm really enjoying the story. The rhythm itself is very pleasant. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
This is ChatGPT in its full glory.The low rating is not because AI was used...as a customer what I am interested is the end result not caring about the tools used to write this.The low rating is because the author didn't even took the time to make some editing to get rid of the generalist and impersonal tone of the AI , instead just copy paste entire paragraphs .
If you like any of Soldier’s other books I think this is his best work yet. Good steady growth, good system, good supporting characters and more uplifting than many of his previous works. I still think he always skimps out on epilogues though, either way this is a great story & I enjoyed it a lot.
l just unlocked a new path, Broke path. Broke path : the feeling of missing out on great novels because u can't afford coins, and free passes will get u nowhere seeing the 1500+ chapters. 🤣🤣🤣 the novel has a good development we can see the MC growing absurdly but not over the top that usually ruins a novel. There is more to uncover on his path but I can't give a full review when I don't know his future. I recommend it to all who wish to try it , believe me U..Will..Like ..It .. Very Much😁😁 Now to await a future where we novel puts this book on free limited so I can binge read 😎👋🏿
Starting off, it’s my first time delving into this author’s work, and I must say, I’m not a fan of using paraphrasing like the Rocky quote to pad out word count. If there’s more of that, it’s an automatic 2/5 for me in terms of writing quality. I’ve reached Chapter 55 and intend to continue until Chapter 150 before providing further feedback on the pacing. So far, the story shows promise, but it comes with a hefty price tag. I could recommend several novels with superior world-building and character development. As for this author’s style, it seems quite generic, relying heavily on tropes from previous works(note I haven’t read his previous works but I’m sure if I were to look 80% positive I would see some parallels). Despite covering some aspects of world-building, by Chapter 55, readers are still in the dark about the system’s possibilities. Removing the fastest way to gain that knowledge(School) through war feels like a misstep. While it’s understandable to show the world progressing without the MC’s involvement, the narrative feels stale. War is happening, yet we’re confined to the MC’s home until events conveniently move the plot forward. There’s a disconnect between what characters in the story know about the war’s progress and what readers are privy to. It doesn’t make sense for outlying villages, unaffected by the war and days away, to possess more knowledge than the capital(2 days from the fight), especially with its greater resources and influence. This lack of coherence in world-building detracts from immersion. In summary, the attempt to keep readers in the dark feels forced and doesn’t align with the story’s setting, particularly given the capital’s status as the hub of civilization. It’s unlikely that other nobles wouldn’t spread information about the war to the common people. Apologies for the rant, but this is my honest critique based on my reading experience.
This novel is one of the good novels, If I get more chances for free read I can read all chapters and complete it in few days of possible. The characters is designed in a good way too.
really like up to now , very interesting omg i hate the minimum words to send a review aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
realy nice story, looks ike good development, main character is kinda bland in the beginning but i can imagine quite a big growth, world buildding is amazing. all the side character a realy nice, in the moment a littel better than the main char
good writing, Author is awesome and super responsive. His update schedule is crazy, 1000 chapters in 6 months with decent length on each is crazy. it just seems like recently the quality dropped a little and he needs to take time to himself.
This book is really good!! It gives me "The Beginning After The End" vibes. I really like the premise of the book. the development is relatively fast, but still slow enough to get to know the characters and the world. Rain is also a great mc. He strong willed and is an mc that doesn't make me cringe for once! despite that, he also has room for improvement and does. That being said, I'm not gonna finish the book because of webnovels coin system. Author!! if you ever update and put the rest of the novel on amazon, I will buy it and finish it, so please do! 🙏🙏🙏
Dude i love this story so much like sooo much plzzz drop chapters as fast as possible also i dont have money to buy this book plzzz if anyone can gift me this book i will be Very thankfull to him i want this book like crazy i can live without this book plzzzzzzzzzzz if the author can give me free access or anyone can gift me this plzzzzz
A very promising webnovel! The story is going good so far but just to point out few things that can perhaps enhance the reader’s experience. I’ve noticed spelling errors, confusing grammatical structures, and some smaller details that were mentioned from the early chapters seems to be forgotten by author-san like the inspection skill that mc received on early chapter but later mentioned that he needs a skill akin to it? Then there’s the weird path development too, for example, wouldn’t it make more sense if the fighter/brawler path started as it is? Then progress to Battle Master? The word “master” implies mc has mastered this path so shouldn’t it be the last ascension or at least second to the last then ascend its rank to higher realm? 🤔 I really do hope you put extra love and attention to the details of your work author-san cuz I believe this novel is going to be one of the best out novels there 🙂 please keep up the good work and looking forward to your work’s development!
揭示劇透 is there a cheaper way to buy this book? Author, sorry your story is good, just not worth 200$
Hello author! I would like to clear up some doubts... they are as follows: will there be NTR in the work (I hope not), is the FMC Yandere? or possessive? Finally, does the work contain lemons?
Can someone please tell me where to find Trial Reads. The ones with a few chapter to try. There is a side for both Male leads and Female leads. There is also the books that were upgraded from Trial reading and have new chapter. I can’t find that page on the new version of WebNovel.
It's a very interesting concept with characters that seem to have life in them, not just npcs. My main problem is all the plot holes/times the author contradicts himself. It's frustrating to try and read. Especially since the author talks about improving the mcs intelligence as he progresses being a mage. Then, to only show what I feel is a decrease in intelligence.
I haven't seen any romance so far, I've only seen an antisocial guy who keeps coming up with talk about mental age as an excuse to distance himself from others, even accepting a subordinate position even though he could, with some effort, earn some title of respect, without holding onto some land and being able to have greater capacity to protect their family and develop. Where is the promised romance?
Hello author, I have a question about the title "infinite paths", does it mean that he will be able to use all paths (at the same time) or not? I just want to get an answer to this question. Regards
AUTHOR/ TRANSLATER I MUST APOLOGIZE, I irresponsible left tablet open and don't know who wrote a 'few' terrible comments. I am sincerely sorry for any difficulties the comments may have caused you. Could you possibly find them all and erase, please. Will say, though, love your work and due look forward to reading more.
read 40 chapters and gotta say it was good .if I wrote a novel it would probably have started the same way.
In many of your previous tries I have given you actually 0 stars maximum 1. You have developed way better than expected. This may be a novel we will enjoy. It will be the most enjoyable I may say so.
Xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx xxxxxxxx pipi pupu: cool
揭示劇透 good read ...................................................................................................................................................................
J'attends qu'ils soit gratuit ! Haha. Les 40 chapitre superbe ! J'aurais juste quelques lignes familiales en plus ^^ 2€ pour le lire mais je pourrais jamais mettre 100€ dommage si j'avais les sous je l'aurai fait mdr
I’ giving this 4 stars even though I haven’t read yet because I love the authors other works but I’l come back and do an honest review (I probably won’t because my memory is bad)
its a good story """""""""""""""""""""""""""" """"""""""""""""""""""""" """"""""""""""""""" """""""""""""""" """""""""""" """"""""" """""" """ "" "
Finally something decent to read on this page waiting for more ::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::::
(May be a little biased because I've read Alot of this author's past work)Chapter 28 at time of postAlright let's start out with the System, it reminds me of a mix between the first "I can make everything level up" and "The Arcane path" if you've read any of this author's past work. While it may be a system it is more of just a status that details his skills and abilities.The story is very well written and I'm not talking only about the grammar. The description that goes into some of the characters seems very thought out.Character Design... My only problem with what I've read so far is that the MC has the attitude of a turtle(Might change cause lil man is 5) but other than that every Character has Alot of depth and aren't Npcs.World Background is pretty good because we have gotten a general history of the world and some recent history.Summary: Yea I'd say it's definitely a good read for what has been released and it seems to have a lot of potential to be great because of the way it is set up.