In Naruto World with Perfect Control

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PriamusTheBright

It feels like I’m reading a Chinese cultivation novel sorry not for me

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SLappY

misleading tags. its just another Naruto turned into a Chinese cultivation novel for no reason. the writing quality is nice though and so is the update rate, so there's that at least

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OldFellow

Interesting start and an intriguing premise, though you broke the initial promisse already at chapter 2, it is not a fic on Naruto wolrd but a fic in an AU Naruto world, this discovery broke my immersion and unfortunately took my will to keep reading. You should update the summary and make it clear it is an AU, anyway good luck on the story

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malinizgeldii

you can believe she turned the chakra into "qi" and practices xuallian (she was able to turn on her wise mode 2 weeks after she regained her memory) actually I don't have much problem with that but when hinata was 6 she acted like a nasty teenager of 14 years old. Read it if you can stand these two reasons.

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Miracle_invoker_

C’était écrit par un chinois en infiltration ou je rêve ? Ça envoie des vibes de roman chinois de cultivation. La discussion entre Tsunade et le Mc se sentait irréel 100% Quitter le village est encore plus dur que d’y entrer et pourtant il a réussi à le faire avec hinata à la traîne. L’histoire progresse trop rapidement aussi

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Koopatroopa4560

Ong, I can't even find the strength to continue reading this.

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HereForGoodRead

Chapter 17 end of story thats when I just couldn’t even bother with trying

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Josh_Richie

Alright... I'm out. This isn't my cup of tea. Stopped at Chapter 11 though. Read at your own discretion

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Calintz20

The Novel feels like a bad Chinese machine translation; with glaring grammar mistakes. Furthermore, while it's set in an Alternate/Augmented Universe; I don’t feel the Author has a good grasp of the Naruto Universe as a whole.

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PrinceB

so, no harem?! or is there?please tell me

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Bro_is_bored

boring and nothing interesting . Concept was good but execution was bad

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izzna

meh. ...........................................

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TheLibraryofLife

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE

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ANANTA

Intresting & Entertaining. Keep up the great work. Continue doing the greatness. Hope & Pray that AUTHOR will not drop & complete this wonderful FANIFIC-STORY with greatness.

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Maxphantom3

pls dont drop ...........................

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hhhhz45

really bad. doesnt really have any common sense to it. its breaking every logical construct ever.

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Hsaet_Uchiha

up to 67 chapters but no longer interested.

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Lizrock

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R0B

I hate the fact that it's au, but overall I liked it. It's an average fanfic tho. ........................................ ........................................