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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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I am giving u a full star review because although the concept is overused, I haven't seen it being implemented properly even once. I will give u my powerstones. just don't stop what u are doing.
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I liked the start, also I'm going to assume Emilia is the fl. I kind of like the idea of a manipulative fl since the protag seems to have intelligence but seems to be too introverted.
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I am giving u a full star review because although the concept is overused, I haven't seen it being implemented properly even once. I will give u my powerstones. just don't stop what u are doing.
I liked the start, also I'm going to assume Emilia is the fl. I kind of like the idea of a manipulative fl since the protag seems to have intelligence but seems to be too introverted.