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寫檢討abandoned or will release more chapters I really liked it ?................................................................................................
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So far really enjoying it, haven't seen any spelling errors while the comedy is quite good. The idea for the story is interesting and i personally have been waiting for someone to do it. Keep up the good Author.
Yep I like this story, I crave more CMDK fanfictions. There aren't enough of them and it's a very good start for crossover fanfics since you can go to a lot of different worlds and already have a plot explanation for the mode of travel, the summoning of demons or angels.
Nice idea author. reviewing to support the story. ....................................................................................
The story grabs you enough to want to see the end ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Looks really good actually, I didn't mind the 15K word count chapters, people complain about it as if it's rare (bruh, every non-top 30 fanfic author does it, they need a quick boost to get into rankings without using up their whole stock inventory.) Overall, I like the character Amon, it's a bit early right now and he's being similar to OG MC right now, but I am sure as the story goes on, he will be different. The writing is also pretty good with no noticeable faults or grammar mistakes. The update rate is also decent for a fanfic so I recommend this.
i have been looking for a book about the angel type system and i think this book has the potential to become very good so please do not drop it.
The word count thing is a little scummy but I honestly don’t mind it much since you were upfront about it and i prefer it over adding extra fluff to chapters for length like some others do. I am a big fan of it so far and am looking forward to more. Since I am selfish I will pray for your and your family's health so you can keep writing.
Es la mamáda Timmy,está bueno y ahy me tienen leyendo un libro en un idioma que ni entiendo .........................................................................................
its a cmdk ff, idea is generic but with food execution it could be a really nice and engaging read
Not one, but two word count chaps?! Your pushing it. I’ll delete this review when you’ve deleted the word count chaps and I’ll give the story a go. But your integrity as an author is in question rn.
abandoned or will release more chapters I really liked it ?................................................................................................
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So far really enjoying it, haven't seen any spelling errors while the comedy is quite good. The idea for the story is interesting and i personally have been waiting for someone to do it. Keep up the good Author.
Yep I like this story, I crave more CMDK fanfictions. There aren't enough of them and it's a very good start for crossover fanfics since you can go to a lot of different worlds and already have a plot explanation for the mode of travel, the summoning of demons or angels.
Nice idea author. reviewing to support the story. ....................................................................................
The story grabs you enough to want to see the end ..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Looks really good actually, I didn't mind the 15K word count chapters, people complain about it as if it's rare (bruh, every non-top 30 fanfic author does it, they need a quick boost to get into rankings without using up their whole stock inventory.) Overall, I like the character Amon, it's a bit early right now and he's being similar to OG MC right now, but I am sure as the story goes on, he will be different. The writing is also pretty good with no noticeable faults or grammar mistakes. The update rate is also decent for a fanfic so I recommend this.
i have been looking for a book about the angel type system and i think this book has the potential to become very good so please do not drop it.
The word count thing is a little scummy but I honestly don’t mind it much since you were upfront about it and i prefer it over adding extra fluff to chapters for length like some others do. I am a big fan of it so far and am looking forward to more. Since I am selfish I will pray for your and your family's health so you can keep writing.
Es la mamáda Timmy,está bueno y ahy me tienen leyendo un libro en un idioma que ni entiendo .........................................................................................
its a cmdk ff, idea is generic but with food execution it could be a really nice and engaging read
Not one, but two word count chaps?! Your pushing it. I’ll delete this review when you’ve deleted the word count chaps and I’ll give the story a go. But your integrity as an author is in question rn.
It’s a realy nice book I don’t understand why so many people hate Just keep it to your self…