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Good story line very different but is not for me as a audiobook listener I gave after chapter 5 lol to much === almost every chapter [img=In your face]😭😭😭
I really enjoyed it. It might be my love for dinosaurs but it’s definitely a good novel.
If he doesn’t find a blue sword and starts summoning undead I will be disappointed :p
The story of the novel has an interesting story of trying to restore the Mesozoic Era with the use of the ‘System’. Your typical reincarnation story with sprinkles on top; potentially good with a comedic side. I have high expectations and excited to further see your works. Definitely suggest people interested in dinosaurs to read!
This is an early review, but overall, i think the novel's pretty good, you can tell the author has put in a lot of work into this to make it stand out, and it certainly does. The writing style is light hearted and really easy to read, so i think with just a bit of editing, this could become much better.
Hello, Good Morning, Afternoon, and Evening. Update: For the first 2 weeks or so I have done 2 chapters per day but for the next week I would only post 1 chapter per day as I would find it difficult to create novel chapters. I am sorry for being incapable of doing balance but I hope you can understand. School is out and I am near to graduation, and I need to focus, things would be hectic if I try to continue with how stable two chapters per day would be. I hope my dear readers can understand. In return, I would provide you guys with chapters that would fulfill your imagination and provide chapters that would be of quality. Thank you for understanding, and I would try my best to return to my usual schedule of 2 chaps per day but until then, Thank you.
The book introduced a new concept in the Isekai themed story that makes the story development quite interesting. The system used in the story is easy to understand and has the potential to be expanded to make the story more interesting. Overall this book has new ideas that would attract readers who got tired in reading Isekai themed story m
The characters are well-written, and it has a good story pace. However, the story can be a bit repetitive due to the isekai and system elements. Nonetheless, the author has clearly put in a commendable effort to ensure that this does not negatively impact their storytelling and writing. It's a 5/5 overall, definitely a good read for readers who enjoy isekai genre.
Good Good Good. I wrote triple good! The Characters have felt alive and the Story is good . The characters are pretty nice. I found myself enjoying this, having a few moments of my own. There were very little grammar errors but nothing notable, The Quality is good and I expect to be reading more of this. Many will enjoy this story, it's quite Unique.
Overall the first few chapters were interesting they had a good hook to keep readers intrigued, but the premise itself isn't particularly revolutionary. The quality of writing is quite high, with not very many grammatical errors, the word choice is good, the characters so far feel fleshed out to an extent, a good read, so far a solid 4.5
Absolutely loved reading this! I found some parts to be comedic. A refreshing development in this genre. Side note, the cover of the book is fire.
ITS SO NICE RAHHHHHHHH I FEEL LIKE A DINOSAUR! Honestly one of the more newer and exciting content ive read so far. It delivers multiple genres/ideas into one in a very clever way and thays what I really like about this stuff, its diversity in media. Yeahhh! RAHHHHHHHH!
Amazing story, I enjoyed it so much, my best read upto so far, hope you will continue this. I love this novel. release many chapter soon as possible,
Just hitting chapter 18 and wow, all I can say is this book is a most read for any new book readers 5/5 writing quality that has improved a lot 5/5 update pace! Can’t wait for more chapters though 5/5 story dev so far. Unique story telling 5/5 characters are lovable and easy to follow and they seem human 5/5 world is chaotic and fun to read The story is engaging with a wonderful premise that would give you a sense of fantasy much more in a sense of realism with the fact that dinosaurs are included. It has characters who have personalities that would make them feel essential to story and make them feel as if they were allive. Overall, I would recommend this book as something that would interest me and I hope others would as well.
The story seems really interesting and it gets interesting as well. Writing style is good and characters are cool. Everyone who loves fantasy should give this book a try.
The story has potential when it comes to system, so as the world background it goes well with the system and lore of this novel. Seems interesting would read more about it
A truly captivating narrative that piques interest right from the start. While it beautifully draws inspiration from the Isekai trope, it presents a distinct and intriguing take that sets it apart. The storytelling is immersive and leaves one yearning for more.
Interesting story and and really cool characters! Especially the main character, i hope you continiue your great work so i can read more of this amazing story!
The quality of writing might need a little tweaking but the story is amazing, the new additions to dinosaurs and isekai is kinda not new but it still gives a new profound idea on what it could be. Very nice novel! Keep up the good work.
It is a new kind of novel that amazes me it could be cohesive and entertaining, the characters have distinct personalities and the story gets better as it goes. Overall I recommend this book.
The story is refreshing with new things that would be considered such as the shopping system or at least Dinosaurs. It isn't something that I would expect to be part of together, I didn't what my expectations were but it was certainly fun reading this novel.
Wonderful story and written very well. Characters are great and the pacing too. Must read story.
Hello! Good day! I am an aspiring author, in this story, I would like to bring you into a world full of weird fantasies...and dinosaurs. The thought of dinosaurs and this shopping system came up to my head while I was taking a shower. It was a random idea so please bear with me, to start. This novel was inspired by my love for dinosaurs and interest in these wonderful, amazing creatures. The whole idea of these creatures walking the Earth once intrigued me, sadly they don't, not anymore. The dinosaurs in this novel would generally be the most talked about/known among people to make others intrigued and understand. Disclaimer, I am not an expert, nor that all-knowing about dinosaurs I just have an interest. So don't expect too much data knowledge that would be incorporated, but, I will include facts that would make them interesting. The story would generally be around dinosaurs but I don't want my main character to quickly attain other dinosaurs, which is kind of a stretch considering the few chapters, however, it would be later said in the novel as to why he would get this and how he can quickly garner points but for now, with the lacking chapters I would suggest patience until I posted sufficient chapters. There will of course be a limit to how many dinosaurs that I would use but for now I have a few that would be used in the laters part. But if anyone reading this would want to see a dinosaur used in the story please feel free to give suggestions on what you want. Now, to give a little hint of background on the story and how it will be cohesive and transformed let me ask one question. Have you ever thought about how society in the old times would be if dinosaurs were present, logistics, wars, and everyday life? How would they have changed?
This story is quite refreshing, writing needs a bit of improvement but overall, I like it! totally saving this(≧◡≦)
50 Chapter Milestone So Good day Dinosaurs, I am the author (well duh) and I just want to share that I appreciate all your support and your comments regarding my mistakes and other helpful incites that allowed me to grow as an author and improve my writing. Present situation, I will be frank there will be days that I will not upload and there are days that I will, I hope and beg that you please understand if the situation arises to such a degree of upload lag between days. I am now experiencing the difficulties of life and I am preparing myself to move forward in the guise that I would overcome those trials in life. I will continue to improve my writing and will actually try various writing styles and see how I adjust to them and how I can incorporate them. Enough about me and my silly redundancies. Let us talk about the story. The 50th chapter will mark the ending of the first arc of the novel which would be about Arthas fighting off that creature, following in The next arc will be situated around the school. Which means School Arc! Expect this to be slow as I would incorporate a lot of school aspects to try and make it feel as natural as I can, There would be a lot of familiarities and some twists would be given. Furthermore, the story would only expand as new dinosaurs, and rivals might sprout from the ground and make things harder for our not-so-loving responsibility main character. As a final message, I ask that you be patient if the time comes that I have stopped uploading, however, I will say when I shall have difficulties for that particular day/week. Thank you Dinosaurs for all your support and suggestions.
Good story line very different but is not for me as a audiobook listener I gave after chapter 5 lol to much === almost every chapter [img=In your face]😭😭😭
I really enjoyed it. It might be my love for dinosaurs but it’s definitely a good novel.
If he doesn’t find a blue sword and starts summoning undead I will be disappointed :p
The story of the novel has an interesting story of trying to restore the Mesozoic Era with the use of the ‘System’. Your typical reincarnation story with sprinkles on top; potentially good with a comedic side. I have high expectations and excited to further see your works. Definitely suggest people interested in dinosaurs to read!
This is an early review, but overall, i think the novel's pretty good, you can tell the author has put in a lot of work into this to make it stand out, and it certainly does. The writing style is light hearted and really easy to read, so i think with just a bit of editing, this could become much better.
Hello, Good Morning, Afternoon, and Evening. Update: For the first 2 weeks or so I have done 2 chapters per day but for the next week I would only post 1 chapter per day as I would find it difficult to create novel chapters. I am sorry for being incapable of doing balance but I hope you can understand. School is out and I am near to graduation, and I need to focus, things would be hectic if I try to continue with how stable two chapters per day would be. I hope my dear readers can understand. In return, I would provide you guys with chapters that would fulfill your imagination and provide chapters that would be of quality. Thank you for understanding, and I would try my best to return to my usual schedule of 2 chaps per day but until then, Thank you.
The book introduced a new concept in the Isekai themed story that makes the story development quite interesting. The system used in the story is easy to understand and has the potential to be expanded to make the story more interesting. Overall this book has new ideas that would attract readers who got tired in reading Isekai themed story m
The characters are well-written, and it has a good story pace. However, the story can be a bit repetitive due to the isekai and system elements. Nonetheless, the author has clearly put in a commendable effort to ensure that this does not negatively impact their storytelling and writing. It's a 5/5 overall, definitely a good read for readers who enjoy isekai genre.
Good Good Good. I wrote triple good! The Characters have felt alive and the Story is good . The characters are pretty nice. I found myself enjoying this, having a few moments of my own. There were very little grammar errors but nothing notable, The Quality is good and I expect to be reading more of this. Many will enjoy this story, it's quite Unique.
Overall the first few chapters were interesting they had a good hook to keep readers intrigued, but the premise itself isn't particularly revolutionary. The quality of writing is quite high, with not very many grammatical errors, the word choice is good, the characters so far feel fleshed out to an extent, a good read, so far a solid 4.5
Absolutely loved reading this! I found some parts to be comedic. A refreshing development in this genre. Side note, the cover of the book is fire.
ITS SO NICE RAHHHHHHHH I FEEL LIKE A DINOSAUR! Honestly one of the more newer and exciting content ive read so far. It delivers multiple genres/ideas into one in a very clever way and thays what I really like about this stuff, its diversity in media. Yeahhh! RAHHHHHHHH!
Amazing story, I enjoyed it so much, my best read upto so far, hope you will continue this. I love this novel. release many chapter soon as possible,
Just hitting chapter 18 and wow, all I can say is this book is a most read for any new book readers 5/5 writing quality that has improved a lot 5/5 update pace! Can’t wait for more chapters though 5/5 story dev so far. Unique story telling 5/5 characters are lovable and easy to follow and they seem human 5/5 world is chaotic and fun to read The story is engaging with a wonderful premise that would give you a sense of fantasy much more in a sense of realism with the fact that dinosaurs are included. It has characters who have personalities that would make them feel essential to story and make them feel as if they were allive. Overall, I would recommend this book as something that would interest me and I hope others would as well.
The story seems really interesting and it gets interesting as well. Writing style is good and characters are cool. Everyone who loves fantasy should give this book a try.
The story has potential when it comes to system, so as the world background it goes well with the system and lore of this novel. Seems interesting would read more about it
A truly captivating narrative that piques interest right from the start. While it beautifully draws inspiration from the Isekai trope, it presents a distinct and intriguing take that sets it apart. The storytelling is immersive and leaves one yearning for more.
Interesting story and and really cool characters! Especially the main character, i hope you continiue your great work so i can read more of this amazing story!
The quality of writing might need a little tweaking but the story is amazing, the new additions to dinosaurs and isekai is kinda not new but it still gives a new profound idea on what it could be. Very nice novel! Keep up the good work.
It is a new kind of novel that amazes me it could be cohesive and entertaining, the characters have distinct personalities and the story gets better as it goes. Overall I recommend this book.
The story is refreshing with new things that would be considered such as the shopping system or at least Dinosaurs. It isn't something that I would expect to be part of together, I didn't what my expectations were but it was certainly fun reading this novel.
Wonderful story and written very well. Characters are great and the pacing too. Must read story.
Hello! Good day! I am an aspiring author, in this story, I would like to bring you into a world full of weird fantasies...and dinosaurs. The thought of dinosaurs and this shopping system came up to my head while I was taking a shower. It was a random idea so please bear with me, to start. This novel was inspired by my love for dinosaurs and interest in these wonderful, amazing creatures. The whole idea of these creatures walking the Earth once intrigued me, sadly they don't, not anymore. The dinosaurs in this novel would generally be the most talked about/known among people to make others intrigued and understand. Disclaimer, I am not an expert, nor that all-knowing about dinosaurs I just have an interest. So don't expect too much data knowledge that would be incorporated, but, I will include facts that would make them interesting. The story would generally be around dinosaurs but I don't want my main character to quickly attain other dinosaurs, which is kind of a stretch considering the few chapters, however, it would be later said in the novel as to why he would get this and how he can quickly garner points but for now, with the lacking chapters I would suggest patience until I posted sufficient chapters. There will of course be a limit to how many dinosaurs that I would use but for now I have a few that would be used in the laters part. But if anyone reading this would want to see a dinosaur used in the story please feel free to give suggestions on what you want. Now, to give a little hint of background on the story and how it will be cohesive and transformed let me ask one question. Have you ever thought about how society in the old times would be if dinosaurs were present, logistics, wars, and everyday life? How would they have changed?
This story is quite refreshing, writing needs a bit of improvement but overall, I like it! totally saving this(≧◡≦)
50 Chapter Milestone So Good day Dinosaurs, I am the author (well duh) and I just want to share that I appreciate all your support and your comments regarding my mistakes and other helpful incites that allowed me to grow as an author and improve my writing. Present situation, I will be frank there will be days that I will not upload and there are days that I will, I hope and beg that you please understand if the situation arises to such a degree of upload lag between days. I am now experiencing the difficulties of life and I am preparing myself to move forward in the guise that I would overcome those trials in life. I will continue to improve my writing and will actually try various writing styles and see how I adjust to them and how I can incorporate them. Enough about me and my silly redundancies. Let us talk about the story. The 50th chapter will mark the ending of the first arc of the novel which would be about Arthas fighting off that creature, following in The next arc will be situated around the school. Which means School Arc! Expect this to be slow as I would incorporate a lot of school aspects to try and make it feel as natural as I can, There would be a lot of familiarities and some twists would be given. Furthermore, the story would only expand as new dinosaurs, and rivals might sprout from the ground and make things harder for our not-so-loving responsibility main character. As a final message, I ask that you be patient if the time comes that I have stopped uploading, however, I will say when I shall have difficulties for that particular day/week. Thank you Dinosaurs for all your support and suggestions.