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piece of advice, prolly not an advice but a logical thing to do, work on you sypnosis, it sucks, with how lazy it is potential reader's wont be interested. I don't know what going on other than building a harem in the apocalypse? then what? with how this is going this will prolly end up being dropped by you because of how poor the reach for audience.
Machine gun go: BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
piece of advice, prolly not an advice but a logical thing to do, work on you sypnosis, it sucks, with how lazy it is potential reader's wont be interested. I don't know what going on other than building a harem in the apocalypse? then what? with how this is going this will prolly end up being dropped by you because of how poor the reach for audience.
Machine gun go: BRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR
excellent storyline wish it was longer but overall a really great story.