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im not actually gonna read the novel, by what the synopsis said this is basically an OP slice of life 'after story', so despite it matching everything i could ever ask for when thinking of a perfect female mc, i already know that things are gonna get boring not even 10 chapters into the work. the reason for my rating is mainly because the author basically described my ideal female mc (no romance is the key)
Author, please. Could you have another free chapter 1day like yesterday. I like to read your novel. It got chill vibe. Please, author.
I don't really want to bash on this book, but it doesn't really click with me. Sure, it is an OP mc, and sure it is a woman instead of a man, but my main issue is about what action gets skipped and summarized and what doesn't. Like we get a full description of all 20 bosses of a floor, and then we skip straight to "she defeated them all", not even the fight but after the conclusion. The story tends to just skip ahead every encounter leaving just summaries. I had some hope with the gods fight but it just dialed right back in when we follow the MC, exposition details on stuff that never seems even relevant a chapter later and action or drama skipped just afterwards. I really wanted to like this, but at chapter 55 (20ish paid chapters) I just give up.
Writing Quality, readable. There're a lot of minor mistakes but it's better than some books that you have to literally guess what's being said. Story Development, Great. I really like the development so far. Some scenes are awkward but it's great overall. There were also some parts that are irrational but hey, it's fantasy. Character Design, I really liked how her feelings were portrayed after killing the Final boss. What's making it hard for me to like her is that she's contradicting herself a lot. She wanted to be surprised but then she asked the goddesses about the dungeon. There were more but I can't remember as of the moment. Updating Stability, I only started reading a few hours ago so I don't really know, I'll just rate it 5. World Background, Great. It was explained well before she really embarked on her journey. I hope you can improve the writing quality. I suggest you get an editor, only if you have the resources.
I gotta say. I absolutely adore this novel. Been looking for a no stress slice of life book that’s entertaining. Author thank you for making my day ❤️ 10/10
Well, I haven't read it yet, but I hope it's not yuri like every other FMC. ......................................................................................................... The dots are for WN new stupid (but useful) minimum character count count
Ok so I'm writing this from chapter 5Writing Quality: It's sadly very poor and I can barely get through a single sentence without having to think hard on what you wanted to insinuate. There are many errors where there are words that were used in the wrong context or were meant to be something else entirely.Story Development: It's a great premise and I find that the story is fairly interesting but my one gripe was the lack of history of the MCs previous world before it was blown up. We are basically thrown in the middle( or end) of what should be an extremely tense battle that feels more like a simple cakewalk.Character Design: Your character design is pretty good and but you may need a few more detail.Overall I think that you may want to revisit these older chapters because they are by far an annnoyance to read through causally for most and can lose you some potential readers on the first or second chapters.
YESSSSS! FINALLY! A novel with a female lead with No Yuri 😭 I appreciate your steadfast heart and mind for not being moved by the horniness of this App. It's a great novel and I would highly recommend you read it. ✨
Hey, author-san here after writing more than 100 chapters. If you all have any questions feel free to ask here. I will answer. This is my first ever novel and I never thought that I would be able to reach 100 chapters. Thanks for all the support. I really appreciate it a lot. (ノT＿T)ノ ＾┻━┻
I really like this kind of novel however there's a lot of grammar mistakes fortunately it's readable and don't cause me a lot of headaches
is this going to have romance if so please a yuri,not fan of straight romance if the mc is female
I like how the protagonist doesn't always defend everyone. I like ruthless characters a lot but sometimes the protagonists are comically ruthless which I hate. But here she had perfect balance between ruthlessness and generosity. The update efficiency is also very good. I will like to see more about this world and Elena's past world. So please keep up the good work.
I just started reading this story not expecting much as most of the stories with female MC became very bland over time. But I glad after reading till chapter 40. I like the MC a lot. Other characters of the stoty are also very well written. I'm looking forward to the world building too.
This is getting amazing. It have a very comfy pace to it. Please keep this up. I'm really enjoying it so much. This is very awesome. 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰
Awesome novel. Please keep it up. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤ ❤❤ ❤❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
I am a big fan of female MC. I am big fan of Overpowered MC. I'm also a big fan of fantasy rpg type stories. So, everything in this novel is something I enjoy. I am really loving this. Please upload more chapters as I can not wait for more.
I'm enjoying the novel so far. Keep up the good work. I hope that Elena's adventurers starts very soon. I'm looking forward to it. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
I'm really enjoying the novel. I want more novel with female protagonist. I am really looking forward to Elena's future development. The characters introduced so far are interesting.
I am very big fan of OP protagonist. Here the protagonist does look very strong. I want to see her decimate opponent. It will be very fun to see her doing that. I want more and more chapters. And can you write in 3rd person POV instead of st person. It feels weird somehow. Please upload faster. Thank you...
The starting is looking good. Can't wait for the start of her adventure. I am really enjoying the female MC. I really need more chapters. I still can not judge the novel as I don't have enough content. I always like OP character and she is looking hella strong. Please continue wrong the novel.
It starts off mostly good, but after a while it starts just telling you what’s happening, not showing. As a result, it becomes extremely monotonous to read, along with boring, since there’s less engaging details. Usually books do the opposite, as new writers get better as time goes on, so my guess is the author got bored and is continuing for contract/money reasons while putting in less effort.
im not actually gonna read the novel, by what the synopsis said this is basically an OP slice of life 'after story', so despite it matching everything i could ever ask for when thinking of a perfect female mc, i already know that things are gonna get boring not even 10 chapters into the work. the reason for my rating is mainly because the author basically described my ideal female mc (no romance is the key)
Author, please. Could you have another free chapter 1day like yesterday. I like to read your novel. It got chill vibe. Please, author.
I don't really want to bash on this book, but it doesn't really click with me. Sure, it is an OP mc, and sure it is a woman instead of a man, but my main issue is about what action gets skipped and summarized and what doesn't. Like we get a full description of all 20 bosses of a floor, and then we skip straight to "she defeated them all", not even the fight but after the conclusion. The story tends to just skip ahead every encounter leaving just summaries. I had some hope with the gods fight but it just dialed right back in when we follow the MC, exposition details on stuff that never seems even relevant a chapter later and action or drama skipped just afterwards. I really wanted to like this, but at chapter 55 (20ish paid chapters) I just give up.
Writing Quality, readable. There're a lot of minor mistakes but it's better than some books that you have to literally guess what's being said. Story Development, Great. I really like the development so far. Some scenes are awkward but it's great overall. There were also some parts that are irrational but hey, it's fantasy. Character Design, I really liked how her feelings were portrayed after killing the Final boss. What's making it hard for me to like her is that she's contradicting herself a lot. She wanted to be surprised but then she asked the goddesses about the dungeon. There were more but I can't remember as of the moment. Updating Stability, I only started reading a few hours ago so I don't really know, I'll just rate it 5. World Background, Great. It was explained well before she really embarked on her journey. I hope you can improve the writing quality. I suggest you get an editor, only if you have the resources.
I gotta say. I absolutely adore this novel. Been looking for a no stress slice of life book that’s entertaining. Author thank you for making my day ❤️ 10/10
Well, I haven't read it yet, but I hope it's not yuri like every other FMC. ......................................................................................................... The dots are for WN new stupid (but useful) minimum character count count
Ok so I'm writing this from chapter 5Writing Quality: It's sadly very poor and I can barely get through a single sentence without having to think hard on what you wanted to insinuate. There are many errors where there are words that were used in the wrong context or were meant to be something else entirely.Story Development: It's a great premise and I find that the story is fairly interesting but my one gripe was the lack of history of the MCs previous world before it was blown up. We are basically thrown in the middle( or end) of what should be an extremely tense battle that feels more like a simple cakewalk.Character Design: Your character design is pretty good and but you may need a few more detail.Overall I think that you may want to revisit these older chapters because they are by far an annnoyance to read through causally for most and can lose you some potential readers on the first or second chapters.
YESSSSS! FINALLY! A novel with a female lead with No Yuri 😭 I appreciate your steadfast heart and mind for not being moved by the horniness of this App. It's a great novel and I would highly recommend you read it. ✨
Hey, author-san here after writing more than 100 chapters. If you all have any questions feel free to ask here. I will answer. This is my first ever novel and I never thought that I would be able to reach 100 chapters. Thanks for all the support. I really appreciate it a lot. (ノT＿T)ノ ＾┻━┻
I really like this kind of novel however there's a lot of grammar mistakes fortunately it's readable and don't cause me a lot of headaches
is this going to have romance if so please a yuri,not fan of straight romance if the mc is female
I like how the protagonist doesn't always defend everyone. I like ruthless characters a lot but sometimes the protagonists are comically ruthless which I hate. But here she had perfect balance between ruthlessness and generosity. The update efficiency is also very good. I will like to see more about this world and Elena's past world. So please keep up the good work.
I just started reading this story not expecting much as most of the stories with female MC became very bland over time. But I glad after reading till chapter 40. I like the MC a lot. Other characters of the stoty are also very well written. I'm looking forward to the world building too.
This is getting amazing. It have a very comfy pace to it. Please keep this up. I'm really enjoying it so much. This is very awesome. 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰 🥰
Awesome novel. Please keep it up. ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤ ❤❤ ❤❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤ ❤
I am a big fan of female MC. I am big fan of Overpowered MC. I'm also a big fan of fantasy rpg type stories. So, everything in this novel is something I enjoy. I am really loving this. Please upload more chapters as I can not wait for more.
I'm enjoying the novel so far. Keep up the good work. I hope that Elena's adventurers starts very soon. I'm looking forward to it. _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _
I'm really enjoying the novel. I want more novel with female protagonist. I am really looking forward to Elena's future development. The characters introduced so far are interesting.
I am very big fan of OP protagonist. Here the protagonist does look very strong. I want to see her decimate opponent. It will be very fun to see her doing that. I want more and more chapters. And can you write in 3rd person POV instead of st person. It feels weird somehow. Please upload faster. Thank you...
The starting is looking good. Can't wait for the start of her adventure. I am really enjoying the female MC. I really need more chapters. I still can not judge the novel as I don't have enough content. I always like OP character and she is looking hella strong. Please continue wrong the novel.
It starts off mostly good, but after a while it starts just telling you what’s happening, not showing. As a result, it becomes extremely monotonous to read, along with boring, since there’s less engaging details. Usually books do the opposite, as new writers get better as time goes on, so my guess is the author got bored and is continuing for contract/money reasons while putting in less effort.