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liked it until MC started giving away creative control to literal strangers and started being hyped about being a normal player in the world and losing the right to make large decisions about the world or make large changes basically his creator advantage with the benefit that he can revive. so if you're looking for a reincarnation into a fantasy world novel then try it out but If you're looking for a world creation novel drop it
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Anyone els really annoyed how the wife was basically Sold off and then forgotten about mostly after the starting bit . feels really S# itty
Perhaps one of the forbidden things to do in web novel is locking chapters below chapter 30, let alone chapter 5 onwards. instant skip..
My issue so far is that the author tells us the things dude is planning when he plans it and when he tells the system which is kinda redundant cuz he’s explaining the same things but I’m like 20 chapters in so far
This isn’t worth pirating, authour must not want any positive attention on his novel by locking chaps so early.
I gave you this rating because your pay wall isn’t even after 20 chapters it’s immediate I couldn’t get a grasp of anything I don’t even know if I really want to continue reading this now so this is the rating you’ll get. Thanks for the 4 free chapters tho they made life a little less boring for me in those moments
locked at 5, up to 5 is the equivlent of the result of defacation, of after 5 must be the same. NOT RECOMMENDED. This is a bad story, locked at 5, up to 5 is the equivlent of the result of defacation, of after 5 must be the same. NOT RECOMMENDED. This is a bad story,
mc can create world is basically a god for the world he created, author can do so much with this novel but has a stupid idea to treat the world as a game bring people from earth to play the game treat living beings from his world as npc, life and everything just pops up suddenly no solid world background so disappointed with this novel.
what a money grabbing novel locking at chapter 5 hah what fkng farce jshshshhsshhehehdbhdhehddygfdrrtgfrrdffvuggugugufucucucugguvugugug
I haven’t read it yet but I love the “I become god” type of stories and I hope that he gets transmigrated people
so far i like the concept. though the mc makes some decisions i certainly wouldnt have, the character isnt flawless and has room for growth. i am still in the very early chapters but it is a unique enough concept without anything aggregious. author responds to comments without ruining the story, which is also a plus. this seems to be a novel where the main character does the world building, not just explore it, which is pretty unique. the chapters are locked early unfortunately, but there is nothing that can be done about that. locking chapters cannot be undone. i may update the review when i get caught up to the latest chapter.
mc is more like a game creator than a world god. The mc tried so hard to make it realistic enough, but i guess his view on what is realistic is different, The mc creates a fantasy world, yes, but it's a fantasy game with no lore or myts, legends and religions. funny thing is that the mc put blacksmits in it where you can get your items from monster drops. the mc might as well change the name of his world to genesis online.
DO NOT READ!!! too slow pace, too weak mc, it's okay to be weak at start but it's too much, his character was too weak, can't decide on someone like revenge and overshadowed by other to the point it was boring .
the author literally became a god of a world and then started treating his world like a game so much so that he wants to add players it's just a weird concept and I don't like it
I think this novel is really interesting to me. The concept of being a god of a world and creating the world's history is something I don't find very often, at least. I think it's off to a good start right now (currently on ch8). and I would like to wait for more chapters before I write a better review so I'll give it 4⭐ right now ^_^
liked it until MC started giving away creative control to literal strangers and started being hyped about being a normal player in the world and losing the right to make large decisions about the world or make large changes basically his creator advantage with the benefit that he can revive. so if you're looking for a reincarnation into a fantasy world novel then try it out but If you're looking for a world creation novel drop it
揭示劇透 Anyone els really annoyed how the wife was basically Sold off and then forgotten about mostly after the starting bit . feels really S# itty
Perhaps one of the forbidden things to do in web novel is locking chapters below chapter 30, let alone chapter 5 onwards. instant skip..
My issue so far is that the author tells us the things dude is planning when he plans it and when he tells the system which is kinda redundant cuz he’s explaining the same things but I’m like 20 chapters in so far
This isn’t worth pirating, authour must not want any positive attention on his novel by locking chaps so early.
I gave you this rating because your pay wall isn’t even after 20 chapters it’s immediate I couldn’t get a grasp of anything I don’t even know if I really want to continue reading this now so this is the rating you’ll get. Thanks for the 4 free chapters tho they made life a little less boring for me in those moments
locked at 5, up to 5 is the equivlent of the result of defacation, of after 5 must be the same. NOT RECOMMENDED. This is a bad story, locked at 5, up to 5 is the equivlent of the result of defacation, of after 5 must be the same. NOT RECOMMENDED. This is a bad story,
mc can create world is basically a god for the world he created, author can do so much with this novel but has a stupid idea to treat the world as a game bring people from earth to play the game treat living beings from his world as npc, life and everything just pops up suddenly no solid world background so disappointed with this novel.
what a money grabbing novel locking at chapter 5 hah what fkng farce jshshshhsshhehehdbhdhehddygfdrrtgfrrdffvuggugugufucucucugguvugugug
I haven’t read it yet but I love the “I become god” type of stories and I hope that he gets transmigrated people
so far i like the concept. though the mc makes some decisions i certainly wouldnt have, the character isnt flawless and has room for growth. i am still in the very early chapters but it is a unique enough concept without anything aggregious. author responds to comments without ruining the story, which is also a plus. this seems to be a novel where the main character does the world building, not just explore it, which is pretty unique. the chapters are locked early unfortunately, but there is nothing that can be done about that. locking chapters cannot be undone. i may update the review when i get caught up to the latest chapter.
mc is more like a game creator than a world god. The mc tried so hard to make it realistic enough, but i guess his view on what is realistic is different, The mc creates a fantasy world, yes, but it's a fantasy game with no lore or myts, legends and religions. funny thing is that the mc put blacksmits in it where you can get your items from monster drops. the mc might as well change the name of his world to genesis online.
DO NOT READ!!! too slow pace, too weak mc, it's okay to be weak at start but it's too much, his character was too weak, can't decide on someone like revenge and overshadowed by other to the point it was boring .
the author literally became a god of a world and then started treating his world like a game so much so that he wants to add players it's just a weird concept and I don't like it
I think this novel is really interesting to me. The concept of being a god of a world and creating the world's history is something I don't find very often, at least. I think it's off to a good start right now (currently on ch8). and I would like to wait for more chapters before I write a better review so I'll give it 4⭐ right now ^_^