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This story still amazes me on a personal level with the Fox Spirit, Military Vets, lingo and training practices (not as detailed as I'd like, but with good overall explanation.) 'Dead Check Girl' and 'Shotgun loli' hit somewhere close to home. I really like the FL's take on pragmatic approaches towards prison societal procedures and I adore how Yang is also morally pragmatic about it with some struggle. 'LONG LIVE TANG' is still my motto, however, I'm not really into multiple partners, my kid would kill me if I had such a fetish. My job is rigorous, time consuming with lots of physical training for the boys, away from home for long period of time, and sometimes, commission jobs. My only mental break sometimes is reading, funny reads, amusing reads, brainy reads or reads that get my creative painting going. This story is nice, it hits spots where I wish regulations would ease up or if i had FL's monetary power or at least be her subordinate, I'd enjoy life more. Grammatically, it does need work, however, writers usually struggle monetarily because, you know, life happens. However, the literary aspect in terms of plot and direction is well thought out, so is the humor dialogue and action of different characters. I never give reviews or leave comments, but this story hit a satisfying spot. As a bibliophile, I like this story very much.
It will be good if the Qingyu, tang ziyi and xiao yue were in a romantic relationship as the three of them started their journey in this world together rather than friendship or sisterhood. So author try to change their relationship to lovers it will be interesting ....
pretty solid. could be better but I don't know what it needs to be better. pretty average solid read there isn't much else to say. I liked it
loving this novel, it has great flow and character development. The action and setup sequences are very well done.
Los nombres chinos son confusos, demasiadas explicaciones innecesarias, MC patético , ninguna imagen de ningún personaje lo que lo hace más confuso por qué no puedo ponerle caras a los personajes , sistema extremadamente molesto, MC parece que nunca interactuó con una mujer en su anterior vida
the story is nice definitely worth giving it a shot .................................................................................................
A good read comprising numerous tags. Sometimes slow, sometimes fast...quite to my liking.
I love how the author carries the mood of the scenes. It feels like I am watching a movie. The tensions, the speed, the characters' emotions... all displayed so openly yet so mysterious. 13/10 AUTHOR-nim.
pretty boring. ......................................................................................................................................
The story has a really good plot and character development do I'm gonna give it 5 stars [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Seen in many books, I don't know if it's a tradition but very few readers wrote reviews. I'll give myself 5 stars for a good rating obviously. But this section is more to answer interested readers' inquiries. FAQ sections. Politics, business, and actions are incorporated in this book where Ling Qingyu, our protagonist, must go up the ladder, building her strong empire. The world background resembled our Earth's continents because I don't wanna waste my braincell. Amusing small jokes within the context to liven up the atmosphere. No abusing of the characters. Reading is for enjoyment not for torture, though I can't promise for the small minor ones. Yuri's theme is more of a secondary in this book. I'll try to make the flow natural. Sisterhood is more prevalent in the plot. The system is more like her guardian angel to guide her subtly and train Ling Qingyu to a powerhouse. Feel free to ask what you wanna know and I'll reply as soon as I can. As for grammar, I can only ask for forgiveness.
This story still amazes me on a personal level with the Fox Spirit, Military Vets, lingo and training practices (not as detailed as I'd like, but with good overall explanation.) 'Dead Check Girl' and 'Shotgun loli' hit somewhere close to home. I really like the FL's take on pragmatic approaches towards prison societal procedures and I adore how Yang is also morally pragmatic about it with some struggle. 'LONG LIVE TANG' is still my motto, however, I'm not really into multiple partners, my kid would kill me if I had such a fetish. My job is rigorous, time consuming with lots of physical training for the boys, away from home for long period of time, and sometimes, commission jobs. My only mental break sometimes is reading, funny reads, amusing reads, brainy reads or reads that get my creative painting going. This story is nice, it hits spots where I wish regulations would ease up or if i had FL's monetary power or at least be her subordinate, I'd enjoy life more. Grammatically, it does need work, however, writers usually struggle monetarily because, you know, life happens. However, the literary aspect in terms of plot and direction is well thought out, so is the humor dialogue and action of different characters. I never give reviews or leave comments, but this story hit a satisfying spot. As a bibliophile, I like this story very much.
It will be good if the Qingyu, tang ziyi and xiao yue were in a romantic relationship as the three of them started their journey in this world together rather than friendship or sisterhood. So author try to change their relationship to lovers it will be interesting ....
pretty solid. could be better but I don't know what it needs to be better. pretty average solid read there isn't much else to say. I liked it
loving this novel, it has great flow and character development. The action and setup sequences are very well done.
Los nombres chinos son confusos, demasiadas explicaciones innecesarias, MC patético , ninguna imagen de ningún personaje lo que lo hace más confuso por qué no puedo ponerle caras a los personajes , sistema extremadamente molesto, MC parece que nunca interactuó con una mujer en su anterior vida
the story is nice definitely worth giving it a shot .................................................................................................
A good read comprising numerous tags. Sometimes slow, sometimes fast...quite to my liking.
I love how the author carries the mood of the scenes. It feels like I am watching a movie. The tensions, the speed, the characters' emotions... all displayed so openly yet so mysterious. 13/10 AUTHOR-nim.
pretty boring. ......................................................................................................................................
The story has a really good plot and character development do I'm gonna give it 5 stars [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Seen in many books, I don't know if it's a tradition but very few readers wrote reviews. I'll give myself 5 stars for a good rating obviously. But this section is more to answer interested readers' inquiries. FAQ sections. Politics, business, and actions are incorporated in this book where Ling Qingyu, our protagonist, must go up the ladder, building her strong empire. The world background resembled our Earth's continents because I don't wanna waste my braincell. Amusing small jokes within the context to liven up the atmosphere. No abusing of the characters. Reading is for enjoyment not for torture, though I can't promise for the small minor ones. Yuri's theme is more of a secondary in this book. I'll try to make the flow natural. Sisterhood is more prevalent in the plot. The system is more like her guardian angel to guide her subtly and train Ling Qingyu to a powerhouse. Feel free to ask what you wanna know and I'll reply as soon as I can. As for grammar, I can only ask for forgiveness.