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It is a great with some interesting characters and good overall story telling.It would be great if the length of the chapters were to be increase.It's brilliant work
Love it soo much but it's for boys Please make more romantic novels it would really be nice for us Thanks 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 on my new 🆕
Loved how it started out, the anticipation of the game and the mc's excitement building up as time passes. The author also possesses good descriptive ability. It would be nice if the chapters were longer and we had a deeper glimpse into the mc's interactions.
It is a great with some interesting characters and good overall story telling.It would be great if the length of the chapters were to be increase.It's brilliant work
Love it soo much but it's for boys Please make more romantic novels it would really be nice for us Thanks 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍 on my new 🆕
Loved how it started out, the anticipation of the game and the mc's excitement building up as time passes. The author also possesses good descriptive ability. It would be nice if the chapters were longer and we had a deeper glimpse into the mc's interactions.