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this story is great someone having AFO in Naruto was something I thought of but i could never write a story. This is A masterpiece so far keep doing your thing
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this story is great someone having AFO in Naruto was something I thought of but i could never write a story. This is A masterpiece so far keep doing your thing
Love it it has a good story it is very detail it is unique