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Very good worth your try 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
well it's a nice read if you want to read just to pass time mc is a simp literally he kills male characters even if that will bring him numerous troubles some even bringing him to near death but when female characters harm him or even try to kill him he reasons with them this is blatant discrimination and mc acts silly and doesn't seem to care about his life when he made grand promises to himself during the start
Need to post more chapters Since the story is good but again the translation can be improved
No começo parece promissor, mas depois da metade, mais ou menos, se torna cansativo. O excesso cômico, a taradez e a senvergonhice são completamente fora de serie, chega a ser estranho. Se vc gosta daquele mc que tem sistema tarado, é com você. Leia, se divirta e entre em depressão no processo.
the story is very good and have a great understanding of characters .pls update the next chapters...👌🤟
Just chinese novels in general where the mc makes enemies everywhere and lots of face slapping~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ .
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I hope you don't drop this[img=recommend]There are currently 648 chaps in the raws. Too bad I cant read it in qidian.[img=faceslap]
honestly I didn't like it, I think the MC had everything on a plate in the first 3 chapters and I don't feel any challenge at all that involves me in the plot...
Very Interesting take on the BTTH world, would love to see ye feng and xiao yan's interactions in the future and kindly keep posting more chapters
Отчёт за неделю : 67 побед подряд на арене, 363 уровень в лабиринте, два тирана(почти дубликат фантома получил) за 617 билетов, все драконы из сундука, дракона в акции босса не взял. Очень хорошая неделя
Hello Author, how can I read orginal novel full ? Is there any way to read original novel free in India. I got interested in this novel but it's late update everyday only one chapter? That's why very curious about the story is there any way to read orginal in English
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Gracias por el gran trabajo autor-san👍 espero continúes con esta obra!!!👌👌😁 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
a good story, for the moment I like Mc ruthless against his enemies and kills them directly but I prefer that the mc be a little more proactive with woman but at least he does not simp on women and becomes their dog except a little for medusa but she is too much strong for him right now and I understand why he will do this (I want my bonus chapter!)
So far, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. There he been a few BTTH f stories I have been reading recently and based on what I have read so far I rate it highly.
Muy bueno, no lo dejes ánimo 👍 saca mas capítulos ………………………………………………………………………………….::…….:…………………………………………….:::…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………
very interesting btth fanfiction i like itand please more update...[img=recommend] thanks for your hard work About the fanfic Volume 1...Writing Quality: Well translated fanfic. Author did a well job in translation adding some content of his own.Story development is good. I really liked it. Nothing seems to be rushed or forced, thats is good.Character Design: All the characters are good and nothing seems to be forced or rushed.MC is a transmigrated with a cheat system. And the system is quite good.I don't know yet ; if it copy something or maybe it's stolen but it's good.Update stability: So fas so good. 1 chapter per day without delay seems good.I hope you make it to 2 chapters per day.
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Horrible English! It’s not hard to run the translated doc through chat gpt to correct this
About the fanfic Volume 1...Writing Quality: Well translated fanfic. Author did a well job in translation adding some content of his own.Story development is good. I really liked it. Nothing seems to be rushed or forced, thats is good.Character Design: All the characters are good and nothing seems to be forced or rushed.MC is a transmigrated with a cheat system. And the system is quite good.I don't know yet ; if it copy something or maybe it's stolen but it's good.Update stability: So fas so good. 1 chapter per day without delay seems good.I hope you make it to 2 chapters per day.
very interesting btth fanfiction i like itand please more update...[img=recommend] thanks for your hard work
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Are you going to be rewriting or adding any lemons while you translate this fanfic please.
This is an unbiased review from the author. To be honest, I enjoyed the plot and the characters. Some people may dislike it simply because the main character easily receives rewards, but personally, I found the story interesting. There are numerous fights throughout the novel, and it becomes even more entertaining in the second volume with the introduction of many new characters. The power ranking system is well-developed, and the main character is stronger than his level due to the system and heavenly fire. Regarding the translation and grammar, I believe it is good enough to comprehend and enjoy the novel. [ If you come across any misspellings or errors in any of the chapters, please let me know in the comments, and I will correct them. ] Additionally, if you have trouble understanding anything, feel free to ask questions in the comments.
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Very good worth your try 😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯💯
well it's a nice read if you want to read just to pass time mc is a simp literally he kills male characters even if that will bring him numerous troubles some even bringing him to near death but when female characters harm him or even try to kill him he reasons with them this is blatant discrimination and mc acts silly and doesn't seem to care about his life when he made grand promises to himself during the start
Need to post more chapters Since the story is good but again the translation can be improved
No começo parece promissor, mas depois da metade, mais ou menos, se torna cansativo. O excesso cômico, a taradez e a senvergonhice são completamente fora de serie, chega a ser estranho. Se vc gosta daquele mc que tem sistema tarado, é com você. Leia, se divirta e entre em depressão no processo.
the story is very good and have a great understanding of characters .pls update the next chapters...👌🤟
Just chinese novels in general where the mc makes enemies everywhere and lots of face slapping~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ .
Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
I hope you don't drop this[img=recommend]There are currently 648 chaps in the raws. Too bad I cant read it in qidian.[img=faceslap]
honestly I didn't like it, I think the MC had everything on a plate in the first 3 chapters and I don't feel any challenge at all that involves me in the plot...
Very Interesting take on the BTTH world, would love to see ye feng and xiao yan's interactions in the future and kindly keep posting more chapters
Отчёт за неделю : 67 побед подряд на арене, 363 уровень в лабиринте, два тирана(почти дубликат фантома получил) за 617 билетов, все драконы из сундука, дракона в акции босса не взял. Очень хорошая неделя
Hello Author, how can I read orginal novel full ? Is there any way to read original novel free in India. I got interested in this novel but it's late update everyday only one chapter? That's why very curious about the story is there any way to read orginal in English
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Good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
Gracias por el gran trabajo autor-san👍 espero continúes con esta obra!!!👌👌😁 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
a good story, for the moment I like Mc ruthless against his enemies and kills them directly but I prefer that the mc be a little more proactive with woman but at least he does not simp on women and becomes their dog except a little for medusa but she is too much strong for him right now and I understand why he will do this (I want my bonus chapter!)
So far, I am thoroughly enjoying this story. There he been a few BTTH f stories I have been reading recently and based on what I have read so far I rate it highly.
Muy bueno, no lo dejes ánimo 👍 saca mas capítulos ………………………………………………………………………………….::…….:…………………………………………….:::…………………………………………………………………………..…………………………………………………
very interesting btth fanfiction i like itand please more update...[img=recommend] thanks for your hard work About the fanfic Volume 1...Writing Quality: Well translated fanfic. Author did a well job in translation adding some content of his own.Story development is good. I really liked it. Nothing seems to be rushed or forced, thats is good.Character Design: All the characters are good and nothing seems to be forced or rushed.MC is a transmigrated with a cheat system. And the system is quite good.I don't know yet ; if it copy something or maybe it's stolen but it's good.Update stability: So fas so good. 1 chapter per day without delay seems good.I hope you make it to 2 chapters per day.
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Horrible English! It’s not hard to run the translated doc through chat gpt to correct this
About the fanfic Volume 1...Writing Quality: Well translated fanfic. Author did a well job in translation adding some content of his own.Story development is good. I really liked it. Nothing seems to be rushed or forced, thats is good.Character Design: All the characters are good and nothing seems to be forced or rushed.MC is a transmigrated with a cheat system. And the system is quite good.I don't know yet ; if it copy something or maybe it's stolen but it's good.Update stability: So fas so good. 1 chapter per day without delay seems good.I hope you make it to 2 chapters per day.
very interesting btth fanfiction i like itand please more update...[img=recommend] thanks for your hard work
More please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please MORE please
Are you going to be rewriting or adding any lemons while you translate this fanfic please.
This is an unbiased review from the author. To be honest, I enjoyed the plot and the characters. Some people may dislike it simply because the main character easily receives rewards, but personally, I found the story interesting. There are numerous fights throughout the novel, and it becomes even more entertaining in the second volume with the introduction of many new characters. The power ranking system is well-developed, and the main character is stronger than his level due to the system and heavenly fire. Regarding the translation and grammar, I believe it is good enough to comprehend and enjoy the novel. [ If you come across any misspellings or errors in any of the chapters, please let me know in the comments, and I will correct them. ] Additionally, if you have trouble understanding anything, feel free to ask questions in the comments.