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Fantastic work. Really enjoying this book. Only wish we could have more than 2 chapters a day 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story and I am eagerly anticipating the next chapters. The way the plot is unfolding is wonderful and I am truly captivated by the development. The female lead is particularly endearing to me. :))))
more update pls. story is very interesting and want to read more so pls.update....
dear author can u do 2 updates /day please 1 chapter /day simply cannot whet my appetite 😭🥲
I am not so good at writing reviews I read all ur book I like this book please do update more thanks for the regular updates 🥰
updating seem to be slow. I could swear I read this story before but then at the same time I am not sure it's like, it's the same plot but this writer has more details and depth for the story. If author updates constantly I will be reading this novel and know I will be expectant of the chapter release.
why is it that in 1st week it was 6 chapters/week, the 2nd week 3 chapters/week ,and so on it kept reducing evry other week. please be consistent because I like this novel. 🩷🩷☺☺
Another apocalypse novel, looking forward to the story development. UPDATE, please!
is this the one mentioned in the rebirth of the bigshot? with Liraz? I am sure this is going to be a good read.
What a terrible slow burn. As of ch. 92 the MC is still weak and has almost no control over her life. The system manipulates her at every turn to use points and fall into debt, speaks half-truths and withold informations and details and works her to the ground like a slave to make her stronger, but also to make her earn money for the system. It's like a boss and a salary slave. Eg.: System: Assignment X, Reward: 100.000 points MC: Assigment accepted (like the MC has a choice, not!) System: Oops, forgot to mention 'Assignment X' needs tools to complete. Cost: 1.000.000 points MC: "#€""€%€#!! After assignment completed: System: Alert alert! Host is in debt. Penalty given. MC: What?!?!! System: Oops, forgot to mention. MC: #€%!!! While the novel is good, it's also tiring to follow a gopher MC that never gets a break to develop some character growth because she's constantly fighting to survive the ridiculous assigments that the system dishes out and the situations she lands in as a result. While I understand that the system is crucial to the MC's development and overall storyline, I fear the novel with be filled with a lot of forced humor and filler-like assignments.
Fantastic work. Really enjoying this book. Only wish we could have more than 2 chapters a day 🙏🏾🙏🏾🙏🏾
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I am thoroughly enjoying this story and I am eagerly anticipating the next chapters. The way the plot is unfolding is wonderful and I am truly captivated by the development. The female lead is particularly endearing to me. :))))
more update pls. story is very interesting and want to read more so pls.update....
dear author can u do 2 updates /day please 1 chapter /day simply cannot whet my appetite 😭🥲
I am not so good at writing reviews I read all ur book I like this book please do update more thanks for the regular updates 🥰
updating seem to be slow. I could swear I read this story before but then at the same time I am not sure it's like, it's the same plot but this writer has more details and depth for the story. If author updates constantly I will be reading this novel and know I will be expectant of the chapter release.
why is it that in 1st week it was 6 chapters/week, the 2nd week 3 chapters/week ,and so on it kept reducing evry other week. please be consistent because I like this novel. 🩷🩷☺☺
Another apocalypse novel, looking forward to the story development. UPDATE, please!
is this the one mentioned in the rebirth of the bigshot? with Liraz? I am sure this is going to be a good read.
What a terrible slow burn. As of ch. 92 the MC is still weak and has almost no control over her life. The system manipulates her at every turn to use points and fall into debt, speaks half-truths and withold informations and details and works her to the ground like a slave to make her stronger, but also to make her earn money for the system. It's like a boss and a salary slave. Eg.: System: Assignment X, Reward: 100.000 points MC: Assigment accepted (like the MC has a choice, not!) System: Oops, forgot to mention 'Assignment X' needs tools to complete. Cost: 1.000.000 points MC: "#€""€%€#!! After assignment completed: System: Alert alert! Host is in debt. Penalty given. MC: What?!?!! System: Oops, forgot to mention. MC: #€%!!! While the novel is good, it's also tiring to follow a gopher MC that never gets a break to develop some character growth because she's constantly fighting to survive the ridiculous assigments that the system dishes out and the situations she lands in as a result. While I understand that the system is crucial to the MC's development and overall storyline, I fear the novel with be filled with a lot of forced humor and filler-like assignments.