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I've been enjoying this fic since you began writing and i must say the quality has improved greatly. i assume you slowed down to properly write it out? it doesn't seem to be as rushed as before.
La historia no es mala, pero tiene el problema de tener un protagonista con complejo de héroe es estúpido y con muchos super poderes que rompen la realidad. Eso no sería un problema si lo escribiera un equipo de decenas de escritores y editores profesionales, sin embargo el autor no es un escritor profesional y no consigue lograr juntar al protagonista y los poderes. Entonces, para la próxima novela que escribar el autor, tiene que desarrollar la historia, limitar los super poderes en su cuerpo a 5 o menos (eso incluye: sistemas, inventario, viaje dimensional) y eliminar cualquier referencia a que él es un Dios o una divinidad.
When will be the next chapter coming iam waiting for the next chapter for last two weeks please release next chapters or do a mass release
hey man it's good work it's interesting story and please release more chapter in fast and furious ark and go to mcu again also go to mummy world, underworld,and keep posting new chapter
story background is good ,ability is really good, just the story is moving fast and in a very direct manner,
I like this fanficbut can you please write a separate novel for Indian part that we have skipped please 🙏
it seems interesting I wonder if you can do underworld the first one or the third one
I've been enjoying this fic since you began writing and i must say the quality has improved greatly. i assume you slowed down to properly write it out? it doesn't seem to be as rushed as before.
La historia no es mala, pero tiene el problema de tener un protagonista con complejo de héroe es estúpido y con muchos super poderes que rompen la realidad. Eso no sería un problema si lo escribiera un equipo de decenas de escritores y editores profesionales, sin embargo el autor no es un escritor profesional y no consigue lograr juntar al protagonista y los poderes. Entonces, para la próxima novela que escribar el autor, tiene que desarrollar la historia, limitar los super poderes en su cuerpo a 5 o menos (eso incluye: sistemas, inventario, viaje dimensional) y eliminar cualquier referencia a que él es un Dios o una divinidad.
When will be the next chapter coming iam waiting for the next chapter for last two weeks please release next chapters or do a mass release
hey man it's good work it's interesting story and please release more chapter in fast and furious ark and go to mcu again also go to mummy world, underworld,and keep posting new chapter
story background is good ,ability is really good, just the story is moving fast and in a very direct manner,
I like this fanficbut can you please write a separate novel for Indian part that we have skipped please 🙏
it seems interesting I wonder if you can do underworld the first one or the third one