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I've read up to Chapter 90 as I write this review. The novel has a good premise, but compared to other Chinese authors (this is a translation), the Chinese nationalism and "racism" present in this work is very annoying. In these 90 chapters that I've read, 70% of the content is from a chat of other people watching the protagonist "play" and the chat is separated into countries like "panda", "elephant" and "bald eagle" to give you an idea. This makes the novel unbearable, even for those who have read many Chinese novels with nationalism, this one goes way overboard.
this fanfic is one of the best i read and the only problem is the updating i think he stop nowadays but foreal it's like i got 1000+ stories that I read to past the time but i just waiting for the update of this one 😔
Really like the story, but just noticed it hasn’t been updated in 20 days, just wondering is it dropped?
I tried to do it but this story is very bad, first of all a lot of Chinese idioms, the protagonist can steal powers and give them to whoever the protagonist is, he has no charisma or objective that interests you in his trip out of the world. The fact that he loves all women and the worst of all is that he is not alone, there are many other reincarnated people who are just there to get slapped.
Had a good time reading it and thats what counts. Time with his wifos is sometimes to much. .....................................................
Good very good nothing to complain about but the story is going a bit slow but everything is fine
Gostei bastante da história até agora (365) Não posso dizer muito do MC, gostei inicialmente dele, porém começou a ter tipo outro modo de agir, é como se uma pessoa for conhecer a outra e quando se casarem, ela fica totalmente diferente xD
First of all.. The novel is a hârêm and as of chapter 365 there are 9 confirmed girls and of those 3 have already gotten segs.... and there is no lemons. So Rl8 tag is fake. There are 7 more girls on the pending side that haven't joined mc yet and mc has showed his interest in getting Yamato and Uta later. This is also a modified translation which removes chinese BS, so thats good. I wish this translator/author would modify the story a bit more and fix some issues, like the lack of lemons. The story is fairly interesting and ONE PIECE is the main focus, it remains to be seen if other worlds would have a huge relevance or if mc would even visit them but that seems unlikely. As for the quality... well, it can be read without issue but there are many translation mistakes and script mistakes such as giving mc the same power twice cause author forgot he already gave it
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Muy interesante la historia, sigue así amigo. Espero nuevos capítulos. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
I need more chapters this one of the best translation that I have read but I do have a question does the mc travel to other world as well???
Se está poniendo aburrido los últimos 20 episodios solo son de leche y nada de acción y no avanza la historia 🤪 debería haber más acción y no tanto relleno que no aporta nada
I was trying to remember every good looking waifu in one piece so I write their names and atleast 111 names has been written yet but there are definitely more
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I don't care much except writing quality because this novel is my cup of the tea so here's a five for u ❤😍🥰. just please keep updating the chapters😩 as u have been keep doing (because honestly this novel is best of the best for me)
Could someone remind me of all the mythical Zoan demon fruits Rifan has had since the beginning of the story? Because I'm a bit lost... Thanks.
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Review: great writing quality and update stability especially for an ff(5 stars), development is mostly fine but it's missing a reason to get stronger, what i mean is like pressure to get stronger it's a bit to relaxed, i think it would be good to bring up the abyss more or have something happen that makes people realize its a big threat (3 stars), character design isn't great but interactions are smooth so it's a pass(3 stars), world background get's 4 stars cause well its an ff, it doesn't get 5 due to the lack of info on the blue star, abyss and system. all in all 4.2 Inquiry and such: Is this original or a translation? if it's original can you get them arrested and sent to impel down, like 1 of them, maybe whoever gets the door door fruit and raid the prison to steal the devil fruits from the prisoners?
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I came here because I wanted to see what it was while waiting for the other book to update, and I like this way better than the other novel.
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I've read up to Chapter 90 as I write this review. The novel has a good premise, but compared to other Chinese authors (this is a translation), the Chinese nationalism and "racism" present in this work is very annoying. In these 90 chapters that I've read, 70% of the content is from a chat of other people watching the protagonist "play" and the chat is separated into countries like "panda", "elephant" and "bald eagle" to give you an idea. This makes the novel unbearable, even for those who have read many Chinese novels with nationalism, this one goes way overboard.
this fanfic is one of the best i read and the only problem is the updating i think he stop nowadays but foreal it's like i got 1000+ stories that I read to past the time but i just waiting for the update of this one 😔
Really like the story, but just noticed it hasn’t been updated in 20 days, just wondering is it dropped?
I tried to do it but this story is very bad, first of all a lot of Chinese idioms, the protagonist can steal powers and give them to whoever the protagonist is, he has no charisma or objective that interests you in his trip out of the world. The fact that he loves all women and the worst of all is that he is not alone, there are many other reincarnated people who are just there to get slapped.
Had a good time reading it and thats what counts. Time with his wifos is sometimes to much. .....................................................
Good very good nothing to complain about but the story is going a bit slow but everything is fine
Gostei bastante da história até agora (365) Não posso dizer muito do MC, gostei inicialmente dele, porém começou a ter tipo outro modo de agir, é como se uma pessoa for conhecer a outra e quando se casarem, ela fica totalmente diferente xD
First of all.. The novel is a hârêm and as of chapter 365 there are 9 confirmed girls and of those 3 have already gotten segs.... and there is no lemons. So Rl8 tag is fake. There are 7 more girls on the pending side that haven't joined mc yet and mc has showed his interest in getting Yamato and Uta later. This is also a modified translation which removes chinese BS, so thats good. I wish this translator/author would modify the story a bit more and fix some issues, like the lack of lemons. The story is fairly interesting and ONE PIECE is the main focus, it remains to be seen if other worlds would have a huge relevance or if mc would even visit them but that seems unlikely. As for the quality... well, it can be read without issue but there are many translation mistakes and script mistakes such as giving mc the same power twice cause author forgot he already gave it
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Muy interesante la historia, sigue así amigo. Espero nuevos capítulos. ✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️✌️
I need more chapters this one of the best translation that I have read but I do have a question does the mc travel to other world as well???
Se está poniendo aburrido los últimos 20 episodios solo son de leche y nada de acción y no avanza la historia 🤪 debería haber más acción y no tanto relleno que no aporta nada
I was trying to remember every good looking waifu in one piece so I write their names and atleast 111 names has been written yet but there are definitely more
,..,............,...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I don't care much except writing quality because this novel is my cup of the tea so here's a five for u ❤😍🥰. just please keep updating the chapters😩 as u have been keep doing (because honestly this novel is best of the best for me)
Could someone remind me of all the mythical Zoan demon fruits Rifan has had since the beginning of the story? Because I'm a bit lost... Thanks.
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Review: great writing quality and update stability especially for an ff(5 stars), development is mostly fine but it's missing a reason to get stronger, what i mean is like pressure to get stronger it's a bit to relaxed, i think it would be good to bring up the abyss more or have something happen that makes people realize its a big threat (3 stars), character design isn't great but interactions are smooth so it's a pass(3 stars), world background get's 4 stars cause well its an ff, it doesn't get 5 due to the lack of info on the blue star, abyss and system. all in all 4.2 Inquiry and such: Is this original or a translation? if it's original can you get them arrested and sent to impel down, like 1 of them, maybe whoever gets the door door fruit and raid the prison to steal the devil fruits from the prisoners?
揭示劇透 I came here because I wanted to see what it was while waiting for the other book to update, and I like this way better than the other novel.
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this novel is mid at best,................