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I like it. Great grammar, I haven't seen any typos. The story seems similar in some ways to the First Store novel. I have to admit I prefer the concept of this one. The pacing is good. I like it very much, please continue writing 👍
I like it. Great grammar, I haven't seen any typos. The story seems similar in some ways to the First Store novel. I have to admit I prefer the concept of this one. The pacing is good. I like it very much, please continue writing 👍