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寫檢討
Holy sheet.... the story is interesting and this is a a copy of another work made by another chinese author, its extremely similar but thats to be expected.from china. The "Translation" is basically, put it in google translator and paste it here.
Bad translation, pov jumps and no effort to sum it up. Sigh sadly like many other chinese fan fics on here. I will keep it short, do not read this if you have no experience with (bad) MTL's, but even then its really tough.
I don't know what to say about that. just a story that does not make any sense and in addition to it all the characters that we know are simple npc
Holy sheet.... the story is interesting and this is a a copy of another work made by another chinese author, its extremely similar but thats to be expected.from china. The "Translation" is basically, put it in google translator and paste it here.
Bad translation, pov jumps and no effort to sum it up. Sigh sadly like many other chinese fan fics on here. I will keep it short, do not read this if you have no experience with (bad) MTL's, but even then its really tough.
I don't know what to say about that. just a story that does not make any sense and in addition to it all the characters that we know are simple npc