Reviews of Dark Alpha's Maiden by Golden_Butterfly1 - Webnovel

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ThreyaMidnight

Hi there! First of all, I want to commend you for your writing style. It is an absolute delight to read. I felt my heart ache for Lana's horrid treatment all throughout the years all of how only two people were there to show her kindness. Second, although there were times that you were a bit info-dumping, it didn't feel forced so I didn't feel turned off to a great extent. Lastly, does Alpha Cedric have a hypnotizing effect or was Lana just merely attracted to him? I thought the scene where she lusted for him (prior to knowing Denie's unknown circumstance) was a bit odd and out of place. Overall, I liked reading your work! This is the first time I've read a story about werewolves so I don't have a mode of comparison of whether it's good or not. But all I know is with my lack of experience in reading this type of book, I think it's a good quality one! Thank you so much for the amazing read. Please keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you soon.

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DaoistbmigGl

História boa, não se estendeu muito. Gostei.

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Vex_900

I've never really been a fan of a story with werewolves but reading this when I usually read books centered more around men really opened my eyes to a new and different writing style

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First_Flame

The author's skillful storytelling painted vivid landscapes, and the development of the protagonist felt a little too real. I was drawn into her story, rooting for her as she survived living in that village and her friend that is supporting her. This is just a review after reading the first few chapters but with the way the author is doing things. I'm sure the story will be a great one. In simple words, keep it up.

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AuthoressChioma

fantastic book looking forward for more exclusive chapters💜

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TsukasaFrier

The story plot is truly amazing! I really like your writing style especially how you describe your character's feeling and emotion. The story pacing is smooth and really enjoyable to read. Keep up your good work!

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Semangat123_5546

I am not done yet, but this is good story. The female lead has a strong character, and I can't wait to see how it ends. Good job👍😊.

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KingBomblaze

nice book cover... though am not into romance but I do recommend this to any one who loves this genre of book ....nice writing quality... easy description ...

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femme_fatale

This was my first werewolf story but I really liked it! Everything was so detailed and I liked the character's dialogues too. Keep it up! 👍

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GodRancho

The author's impeccable writing style will keep you on the edge of your seat, eagerly turning each page in anticipation. Immerse yourself in a tale that will leave you yearning for more, as you delve deeper into the depths of this captivating webnovel.

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redlady

I like novels with wolves and your novel is in my library for sure.Interesting plot and characters .Keep up the good work !Love you !

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SupremeDaoist2

Wow when I was reading it, I felt like I was watching it right in front of me. Very detailed and graphic Good job author 👍

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Innovation_Inu

I felt quick aggrieved in the first few chapters. The emotional pain she had to go through is more than any had to face and the author made sure you could relate to it completely. This is not something one can simply write. It shows such deep friendship bond and great perspective of how evil humans can be. It is am masterpiece in the making. [img=update][img=update]

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ThreyaMidnight

Hi there! First of all, I want to commend you for your writing style. It is an absolute delight to read. I felt my heart ache for Lana's horrid treatment all throughout the years all of how only two people were there to show her kindness. Second, although there were times that you were a bit info-dumping, it didn't feel forced so I didn't feel turned off to a great extent. Lastly, does Alpha Cedric have a hypnotizing effect or was Lana just merely attracted to him? I thought the scene where she lusted for him (prior to knowing Denie's unknown circumstance) was a bit odd and out of place. Overall, I liked reading your work! This is the first time I've read a story about werewolves so I don't have a mode of comparison of whether it's good or not. But all I know is with my lack of experience in reading this type of book, I think it's a good quality one! Thank you so much for the amazing read. Please keep up the good work and I hope to read more from you soon.

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DaoistbmigGl

História boa, não se estendeu muito. Gostei.

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Vex_900

I've never really been a fan of a story with werewolves but reading this when I usually read books centered more around men really opened my eyes to a new and different writing style

1yr
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First_Flame

The author's skillful storytelling painted vivid landscapes, and the development of the protagonist felt a little too real. I was drawn into her story, rooting for her as she survived living in that village and her friend that is supporting her. This is just a review after reading the first few chapters but with the way the author is doing things. I'm sure the story will be a great one. In simple words, keep it up.

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AuthoressChioma

fantastic book looking forward for more exclusive chapters💜

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TsukasaFrier

The story plot is truly amazing! I really like your writing style especially how you describe your character's feeling and emotion. The story pacing is smooth and really enjoyable to read. Keep up your good work!

1yr
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Semangat123_5546

I am not done yet, but this is good story. The female lead has a strong character, and I can't wait to see how it ends. Good job👍😊.

1yr
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KingBomblaze

nice book cover... though am not into romance but I do recommend this to any one who loves this genre of book ....nice writing quality... easy description ...

1yr
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femme_fatale

This was my first werewolf story but I really liked it! Everything was so detailed and I liked the character's dialogues too. Keep it up! 👍

1yr
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GodRancho

The author's impeccable writing style will keep you on the edge of your seat, eagerly turning each page in anticipation. Immerse yourself in a tale that will leave you yearning for more, as you delve deeper into the depths of this captivating webnovel.

1yr
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redlady

I like novels with wolves and your novel is in my library for sure.Interesting plot and characters .Keep up the good work !Love you !

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SupremeDaoist2

Wow when I was reading it, I felt like I was watching it right in front of me. Very detailed and graphic Good job author 👍

1yr
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Innovation_Inu

I felt quick aggrieved in the first few chapters. The emotional pain she had to go through is more than any had to face and the author made sure you could relate to it completely. This is not something one can simply write. It shows such deep friendship bond and great perspective of how evil humans can be. It is am masterpiece in the making. [img=update][img=update]

1yr
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