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The story in my opinion is well written and flows in a way that makes it comfortable to read easily. and I liked how the story is progressing. The characters are unique and interesting, and the author seems to know what they are doing. The only complaint I would have would be that one chapter a day is not good for us:) please write 5 or more. We need MORE! Im just kidding don't be hard on yourself, it's all about quality! and you have it on your hands!
As a long time reader I must say I really like how the plot develops. The latest parts saw the MC being thrown into a conspiracy. Can't wait to see who is behind all this!
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The characters felt super real, and the storyline progressed at a good speed. The chapters were a good length, and the world felt very interesting.
A solid world background with a very interesting and we'll written story. It's very easy to understand and follow up with what was being told in every chapter, even though I'm not that familiar with some terms and places. Overall, I hope this book get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.
As a good novel said earlier, I hope the author will release more chapters and I wonder when he will pass this training :) It's interesting to watch both the main character and the minor characters and watch the whole picture :)
Awesome novel. I really love sci Fi novels and this one is really good Keep it up author Can't wait for more chaptersss
Its really a educational book for me, I really love reading it already in my library and awaiting more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's actually a great and fresh concept, it gives me a cool vibe and the cover seems really cool to me and the future sensation plus the religious person thing I have also started some of my novels like this, really do wish the best for you!
It's a sci-fi novel that has cyberpunk themes, I like the story and the setting is realistic. The grammar may not be the best, but it is readable. So for I like it. Keep up the good work author-kun
I am rather impressed. Starting from chapter one the story has been gripping. I have been reading web novels for a while and most of the time you get tired after reading a few chapters. This was not the case here. If the author keeps up such writing quality, this can be a big hit. Plus content is quite detailed which is always a plus. Good luck!
I possess only one word to aptly describe this book - “perfect”.Even if you, like myself, do not hold a fondness for science fiction literature, I implore you to read this book. It is certain to alter your perspective on the genre. The author's ability to meticulously detail every aspect of the story is truly remarkable and makes comprehension effortless.For those who find solace in the pages of science fiction literature, this book is a must-have addition to your collection. The author's ability to paint a picture with words is unparalleled. Every scene is so vividly described that one can almost feel as though they are present in that moment.In conclusion, I unequivocally rate this book a perfect ten out of ten.
This novel has the best intro , the best detail description and writing style.I am in love with the ML!The plot is interesting .This it the first time my head hurt from having a hard time keeping up with the details, LOL ! Never have I ever read a book like this ! This goes straight to my library !I will read it when I want to learn more about robots , shield and military staff!
Good story and characters with mechs it is a must read novel .Totally love the novel and waiting to read more .
the futuristic earth and the Sean that is soldier wow it was good I like the novel . story progressing was good and the world building it was excellent I will love to read it upcoming chapter keep up that good work
nice book... but please leave some to your reader's imagination... that's the beauty of every book... but trust me to keep on reading for sure....
I like the realistic vibe of the story: you can literally feel the world, and I think it's quite unique for a web novel. I feel like it's a good sci-fi that gets you involved easily. The pace is also fast enough so it keeps you interested in what's coming next
The scenes of the earth advancing her technology and the mix of a new species that can do magic leaves a lasting mark. The author takes a new spin on mechas, technology and magic in general. The protagonist himself made some bad decisions but that is what humans do. I would totally recommend this book.
I have only read small and I already love it and after am done writing this review I will read more. Good book
Woah! Just the title was enticing and attractive Characters, grammar, plot and everything else is superb. You're missing out on a lot if u don't check out ' Save the last bullet for me ' I'm so intrigued that I'm even speechless
I've only read a few pages, but I'm immediately sucked in! The character exchanges are engaging and don't feel forced. I hope the author keeps putting out more chapters. I only see a few problems, but most authors grow better as the story progresses. Good luck. For me, reading was a very pleasurable activity. One of the best books I've read to date, and it merits recognition and acclaim.
The action is absolutely there, I'm Loving it, and the character names are absolutely beautiful, Phineas reminds me of Phineas from Phineas and Ferb, it'sunkown if this is authors idea or not but I love that touch to the novel, thanks for the read Author San
"Save the Last Bullet for Me" is a gripping tale that follows Sean, a former elite supersoldier grappling with past mistakes. Given a second chance to re-enlist, he must navigate the conflict between self-hate and duty. I eagerly anticipate delving deeper into this enthralling story!
This is the finest new book I've read so far. The global setting, as well as the characters, are well-written. I have nothing else to say than "OUTSTANDING" Please continue to write! I'd definitely continue reading this!
Great book, great idea. The author describes the plot and characters well and well. Hope for new chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well written story, lively characters and world. The main character's PTSD, fighting techniques, training and attitudes within the cadets are described very well. The intrigue is whether the GG will be able to find a reason to forget that case or whether he will become eternally doubting himself. It would be nice to see what he was like before this injury. The story is read very easily and a big plus is that the author does not skip chapters, there is a time skip, but it is not significant. Looking forward to new chapters :)
Unique storylines are hard to find nowadays, and I really love how you wrote yours. Outstanding quality of writing, and an impressive display of action and touch of drama. Can't wait to read more of your work!
Well… this was a good read. I don’t mostly read sci fi genre but the synopsis really drew me in. So far, I only read few chapters. I really like Sean’s character. The detailing were perfect but please just look out for capitalisation. It’s minor error. You can edit it later. Overall. Very recommended.
Wow amazing I am in aw by how well-written this is hope you don't mind but ill be taking notes so I can improve on my own writing
Good description of characters, well written novel, good stroyline and cover, keep it up, just more chapters needed and is it necessary for chapter name to be in capital? whatever...everything is great
The story in my opinion is well written and flows in a way that makes it comfortable to read easily. and I liked how the story is progressing. The characters are unique and interesting, and the author seems to know what they are doing. The only complaint I would have would be that one chapter a day is not good for us:) please write 5 or more. We need MORE! Im just kidding don't be hard on yourself, it's all about quality! and you have it on your hands!
As a long time reader I must say I really like how the plot develops. The latest parts saw the MC being thrown into a conspiracy. Can't wait to see who is behind all this!
揭示劇透 The characters felt super real, and the storyline progressed at a good speed. The chapters were a good length, and the world felt very interesting.
A solid world background with a very interesting and we'll written story. It's very easy to understand and follow up with what was being told in every chapter, even though I'm not that familiar with some terms and places. Overall, I hope this book get more attention from the readers. Keep working on it, Author.
As a good novel said earlier, I hope the author will release more chapters and I wonder when he will pass this training :) It's interesting to watch both the main character and the minor characters and watch the whole picture :)
Awesome novel. I really love sci Fi novels and this one is really good Keep it up author Can't wait for more chaptersss
Its really a educational book for me, I really love reading it already in my library and awaiting more chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's actually a great and fresh concept, it gives me a cool vibe and the cover seems really cool to me and the future sensation plus the religious person thing I have also started some of my novels like this, really do wish the best for you!
It's a sci-fi novel that has cyberpunk themes, I like the story and the setting is realistic. The grammar may not be the best, but it is readable. So for I like it. Keep up the good work author-kun
I am rather impressed. Starting from chapter one the story has been gripping. I have been reading web novels for a while and most of the time you get tired after reading a few chapters. This was not the case here. If the author keeps up such writing quality, this can be a big hit. Plus content is quite detailed which is always a plus. Good luck!
I possess only one word to aptly describe this book - “perfect”.Even if you, like myself, do not hold a fondness for science fiction literature, I implore you to read this book. It is certain to alter your perspective on the genre. The author's ability to meticulously detail every aspect of the story is truly remarkable and makes comprehension effortless.For those who find solace in the pages of science fiction literature, this book is a must-have addition to your collection. The author's ability to paint a picture with words is unparalleled. Every scene is so vividly described that one can almost feel as though they are present in that moment.In conclusion, I unequivocally rate this book a perfect ten out of ten.
This novel has the best intro , the best detail description and writing style.I am in love with the ML!The plot is interesting .This it the first time my head hurt from having a hard time keeping up with the details, LOL ! Never have I ever read a book like this ! This goes straight to my library !I will read it when I want to learn more about robots , shield and military staff!
Good story and characters with mechs it is a must read novel .Totally love the novel and waiting to read more .
the futuristic earth and the Sean that is soldier wow it was good I like the novel . story progressing was good and the world building it was excellent I will love to read it upcoming chapter keep up that good work
nice book... but please leave some to your reader's imagination... that's the beauty of every book... but trust me to keep on reading for sure....
I like the realistic vibe of the story: you can literally feel the world, and I think it's quite unique for a web novel. I feel like it's a good sci-fi that gets you involved easily. The pace is also fast enough so it keeps you interested in what's coming next
The scenes of the earth advancing her technology and the mix of a new species that can do magic leaves a lasting mark. The author takes a new spin on mechas, technology and magic in general. The protagonist himself made some bad decisions but that is what humans do. I would totally recommend this book.
I have only read small and I already love it and after am done writing this review I will read more. Good book
Woah! Just the title was enticing and attractive Characters, grammar, plot and everything else is superb. You're missing out on a lot if u don't check out ' Save the last bullet for me ' I'm so intrigued that I'm even speechless
I've only read a few pages, but I'm immediately sucked in! The character exchanges are engaging and don't feel forced. I hope the author keeps putting out more chapters. I only see a few problems, but most authors grow better as the story progresses. Good luck. For me, reading was a very pleasurable activity. One of the best books I've read to date, and it merits recognition and acclaim.
The action is absolutely there, I'm Loving it, and the character names are absolutely beautiful, Phineas reminds me of Phineas from Phineas and Ferb, it'sunkown if this is authors idea or not but I love that touch to the novel, thanks for the read Author San
"Save the Last Bullet for Me" is a gripping tale that follows Sean, a former elite supersoldier grappling with past mistakes. Given a second chance to re-enlist, he must navigate the conflict between self-hate and duty. I eagerly anticipate delving deeper into this enthralling story!
This is the finest new book I've read so far. The global setting, as well as the characters, are well-written. I have nothing else to say than "OUTSTANDING" Please continue to write! I'd definitely continue reading this!
Great book, great idea. The author describes the plot and characters well and well. Hope for new chapters [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Well written story, lively characters and world. The main character's PTSD, fighting techniques, training and attitudes within the cadets are described very well. The intrigue is whether the GG will be able to find a reason to forget that case or whether he will become eternally doubting himself. It would be nice to see what he was like before this injury. The story is read very easily and a big plus is that the author does not skip chapters, there is a time skip, but it is not significant. Looking forward to new chapters :)
Unique storylines are hard to find nowadays, and I really love how you wrote yours. Outstanding quality of writing, and an impressive display of action and touch of drama. Can't wait to read more of your work!
Well… this was a good read. I don’t mostly read sci fi genre but the synopsis really drew me in. So far, I only read few chapters. I really like Sean’s character. The detailing were perfect but please just look out for capitalisation. It’s minor error. You can edit it later. Overall. Very recommended.
Wow amazing I am in aw by how well-written this is hope you don't mind but ill be taking notes so I can improve on my own writing
Good description of characters, well written novel, good stroyline and cover, keep it up, just more chapters needed and is it necessary for chapter name to be in capital? whatever...everything is great