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Could only read up to the end of free chapters, but it seemed quite promising already. The system is fairly well constructed and definitely sets the stage for some interesting experiences. Going to be watching some ads here for sure :)
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First of all this is a fairly decent story. There are elements that I don't like but that is a matter of preference and taste. The MC will occasionally posses minor meta knowledge. These instances don't really detract from the story too much and most readers won't really pick up on it either. Still this suggests a newer author and seeing no other books under their name I suggest to give them some leeway with their writing. In fact with the mindset that this is a newer writer I suspect that if they are given enough support from the community that they may well mature into a wonderful author. Advice for the author: Keep a backlog of unpublished chapters for the days where you need to publish but can't seem to write like sick days or moments of writers block. Try to maintain that backlog and even grow it while maintaining a consistent release scheduled. If your backlog grows too much you can always do a mass release. It's better to release less and consistently than to be inconsistent in your releases. Also your readers will both support you and be some of the worst critics you'll meet. Don't let anyone tell you how to write your story. Take what you need from us but don't let us pull the fun out of writing. This is your story not ours. Best of luck to you.
This story is interesting to read and I can’t wait to see how it turns out. The beginning is fine and the only flaws are a few spelling mistakes here and there. It’s worth checking out and It has great potential for the future. My opinion may change in the future whether is be higher or lower we’ll just have to see. It could improve on character descriptions if theres any big flaw I could point out.
It is a good novel that is worth giving a try. It isn't like every other web novel that we already know what to expect but has good development and leaves you wondering how he will grow as a monster and how powerful he will become
Love the book I feel like you put a lot of time and effort into the chapters. I hope you continue to update this book for a very long time.
it's been a great novel so far please keep up the chapters it's getting better with each new world Kane travels to.
Could only read up to the end of free chapters, but it seemed quite promising already. The system is fairly well constructed and definitely sets the stage for some interesting experiences. Going to be watching some ads here for sure :)
Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem Harem
First of all this is a fairly decent story. There are elements that I don't like but that is a matter of preference and taste. The MC will occasionally posses minor meta knowledge. These instances don't really detract from the story too much and most readers won't really pick up on it either. Still this suggests a newer author and seeing no other books under their name I suggest to give them some leeway with their writing. In fact with the mindset that this is a newer writer I suspect that if they are given enough support from the community that they may well mature into a wonderful author. Advice for the author: Keep a backlog of unpublished chapters for the days where you need to publish but can't seem to write like sick days or moments of writers block. Try to maintain that backlog and even grow it while maintaining a consistent release scheduled. If your backlog grows too much you can always do a mass release. It's better to release less and consistently than to be inconsistent in your releases. Also your readers will both support you and be some of the worst critics you'll meet. Don't let anyone tell you how to write your story. Take what you need from us but don't let us pull the fun out of writing. This is your story not ours. Best of luck to you.
This story is interesting to read and I can’t wait to see how it turns out. The beginning is fine and the only flaws are a few spelling mistakes here and there. It’s worth checking out and It has great potential for the future. My opinion may change in the future whether is be higher or lower we’ll just have to see. It could improve on character descriptions if theres any big flaw I could point out.
It is a good novel that is worth giving a try. It isn't like every other web novel that we already know what to expect but has good development and leaves you wondering how he will grow as a monster and how powerful he will become
Love the book I feel like you put a lot of time and effort into the chapters. I hope you continue to update this book for a very long time.
it's been a great novel so far please keep up the chapters it's getting better with each new world Kane travels to.