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- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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the book is good now just make more children and deliver models to them, I hope it stops giving absurd prizes to the MC he is already OP now focus on the unfolding of the plot
the story is too fast. try to slow it down it feels like I miss a chapter but the system is good just make the system give some small quest that give him an item and give some system status window that shows all the fused character's name overall the store is fine[img=thinking]
The book is all over the place and timeskips randomly, making the story nearly unreadable. Good luck in the future, author.
the book is good now just make more children and deliver models to them, I hope it stops giving absurd prizes to the MC he is already OP now focus on the unfolding of the plot
the story is too fast. try to slow it down it feels like I miss a chapter but the system is good just make the system give some small quest that give him an item and give some system status window that shows all the fused character's name overall the store is fine[img=thinking]
The book is all over the place and timeskips randomly, making the story nearly unreadable. Good luck in the future, author.