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........................Excellent grammar, the mc starts out weak but not too weak, and he is not overpowered. He grinds while slowly but surely becoming powerful, I like that although the mc has a certain opinion of Rias, he was civil enough with her which was a good idea, I thought he would start bashing her like in most fanfics. IDK why most people tend to forget her background when they unnecessarily antagonise her, I also like the fact that although the mc wants a harem, he knows how to take things slow and earn affection without simping over women. There many other stuff that I loved about this novel which I won't list but overall it is worth a try despite the clichè gamer in DXD trope, I guarantee that you will love it. ..............................................................
Ever read Gamers guide to necromancy by Shiro? That story copied with jjk- gojo lookalike. Not original but props cause rewrite is better.
Very frustrating especially the first few chapters. The MC complains about literally everything and he panics about literally nothing. He is a hypocrite which is not bad per se~ he ends up killing Issei and taking his sacred gear cause if your gamer you should right? Anyways, it's a good fic just not for me.
Writing quality is good Stability not so good, Story 0 theres no story development Character design , urgh world background, ( the wolrd is his house and school ) First , its not that is bad fic, just the mc personalitie its a trash , some fics its a adult on a child body , in this novel is a child on a adult body, the system its there only to justify the power up , the mc doesnt get strong , all fights ( even raynare ) he barely win ( still win but urgh ) 90 % of the fic theres no human interaction , its just him in his thoughts theres more problems but in resume, the idea was good, but the mc fked everything, ( Theres alot fics with good idea but with a idiot mc , even famous novels like , Naruto , Bleach , Hary potter etc) <--- My opnion for good wolrd with a lot hitory , but a fked mc
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I know this is a fanfic but i don't like the way the author did my boy issei dirty dude
Pretty good read! The MC can be a bit annoying sometimes because he's a bit inconsistent and doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes, but it's still one of the better fanfics here. Just don't expect too much and enjoy it for what it is. Also, about Grafyia's situation, felt like she got off too easy. I'm not trying to be dark, but the MC's idea of revenge definitely doesn't match mine. Still, worth a read!
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liked it but i dont now if im just tripping but the story looks like you took parts from the dark wolf shiro story about a guy that was rencarnated as a becromancer in dxd and that made a deal with grafya to help rias.but maybe i'm wrong and this is just a deja vu on my part.
one of the best . you just need to have a little patinet at the start and it become an awsome fanfic
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those who are reviewing 3⭐ in the review section i truly pity them they weren't able to read past his power reveal and the author had a valid reason for that, say how can he explain that he can create potions equal to phenex tears if he doesn't have a way, that's why he revealed that he's a sorcerer and he is one of a kind, one thing I don't like myself about the mc is that he is whiney and utterly pathetic and the author probably would do something about it in the new season( right bro you would stop making him more pathetic in the new season right..... right!!?) that's why 2⭐ for character development, the story and the plotting is on an another level your story really good author just make your mc act like decent human bro because he is a fuc#ing hypocrite just make him good please 🥺.
I didn't like the MC's reason for killing Issei because then he didn't want to join any of the demon groups and he didn't use Issei's equipment for anything and will have to bear the problems that he could leave behind. And I would really find it interesting to see the MC live together with Issei even if the two were rivals. But even though this happens, I like how the MC is not an idiot and has a brain most of the time and the author, most of the time, gives a good reason for each act. I recommend this work, it is very fluid in terms of script.
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The story is good considering the standards of this page. The mc has an acceptable personality but over time he becomes the typical system dog that wags his tail to please you.
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too much grind. Why is there "DxD" at all if instead of a plot, 70-80% of it is just clearing dungeons? And the world of "DxD" is used only for communicating with girls.
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Why does it feels like you've stolen specific parts of DarkwolfShiros story????
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I likeed your writing style and your idea of integrating JJK system power in the world of dxd is great. The personality of the MC though is unstable and his choices are questionable, honestly I did have high hopes until he decided to join Rias peerage, I don't mind, it's just the events that led to that are illogical and got me angry soooo much. all in all I enjoyed it most of the time. thank you 🙏
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dude I like your book it's a work of art buh when are u gonna release a new chapter bruh
very good with a satisfying progression mc doesnt feel overpowered and use his strengths effectively
The MC is pretty weak in the beginning but the weak to strong transformation is fun to read. On top of that the MC is rational while also banging chicks at the same time. Best of all he isn't a simp like most protags now days. 9/10 would recommend
I love it and it updates quite often too. However it's in the middle of the night rn so I can't be bothered to write a review, just know that it's good.
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This is pretty good no spelling mistakes, a class I haven't seen explored by a gamer yet. (I hope that if he gets a subclass he gets another unique class as it was quite refreshing)
........................Excellent grammar, the mc starts out weak but not too weak, and he is not overpowered. He grinds while slowly but surely becoming powerful, I like that although the mc has a certain opinion of Rias, he was civil enough with her which was a good idea, I thought he would start bashing her like in most fanfics. IDK why most people tend to forget her background when they unnecessarily antagonise her, I also like the fact that although the mc wants a harem, he knows how to take things slow and earn affection without simping over women. There many other stuff that I loved about this novel which I won't list but overall it is worth a try despite the clichè gamer in DXD trope, I guarantee that you will love it. ..............................................................
Ever read Gamers guide to necromancy by Shiro? That story copied with jjk- gojo lookalike. Not original but props cause rewrite is better.
Very frustrating especially the first few chapters. The MC complains about literally everything and he panics about literally nothing. He is a hypocrite which is not bad per se~ he ends up killing Issei and taking his sacred gear cause if your gamer you should right? Anyways, it's a good fic just not for me.
Writing quality is good Stability not so good, Story 0 theres no story development Character design , urgh world background, ( the wolrd is his house and school ) First , its not that is bad fic, just the mc personalitie its a trash , some fics its a adult on a child body , in this novel is a child on a adult body, the system its there only to justify the power up , the mc doesnt get strong , all fights ( even raynare ) he barely win ( still win but urgh ) 90 % of the fic theres no human interaction , its just him in his thoughts theres more problems but in resume, the idea was good, but the mc fked everything, ( Theres alot fics with good idea but with a idiot mc , even famous novels like , Naruto , Bleach , Hary potter etc) <--- My opnion for good wolrd with a lot hitory , but a fked mc
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I know this is a fanfic but i don't like the way the author did my boy issei dirty dude
Pretty good read! The MC can be a bit annoying sometimes because he's a bit inconsistent and doesn't seem to learn from his mistakes, but it's still one of the better fanfics here. Just don't expect too much and enjoy it for what it is. Also, about Grafyia's situation, felt like she got off too easy. I'm not trying to be dark, but the MC's idea of revenge definitely doesn't match mine. Still, worth a read!
揭示劇透 liked it but i dont now if im just tripping but the story looks like you took parts from the dark wolf shiro story about a guy that was rencarnated as a becromancer in dxd and that made a deal with grafya to help rias.but maybe i'm wrong and this is just a deja vu on my part.
one of the best . you just need to have a little patinet at the start and it become an awsome fanfic
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揭示劇透 those who are reviewing 3⭐ in the review section i truly pity them they weren't able to read past his power reveal and the author had a valid reason for that, say how can he explain that he can create potions equal to phenex tears if he doesn't have a way, that's why he revealed that he's a sorcerer and he is one of a kind, one thing I don't like myself about the mc is that he is whiney and utterly pathetic and the author probably would do something about it in the new season( right bro you would stop making him more pathetic in the new season right..... right!!?) that's why 2⭐ for character development, the story and the plotting is on an another level your story really good author just make your mc act like decent human bro because he is a fuc#ing hypocrite just make him good please 🥺.
I didn't like the MC's reason for killing Issei because then he didn't want to join any of the demon groups and he didn't use Issei's equipment for anything and will have to bear the problems that he could leave behind. And I would really find it interesting to see the MC live together with Issei even if the two were rivals. But even though this happens, I like how the MC is not an idiot and has a brain most of the time and the author, most of the time, gives a good reason for each act. I recommend this work, it is very fluid in terms of script.
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The story is good considering the standards of this page. The mc has an acceptable personality but over time he becomes the typical system dog that wags his tail to please you.
Love everything. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😁😁😁😁😁👻👻👻👻👻👻👻👻___________________---____________44__________👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
too much grind. Why is there "DxD" at all if instead of a plot, 70-80% of it is just clearing dungeons? And the world of "DxD" is used only for communicating with girls.
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Why does it feels like you've stolen specific parts of DarkwolfShiros story????
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I likeed your writing style and your idea of integrating JJK system power in the world of dxd is great. The personality of the MC though is unstable and his choices are questionable, honestly I did have high hopes until he decided to join Rias peerage, I don't mind, it's just the events that led to that are illogical and got me angry soooo much. all in all I enjoyed it most of the time. thank you 🙏
揭示劇透 dude I like your book it's a work of art buh when are u gonna release a new chapter bruh
very good with a satisfying progression mc doesnt feel overpowered and use his strengths effectively
The MC is pretty weak in the beginning but the weak to strong transformation is fun to read. On top of that the MC is rational while also banging chicks at the same time. Best of all he isn't a simp like most protags now days. 9/10 would recommend
I love it and it updates quite often too. However it's in the middle of the night rn so I can't be bothered to write a review, just know that it's good.
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This is pretty good no spelling mistakes, a class I haven't seen explored by a gamer yet. (I hope that if he gets a subclass he gets another unique class as it was quite refreshing)