4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
World background is good even though it was stretched, character design are all good except mc,writing quality is bad though there are no grammar mistakes , story development is non existent bro does things which literally makes no sense and they are almost useless and his character portrayal is extremely bad like he wakes up 'oh anyway' and use of talent is not well explained so u can read it if u r free but don't expect much
I habe read until chap18 and don't have more patience to understand what the heck is the use of the printer or why he is sculpting beasts neither the need for hunting and how he can get hairs of people around...
World background is good even though it was stretched, character design are all good except mc,writing quality is bad though there are no grammar mistakes , story development is non existent bro does things which literally makes no sense and they are almost useless and his character portrayal is extremely bad like he wakes up 'oh anyway' and use of talent is not well explained so u can read it if u r free but don't expect much
I habe read until chap18 and don't have more patience to understand what the heck is the use of the printer or why he is sculpting beasts neither the need for hunting and how he can get hairs of people around...