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Everything is perfect, but the sect/secret organization plot is absolute garbage, without that this would be 5 stars .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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story development and quality is excellent. don't drop the novel author.one of the best novels in hentai.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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Well it's not so bad, but the author writes several nonsense, typical Chinese novels and descriptions of a whole sheet to introduce a woman, plus he is one of those who does not care what readers say tries to correct their inconsistencies but never answers, now takes out to say that his son is a trained killer, if you do not concentrate on the story and just want a +18 novel is fine, but if you look at it for the story is pretty silly.
I didn't think there was a holy book-...*cough…I mean an amazing novel like this on earth ............................................................ ............................................................
It's very interesting even though the MC woman is only her mother but she doesn't feel bored because the process of conquering her mother is very realistic.Please don't drop this story
this story is awesome[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
keep going author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Everything is perfect, but the sect/secret organization plot is absolute garbage, without that this would be 5 stars .....................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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story development and quality is excellent. don't drop the novel author.one of the best novels in hentai.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image Xia Shuting Image
Well it's not so bad, but the author writes several nonsense, typical Chinese novels and descriptions of a whole sheet to introduce a woman, plus he is one of those who does not care what readers say tries to correct their inconsistencies but never answers, now takes out to say that his son is a trained killer, if you do not concentrate on the story and just want a +18 novel is fine, but if you look at it for the story is pretty silly.
I didn't think there was a holy book-...*cough…I mean an amazing novel like this on earth ............................................................ ............................................................
It's very interesting even though the MC woman is only her mother but she doesn't feel bored because the process of conquering her mother is very realistic.Please don't drop this story
this story is awesome[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
keep going author[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
everything else is good but the sect thing ruined it.