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Tou gostando da história, mas tem algumas palavras escritas erradas. De restou tou gostando da história continua por favor, achei a história lega
I like the Fic. MC should Improve the Original Contents of Whatever he Copies from our World. I mean why shouldn't MC Improve the Original Contents If he Could right? MC should be More Innovative&Creative as he's kinda Superhuman with the Help of System,so just Re-Creating the Original Entertainments of Our World will be Boring&Waste of MC's Capabilities,MC should Improvise the Originals and Improve their "Quality&Contents". Anyway,I ❤️ the Fic so far,PLEASE Update New Chapters.👍
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this pic is so good that I binge read it and when I reached the end I did a slow motion nooo
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Good writing quality terrible story development and character design. The characters feel fake, and while an attempt was made for character growth, it was brushed over. Let alone the fact that this is based in the real world, yet you got your character pumping out multiple comic book issues a day, busy with cafes, and sort of getting what you want from surrounding adults despite ridiculous requests, As AN 8 YEAR OLD. It's a good story is you are braindead. I never get this obsession in fanfics where people must make the mc do everything while a child/preteen. They write like mc dies at 18.
I just thought of a suggestion if there are no comics in that world then try making the mc also release the famous mangas like Naruto, one piece, bleach, etc.
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It's very good so far idk why many people gave 1 star review saying it was awesome and 5 stars in the written review but it's very good.
This is your requested 1-Star review. Its fake though this is a good Hollywood themed novel or atleast i thought so until the most recent chapter 14. He got another another system it allows him to make pastries and beverages. He already had a comic book and movie making system, where the movies making part wasn't even unlocked. But now here he is with another system added on just for fun. Maybe the author wants the MC to open Starbucks or some other big beverage/baked confectionery franchise. I just didn't like how he is being side tracked from his original goal and the original theme of the novel which was Hollywood. Maybe the author just wants the MC to make money off of the Starbucks like franchise so that later on he can create his own Marvel & DC Studios. Anyways i still like the novel alot and hope you won't drop it too soon.
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my friends this novel is amazing ... i mean i know that everyone put 1 star because the author write about that but i think that is better to other viewers read and have the chance to enjoy this novel if people put the right review uu.
5 ⭐ Great story so far, I hope you continue with the good quality of chapters.
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I am in absolute love of this fanfic. PLEASE keep making as much as possible. This is so much fun to read and its a good fresh take on this genre.
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Can someone plz tell me the orignel novel for this i am tyied of waiting over a year for the next chap asap i really want to keep reading this
Tou gostando da história, mas tem algumas palavras escritas erradas. De restou tou gostando da história continua por favor, achei a história lega
I like the Fic. MC should Improve the Original Contents of Whatever he Copies from our World. I mean why shouldn't MC Improve the Original Contents If he Could right? MC should be More Innovative&Creative as he's kinda Superhuman with the Help of System,so just Re-Creating the Original Entertainments of Our World will be Boring&Waste of MC's Capabilities,MC should Improvise the Originals and Improve their "Quality&Contents". Anyway,I ❤️ the Fic so far,PLEASE Update New Chapters.👍
Very good Srfxfhhvjjfdtuhcfhkiigxsdrtghiivdsedchij Gzgxjfifigogjfydyrtifkcjxhdhdudududhxgcgxgztataysidkdotodysgshftsyshdjdusystagzbxbxbxjdjdhsgzhzgsgsgsgsgsysysys
this pic is so good that I binge read it and when I reached the end I did a slow motion nooo
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This is good...........................................................................................................................................................................................................
Good writing quality terrible story development and character design. The characters feel fake, and while an attempt was made for character growth, it was brushed over. Let alone the fact that this is based in the real world, yet you got your character pumping out multiple comic book issues a day, busy with cafes, and sort of getting what you want from surrounding adults despite ridiculous requests, As AN 8 YEAR OLD. It's a good story is you are braindead. I never get this obsession in fanfics where people must make the mc do everything while a child/preteen. They write like mc dies at 18.
I just thought of a suggestion if there are no comics in that world then try making the mc also release the famous mangas like Naruto, one piece, bleach, etc.
Let's go..............This is the best......... ..................😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎😎
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It's very good so far idk why many people gave 1 star review saying it was awesome and 5 stars in the written review but it's very good.
This is your requested 1-Star review. Its fake though this is a good Hollywood themed novel or atleast i thought so until the most recent chapter 14. He got another another system it allows him to make pastries and beverages. He already had a comic book and movie making system, where the movies making part wasn't even unlocked. But now here he is with another system added on just for fun. Maybe the author wants the MC to open Starbucks or some other big beverage/baked confectionery franchise. I just didn't like how he is being side tracked from his original goal and the original theme of the novel which was Hollywood. Maybe the author just wants the MC to make money off of the Starbucks like franchise so that later on he can create his own Marvel & DC Studios. Anyways i still like the novel alot and hope you won't drop it too soon.
揭示劇透 my friends this novel is amazing ... i mean i know that everyone put 1 star because the author write about that but i think that is better to other viewers read and have the chance to enjoy this novel if people put the right review uu.
5 ⭐ Great story so far, I hope you continue with the good quality of chapters.
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I am in absolute love of this fanfic. PLEASE keep making as much as possible. This is so much fun to read and its a good fresh take on this genre.
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Can someone plz tell me the orignel novel for this i am tyied of waiting over a year for the next chap asap i really want to keep reading this