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寫檢討Still going to take a consort after 3 years, meh. What's the difference between him and the ones before him. 🙄
揭示劇透Overall it is an okay and interesting story. Out of the box ending. In the end happy ending ml and fl.
Novel could be good but a combo of the annoying cliches and tropes mixed with the bad translations means I’m not continuing to read
many times they put wrong names for ml and fl's siblings. the grammars are okay though not particularly right but still understandable.
Needs a lot of editing. The names of the characters assigned to who was speaking or involved are mixed-up hence it was confusing to read. There are quite a lot of plot holes that needs fixing too. This is not a review per se but could be considered as one or a comment requesting for Henyee Translations Team to edit their work well. They do such a good job after all . ❌【 Su Family Names】: Su Ping, Su Bin, Su Qing, Su Cheng… these brothers are confusing to read when they appear. The Translator or the author kept using Su Bin for Su Ping. Sometimes there’s a Su Liang for Su Qing. ❌ 【Chapter 150】: Who got stabbed? It was initially Qin Silong but then became Su Ping. How did he get there? It was just said that he witnessed the fight? He did not even join the fight!
it's started ok. however, there are several inconsistencies in many chapters. For instance, Su Ping is older than Su Bin, but many times, the translation states he's younger... I've read mtl. Nevertheless, this is supposed to be reviewed by a human. it doesn't look like that.
A good story so far (200 chaps) The thing that bothers me is why is the translator using such scholarly Shakespearean English? Simple English with correct editing would be be lovely enough.
this story is a total mix up of characters. Don't know the gender, don't know who is who , don't know how to use she, her, he, his , him, me , mine , them , they, story make sure u won't get a headache understanding what was written
It's a nice read. The rating is mainly because it is somewhat cliche (but I like reading it soo) but yeah there really isn't any different with the character from other characters of the same genre. Also there's a lot of inconsistencies in the translation. I thought that I can just ignore it however thinking that we pay for these chapters we ought to have a good translation soo yeah.
Nice story..... i love the rebirth story.....especially strong FL characters i hope the ML will fall in love ❤️ with her too
This story is infuriating. The fl is meh. The ml and his family are genuinely horrible, like not misunderstood or mistreated villains. They are also poor but one brother goes gambling and the ml can afford to study. The fl predecessor wasn't good at all but like the ml and his fam were also really bad. the story itself is filled with Grammer issues, name swaps and inconsistencies within the plot making it hard to comprehend.
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I am liking this novel with its plot line and energetic pace. I hope it is picked for more chapters.
Good one hahahaha[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
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different beginnings but I like how it coming along [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so far it's really interesting I can't wait to read more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Still going to take a consort after 3 years, meh. What's the difference between him and the ones before him. 🙄
揭示劇透Overall it is an okay and interesting story. Out of the box ending. In the end happy ending ml and fl.
Novel could be good but a combo of the annoying cliches and tropes mixed with the bad translations means I’m not continuing to read
many times they put wrong names for ml and fl's siblings. the grammars are okay though not particularly right but still understandable.
Needs a lot of editing. The names of the characters assigned to who was speaking or involved are mixed-up hence it was confusing to read. There are quite a lot of plot holes that needs fixing too. This is not a review per se but could be considered as one or a comment requesting for Henyee Translations Team to edit their work well. They do such a good job after all . ❌【 Su Family Names】: Su Ping, Su Bin, Su Qing, Su Cheng… these brothers are confusing to read when they appear. The Translator or the author kept using Su Bin for Su Ping. Sometimes there’s a Su Liang for Su Qing. ❌ 【Chapter 150】: Who got stabbed? It was initially Qin Silong but then became Su Ping. How did he get there? It was just said that he witnessed the fight? He did not even join the fight!
it's started ok. however, there are several inconsistencies in many chapters. For instance, Su Ping is older than Su Bin, but many times, the translation states he's younger... I've read mtl. Nevertheless, this is supposed to be reviewed by a human. it doesn't look like that.
A good story so far (200 chaps) The thing that bothers me is why is the translator using such scholarly Shakespearean English? Simple English with correct editing would be be lovely enough.
this story is a total mix up of characters. Don't know the gender, don't know who is who , don't know how to use she, her, he, his , him, me , mine , them , they, story make sure u won't get a headache understanding what was written
It's a nice read. The rating is mainly because it is somewhat cliche (but I like reading it soo) but yeah there really isn't any different with the character from other characters of the same genre. Also there's a lot of inconsistencies in the translation. I thought that I can just ignore it however thinking that we pay for these chapters we ought to have a good translation soo yeah.
Nice story..... i love the rebirth story.....especially strong FL characters i hope the ML will fall in love ❤️ with her too
This story is infuriating. The fl is meh. The ml and his family are genuinely horrible, like not misunderstood or mistreated villains. They are also poor but one brother goes gambling and the ml can afford to study. The fl predecessor wasn't good at all but like the ml and his fam were also really bad. the story itself is filled with Grammer issues, name swaps and inconsistencies within the plot making it hard to comprehend.
I so love this book can't wait for more [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
I am liking this novel with its plot line and energetic pace. I hope it is picked for more chapters.
Good one hahahaha[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Can anyone please find the raws??? [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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different beginnings but I like how it coming along [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
so far it's really interesting I can't wait to read more [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
great and different story with importance of male and female lead...p