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I haven't read such good fanfiction on HP for a long time. I like the way the author develops the characters. And the world as a whole is good
read about 45 chapters which is basically the entire novel to date. its so boring. nothing happens. an hour or 2 of reading and all thats happened is him making a spell, getting praised for being a genius and finishing his first year. literally nothing interesting happens ever
this is pretty good or you can say it's one of the best in terms of writing quality as a ff, story is developing at a steady pace, not too rushed nor too slow just way the people like it, although I would've preferred if he was sorted into ravenclaw but it's a nice surprise as not many ff has explored the house mc is in. the dark part of the story took me by surprise as I didn't look at the tags but I hope the thing that happened to his mom doesn't happen to other female characters or there is no ntr type of things in the story. I am kind of surprised by other characters keep up with him in term of conversation and understanding as I don't think the orignal characters would be able to( mc is an eloquent speaker). I hope author increases the update speed atleast 3 chapter a week maybe if it works for him. as for the Love intrest, I hope its tonks or fluer as not many authors have explored the relationship aspect with them.
Good one so far..................................... ............................................................... Please don't drop it...............................
I’ll admit that I have been generous is my rating. But i want to support this fanfic as its comparably much better than many others. I like the story, I like the fact the MC, since he has flaws that are normal and I like that I can clearly see tehre is a plot.
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I think its a good story, it's a bit early to say if its going to be a great one yet, but considering your previously work I'm willing to review it early :)
I'm really sorry that your story got stolen by someone on here, I went over to report it at the link you provided. Glad to see your amazing story has finally managed to come to Webnovel
only reason its not full marks on character design is MC is a bit too egotistical for my taste and MC doesn't even bother to question whether the things he thought he knew about the plot were cjanged completely due to neville being the boy who lived and growing up in the wizarding world
I haven't read such good fanfiction on HP for a long time. I like the way the author develops the characters. And the world as a whole is good
read about 45 chapters which is basically the entire novel to date. its so boring. nothing happens. an hour or 2 of reading and all thats happened is him making a spell, getting praised for being a genius and finishing his first year. literally nothing interesting happens ever
this is pretty good or you can say it's one of the best in terms of writing quality as a ff, story is developing at a steady pace, not too rushed nor too slow just way the people like it, although I would've preferred if he was sorted into ravenclaw but it's a nice surprise as not many ff has explored the house mc is in. the dark part of the story took me by surprise as I didn't look at the tags but I hope the thing that happened to his mom doesn't happen to other female characters or there is no ntr type of things in the story. I am kind of surprised by other characters keep up with him in term of conversation and understanding as I don't think the orignal characters would be able to( mc is an eloquent speaker). I hope author increases the update speed atleast 3 chapter a week maybe if it works for him. as for the Love intrest, I hope its tonks or fluer as not many authors have explored the relationship aspect with them.
Good one so far..................................... ............................................................... Please don't drop it...............................
I’ll admit that I have been generous is my rating. But i want to support this fanfic as its comparably much better than many others. I like the story, I like the fact the MC, since he has flaws that are normal and I like that I can clearly see tehre is a plot.
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I think its a good story, it's a bit early to say if its going to be a great one yet, but considering your previously work I'm willing to review it early :)
I'm really sorry that your story got stolen by someone on here, I went over to report it at the link you provided. Glad to see your amazing story has finally managed to come to Webnovel
only reason its not full marks on character design is MC is a bit too egotistical for my taste and MC doesn't even bother to question whether the things he thought he knew about the plot were cjanged completely due to neville being the boy who lived and growing up in the wizarding world