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Simply amazing! Good lord, are you really a newbie?! I was left with nothing short of impressed! Keep it up kid.
Simply creative and excellent world building. The future is so well defined that I could almost imagine the buildings and such! Chapter 2 got me in a frenzy of feelings about the loss suffered by people because of war. Keep up the good work author!
did you drop the novel??can you post more chapters. novel is interesting with nice world building.
This is truly a masterpiece. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!"
I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!
I humbly request everyone's support in making my book a success! Thank you in advance people!
well in just 30min I finished reading 7 chapter I will to continue to read it the depth through world was captivating from me and the encounter with bothe min yue I though he would be anti hero type but he is in side with humanity as whole it was pretty good experience reading it and I can say it will be very good novel in future I will continue to read it
I am absolutely in love with the world building and the way you write.The story has a interesting plot and it keeps you engaged .I am curious .. Will they end up together in a happy ending?
Very nice, I like the story progression. though through the first 5 chapters, I haven't seen a correlation between the prologue and the rest chapters. The writing is nice, but it might be better if you avoid brandishing the paragraph with long sentences and keep some straightforward.
amazing story plot and writting. 😇 Don't want to leave without review. good one, well described every moves. nice actions.
I don't usually read Ml stories but your is really well written. The description and background, the each and everything was explained with detail. Good Luck to you !!
The synopsis alone got me curious. and I didn't regret reading the first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more. keep up the good work 👍
Though I am not a fan of this genre, I liked the synopsis and thought of giving it a try. And trust me. It's worth reading. Keep releasing the chapters. ❤
The tittle really intrigued me, and on reading a few chapters, I started loving it. It's quite intense but that's what makes it fun to read. I'm definitely going to read more
The moment I saw the title I thought to myself this book wouldn't be interesting, but I still read it and I must say it surpassed my imagination. Altogether a great read
well I'll give you five stars 🤩 . The story plot is very nice , I hope you write more.
Did have been reading this novel for the past two weeks now. The story flow is steadily moving slowly until I hit the last chapter, which leaves me wanting more.[img=update]
The book unfolds like a captivating dance, with each chapter gracefully transitioning into the next, keeping the reader entranced. author's vivid imagery immerses the reader in a rich and vivid world. A true gem that leaves an indelible mark on the literary landscape. Thank you Author Nim
I am super excited to continue reading! I love when authors step out of the norms of creating books, this fantasy is like none other! Keep up the wonderful work!
I can learn how to write better from your story. I will keep looking forward and to learn something
So here's my review: Strengths: - Engaging and fast-paced action - Intriguing and well-developed characters - Captivating world-building - Skillful storytelling and immersive writing style Areas of Improvement: - The pacing could be further improved in some parts. - More in-depth exploration of certain plot elements would enhance the overall depth of the story. - Additional development of secondary characters could add further richness to the narrative. I read the starting chapters of 'Hydrax Legacy' and I'm hooked! The author's skillful storytelling and immersive writing style have drawn me into the narrative, and I can't wait to uncover the secrets and unravel the mysteries that lie ahead. If the beginning is any indication, I have high expectations for the rest of the book. I highly recommend 'Hydrax Legacy' to anyone seeking an exciting and immersive reading experience.
I really like how you, name your stuff and your novel cover but furthermore I like how you write your story and I love how in the first chapter it's straight into the action keeping do what your doing
Is this not just Noblesse as another novel? I’ll give 4 stars as I didn’t actually read yet.
well the book is amazing and I really love the story . keep writing more charpters please
I really enjoyed reading this book, the story is quite simple but really solid and can lead to many interesting things. It's definitely a story worth reading.
M this was a beautiful book great usage of vocabulary and it seemed like I was in a matrix movie with the chapters that included AI Keep it up
I started reading this right about three hours ago and reached all the way to chapter 10. Honestly an amazingly written story. From a new author I really would like to have the ability of wording my thoughts clearly like you. Keep writing this great story!
Simply amazing! Good lord, are you really a newbie?! I was left with nothing short of impressed! Keep it up kid.
Simply creative and excellent world building. The future is so well defined that I could almost imagine the buildings and such! Chapter 2 got me in a frenzy of feelings about the loss suffered by people because of war. Keep up the good work author!
did you drop the novel??can you post more chapters. novel is interesting with nice world building.
This is truly a masterpiece. It is beautifully crafted, the characters are richly developed, and the story unfolds with breathtaking twists and turns. A literary masterpiece that will leave you awestruck and longing for another chapter. A must-read for all book lovers!"
I just finished reading the latest chapter of this novel and I am amazed by the quality of the writing. keep going!!!! I highly recommend this novel to anyone looking for a well-written and engaging story that will leave you wanting more. Keep up the amazing work, author!
I humbly request everyone's support in making my book a success! Thank you in advance people!
well in just 30min I finished reading 7 chapter I will to continue to read it the depth through world was captivating from me and the encounter with bothe min yue I though he would be anti hero type but he is in side with humanity as whole it was pretty good experience reading it and I can say it will be very good novel in future I will continue to read it
I am absolutely in love with the world building and the way you write.The story has a interesting plot and it keeps you engaged .I am curious .. Will they end up together in a happy ending?
Very nice, I like the story progression. though through the first 5 chapters, I haven't seen a correlation between the prologue and the rest chapters. The writing is nice, but it might be better if you avoid brandishing the paragraph with long sentences and keep some straightforward.
amazing story plot and writting. 😇 Don't want to leave without review. good one, well described every moves. nice actions.
I don't usually read Ml stories but your is really well written. The description and background, the each and everything was explained with detail. Good Luck to you !!
The synopsis alone got me curious. and I didn't regret reading the first chapter! I'm looking forward to reading more. keep up the good work 👍
Though I am not a fan of this genre, I liked the synopsis and thought of giving it a try. And trust me. It's worth reading. Keep releasing the chapters. ❤
The tittle really intrigued me, and on reading a few chapters, I started loving it. It's quite intense but that's what makes it fun to read. I'm definitely going to read more
The moment I saw the title I thought to myself this book wouldn't be interesting, but I still read it and I must say it surpassed my imagination. Altogether a great read
well I'll give you five stars 🤩 . The story plot is very nice , I hope you write more.
Did have been reading this novel for the past two weeks now. The story flow is steadily moving slowly until I hit the last chapter, which leaves me wanting more.[img=update]
The book unfolds like a captivating dance, with each chapter gracefully transitioning into the next, keeping the reader entranced. author's vivid imagery immerses the reader in a rich and vivid world. A true gem that leaves an indelible mark on the literary landscape. Thank you Author Nim
I am super excited to continue reading! I love when authors step out of the norms of creating books, this fantasy is like none other! Keep up the wonderful work!
I can learn how to write better from your story. I will keep looking forward and to learn something
So here's my review: Strengths: - Engaging and fast-paced action - Intriguing and well-developed characters - Captivating world-building - Skillful storytelling and immersive writing style Areas of Improvement: - The pacing could be further improved in some parts. - More in-depth exploration of certain plot elements would enhance the overall depth of the story. - Additional development of secondary characters could add further richness to the narrative. I read the starting chapters of 'Hydrax Legacy' and I'm hooked! The author's skillful storytelling and immersive writing style have drawn me into the narrative, and I can't wait to uncover the secrets and unravel the mysteries that lie ahead. If the beginning is any indication, I have high expectations for the rest of the book. I highly recommend 'Hydrax Legacy' to anyone seeking an exciting and immersive reading experience.
I really like how you, name your stuff and your novel cover but furthermore I like how you write your story and I love how in the first chapter it's straight into the action keeping do what your doing
Is this not just Noblesse as another novel? I’ll give 4 stars as I didn’t actually read yet.
well the book is amazing and I really love the story . keep writing more charpters please
I really enjoyed reading this book, the story is quite simple but really solid and can lead to many interesting things. It's definitely a story worth reading.
M this was a beautiful book great usage of vocabulary and it seemed like I was in a matrix movie with the chapters that included AI Keep it up
I started reading this right about three hours ago and reached all the way to chapter 10. Honestly an amazingly written story. From a new author I really would like to have the ability of wording my thoughts clearly like you. Keep writing this great story!