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finished,I really enjoyed this, and I think anyone reading this review should as well. I mean, at least give it a chance, and if you're wondering about it, here's what I can say without spoiling it. It's good in that you'll not find too much to any profanity, and it is not a harem, and the grammar is awesome, in my opinion. ps, I really like your fic author, so thanks for making it ❤️
well written story, unfortunately the mc is super passive, it is even more boring than the fic where captain america goes to GOT.
It's alright, found it too fast towards the end, grammar is good and even for people who aren't into D&D it's explained.
De las mejores historias que he leído. Gracias por ello, voy a ver tus otras novelas también...
shorter than I would have liked but very very nice characters were made very well and had very great story telling can't wait to read more of your stories
every single aspect of this fanfiction is perfect. at least that is my opinion
it's a great read. i would really recommend reading it as the story has ended which is somewhat sad but at least it finished.
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Just finished it and here's my honest review: Slight grammar mistakes here and there but nothing jarring. The romance was a bit rushed from the side of MC, although it was well explored from the side of the FL. And the ending is good, not the greatest, but a solid 4 out of 5. Now onto the good points: The story flows very well, MC is likeable and rarely if ever makes questionable decisions (he's very faithful to the DnD dragon lore). All the side characters are well fleshed out, and rarely feel 'flat'. I much prefer the focus on a smaller cast but with well fleshed out interactions and thoughts rather than a large cast of two dimensional characters. On that front Author did good. Fanfic is finished, enough said about updating stability. World Background is oftentimes the hardest to rate, however here the seemless blend of GoT and DnD makes it an easy 5.
It was alright, I enjoyed the start more than the end. It kind of felt like the end was rushed. I would have preferred he interacted with the characters from Westeros more than being in essos with Daenerys
It's heavy AU. And it's not weak to strong. MC was never weak according to ASOIAF world. If you want tasteful ASOIAF fan-fiction, then atleast do not break core rules or power structure of that world. And you made Dany a true dragon forcefully.
It's a decent read, I would've liked to see some of the wacky DND magic stuff tho.
Great story with nice character development, only downside is the world build isn’t great but if you need that you can just do a quick search on fandom and you’ll understand GOT. Keen to read your next project 🙂
Finally finished today. It was a great read. Good writing and story. The romance was fast paced for story reasons it feels like but other than that amazing! Bravo! 10/10 recommended!
I liked the concept of a dragon MC, i read it, i liked the story. Conclusion: good book
Really good fanfictions. With an OK ending (maybe a bit rushed but still ok).P.S: It's a "good ending"
It's a good fanfic, a little rushed by the and. But the character development is very solid.
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I definitely recommend this fan fic, it’s a bit fast pace being only 70 chapters and all, although the author could have done more on building a bigger world like expanding more into Valyria or dnd, at the end this a asoiaf, all in all a must to read fan fic especially if your a fan of Westeros.
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its just another person who is technically a dragon but just turns into a human and is mostly a human. nothing interesting. no DnD dragon going absolutely crazy. its just a human who can use magic in got and can turn into a dragon to fly from point a to point b
The idea is good, but it's execution is not. I can't complain about updating stability but about everything else. The Grammar needs some work, it is readable but there are many mistakes. The World makes barely any sense, it feels like the Author just likes to exaggerate. He describes Valyria as a city that could hold 'hundrets of millions of people' and his colony of kobolds grows to have several million even though they only live on a small part of Valyria. The Author also loves to do timeskips, whether that is with impossibly long flight times (several days to cross Valyria on a dragon / over a week to fly to the Westerlands from Valyria, when a boat needed 1-2 months) and him just skipping most of the MCs aging. In one chapter he's under 10 y/o the next he is 1000+ y/o and hasn't grown mentally. He always talks about being superior to humans in regards to intelligence and other stuff, but doesn't show it. And these are just Points I don't like, there are more points: - MC can turn into human - MC lives with humans - MC pretty much ignores the kobolds that are under him in favour of humans for no apparent reason and more that I either forgot or haven't gotten to yet as I am still on Chapter 22 I'll maybe write a comment to Update this
i loved this story, it was well laid out, and just a joy to read. i found myself smiling quite often as i read this story. or outright laughing at time and even falling for a cheeky part put in by the author. that cheeky bugger. over all i recommend reading it all the way through.
finished,I really enjoyed this, and I think anyone reading this review should as well. I mean, at least give it a chance, and if you're wondering about it, here's what I can say without spoiling it. It's good in that you'll not find too much to any profanity, and it is not a harem, and the grammar is awesome, in my opinion. ps, I really like your fic author, so thanks for making it ❤️
well written story, unfortunately the mc is super passive, it is even more boring than the fic where captain america goes to GOT.
It's alright, found it too fast towards the end, grammar is good and even for people who aren't into D&D it's explained.
De las mejores historias que he leído. Gracias por ello, voy a ver tus otras novelas también...
shorter than I would have liked but very very nice characters were made very well and had very great story telling can't wait to read more of your stories
every single aspect of this fanfiction is perfect. at least that is my opinion
it's a great read. i would really recommend reading it as the story has ended which is somewhat sad but at least it finished.
Aaa why did he marry Daenerys huh? [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Just finished it and here's my honest review: Slight grammar mistakes here and there but nothing jarring. The romance was a bit rushed from the side of MC, although it was well explored from the side of the FL. And the ending is good, not the greatest, but a solid 4 out of 5. Now onto the good points: The story flows very well, MC is likeable and rarely if ever makes questionable decisions (he's very faithful to the DnD dragon lore). All the side characters are well fleshed out, and rarely feel 'flat'. I much prefer the focus on a smaller cast but with well fleshed out interactions and thoughts rather than a large cast of two dimensional characters. On that front Author did good. Fanfic is finished, enough said about updating stability. World Background is oftentimes the hardest to rate, however here the seemless blend of GoT and DnD makes it an easy 5.
It was alright, I enjoyed the start more than the end. It kind of felt like the end was rushed. I would have preferred he interacted with the characters from Westeros more than being in essos with Daenerys
It's heavy AU. And it's not weak to strong. MC was never weak according to ASOIAF world. If you want tasteful ASOIAF fan-fiction, then atleast do not break core rules or power structure of that world. And you made Dany a true dragon forcefully.
It's a decent read, I would've liked to see some of the wacky DND magic stuff tho.
Great story with nice character development, only downside is the world build isn’t great but if you need that you can just do a quick search on fandom and you’ll understand GOT. Keen to read your next project 🙂
Finally finished today. It was a great read. Good writing and story. The romance was fast paced for story reasons it feels like but other than that amazing! Bravo! 10/10 recommended!
I liked the concept of a dragon MC, i read it, i liked the story. Conclusion: good book
Really good fanfictions. With an OK ending (maybe a bit rushed but still ok).P.S: It's a "good ending"
It's a good fanfic, a little rushed by the and. But the character development is very solid.
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I definitely recommend this fan fic, it’s a bit fast pace being only 70 chapters and all, although the author could have done more on building a bigger world like expanding more into Valyria or dnd, at the end this a asoiaf, all in all a must to read fan fic especially if your a fan of Westeros.
揭示劇透 its just another person who is technically a dragon but just turns into a human and is mostly a human. nothing interesting. no DnD dragon going absolutely crazy. its just a human who can use magic in got and can turn into a dragon to fly from point a to point b
The idea is good, but it's execution is not. I can't complain about updating stability but about everything else. The Grammar needs some work, it is readable but there are many mistakes. The World makes barely any sense, it feels like the Author just likes to exaggerate. He describes Valyria as a city that could hold 'hundrets of millions of people' and his colony of kobolds grows to have several million even though they only live on a small part of Valyria. The Author also loves to do timeskips, whether that is with impossibly long flight times (several days to cross Valyria on a dragon / over a week to fly to the Westerlands from Valyria, when a boat needed 1-2 months) and him just skipping most of the MCs aging. In one chapter he's under 10 y/o the next he is 1000+ y/o and hasn't grown mentally. He always talks about being superior to humans in regards to intelligence and other stuff, but doesn't show it. And these are just Points I don't like, there are more points: - MC can turn into human - MC lives with humans - MC pretty much ignores the kobolds that are under him in favour of humans for no apparent reason and more that I either forgot or haven't gotten to yet as I am still on Chapter 22 I'll maybe write a comment to Update this
i loved this story, it was well laid out, and just a joy to read. i found myself smiling quite often as i read this story. or outright laughing at time and even falling for a cheeky part put in by the author. that cheeky bugger. over all i recommend reading it all the way through.