/ Anime & Comics / (Undergoing Rewrite) Quirk Boundless Evolution
摘要
I Don't own anything other then charicters of my own creation...
I'm having fun doing this please comment and encourage me while writing this...
and if you want to suggest some ideas I don't really mind..
for any and all intense and purposes I warn and advise against anyone from doing any actions the main charicter does this is a work of fiction and may lead to bodily harm and or death
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4評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
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寫檢討
Currently the story has twelve chapters and the author has stopped updating for a bit, I think this story could be great. He does a bunch of stupid things because of what his power is but since he is in a hurry it makes sense. It also is good quality writing as in after partially reading a lot of flawed stories, as well as reading a bunch of good quality stories I see no issue with this one.
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As of this review, there are only 8 chaps the story is good although short shows potential although needs a little more information about the world at large more slice of life can work wonders for the pacing and add more chaptures to the story if there is a rewrite for this story count me in.
This is an awesome concept, and the writing is really good. I love it, and i am honestly surprised by how little dreaders it has. I believe that you could fix this by adding tags and making it a fanfiction. I rarely pick books without tags, and i believe others are the same. it is an amazing novel good job.
卷 1
- 1 : Limitless change 1 years ago
- 2 : growth beyond imagination 1 years ago
- 3 chapter 3: :on the verge of death 1 years ago
- 4 chapter 4: : City Surge 1 years ago
- 5 Chapter 5: :Unbearable Pressure 1 years ago
- 6 chapter 6: :Training 1 years ago
- 7 chapter 7: : "Half a Year Till UA Tryouts" 1 years ago
- 8 chapter 8: : Bench-Mark 1 years ago
- 9 chapter 9: : "The Heroic Duo" 1 years ago
- 10 Chapter 10: : "Unleashed" 1 years ago
- 11 chapter 11: : "U.A Exam's" 1 years ago
- 12 chapter 11 : : Quirk Apprehension Test 1 years ago
- 13 Chapter 12 " unexpected Resolve " 8 months ago
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