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In the little I read of this novel, it hooked me and left me with the feeling of wanting more chapters, recommended[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first chapter is really nice and touching, good plot! I don't know if it is to early to give a review but nice job here author
Leaving the review after reading the five available chapters. Well, the first chapter will make you cry, it's so emotional and good. It sets up the MC's journey and it will not be all roses. It will be dark and full of gore, I can tell. But the writer had given the reason for why his heart has darkened and set up the tone for his novel. So, well done 👍 Writing quality is good, with very few to no mistakes at all. Updates are stable for now and I hope the writer will keep that up. Worldbuilding and system seem promising too and I only hope that it will grow from there. So, good luck with your novel. It has the potential to be great book 👍
hmm plot was vivid waiting for the next chapter. who will write 140 jfa;lsdjflkja;lsdjflk;ajasdfasdfadfasdfasdfasdfasfafafasdfasdfsadfadfadsf
Here after reading all the chapters, though i alredy said about how indulgence i felt after reading the character . and about the world you paved it's way very well with all of yours word Play . It was a great read completely and cool and Orion tooked the best character for me . And one last point is that as an opinion please don't add a harem it will ruin the whole plot you created between him and her. Keep going
In the little I read of this novel, it hooked me and left me with the feeling of wanting more chapters, recommended[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
The first chapter is really nice and touching, good plot! I don't know if it is to early to give a review but nice job here author
Leaving the review after reading the five available chapters. Well, the first chapter will make you cry, it's so emotional and good. It sets up the MC's journey and it will not be all roses. It will be dark and full of gore, I can tell. But the writer had given the reason for why his heart has darkened and set up the tone for his novel. So, well done 👍 Writing quality is good, with very few to no mistakes at all. Updates are stable for now and I hope the writer will keep that up. Worldbuilding and system seem promising too and I only hope that it will grow from there. So, good luck with your novel. It has the potential to be great book 👍
hmm plot was vivid waiting for the next chapter. who will write 140 jfa;lsdjflkja;lsdjflk;ajasdfasdfadfasdfasdfasdfasfafafasdfasdfsadfadfadsf
Here after reading all the chapters, though i alredy said about how indulgence i felt after reading the character . and about the world you paved it's way very well with all of yours word Play . It was a great read completely and cool and Orion tooked the best character for me . And one last point is that as an opinion please don't add a harem it will ruin the whole plot you created between him and her. Keep going