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I gotta admit one thing there's probably dozens of Bleach stories out there with the same generic story line and cliche scenes but this one has potential and I'm actually looking forward to this story . Maybe tweak your pacing issues a bit but that's about it. The grammar and spelling mistakes is natural and while it's a bit distracting it's a breath of fresh air from all these generic cultivation novels that just makes me feel dumber and dumber every time I force myself to read a cultivation novel. Also on an unrelated note do you know the artist of the Rangiku artwork of this story ? I feel like I've seen it before but can't remember... would be a great help 👍
I gotta admit one thing there's probably dozens of Bleach stories out there with the same generic story line and cliche scenes but this one has potential and I'm actually looking forward to this story . Maybe tweak your pacing issues a bit but that's about it. The grammar and spelling mistakes is natural and while it's a bit distracting it's a breath of fresh air from all these generic cultivation novels that just makes me feel dumber and dumber every time I force myself to read a cultivation novel. Also on an unrelated note do you know the artist of the Rangiku artwork of this story ? I feel like I've seen it before but can't remember... would be a great help 👍