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The story is interesting but somehow, the lack of dialogue makes it feel like there's a bit of a lack when it comes to portraying the personality of characters something like that. Also, the content of the characters is very short which makes it like I'm reading a report rather than a chapter of a novel. Although each chapter is really intriguing and made me want to know what will happen in the next chapters ahead. Overall, this work really has its own potential. Keep working on it, Author.
The story seemed slightly fast paced in the beginning but it will still hook your attention in the novel! Great story about the supernatural powers! I will make a better review after reading more.
There are only 3 chapters so I'll update my review when the story progresses. The story itself has a lot of potential. There's an interesting power/strength regime for each character's supernatural abilities. Wish there was more chapters released for story context. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see how it goes.
Captivating storyline with immersive writing and great hooks. The witty integration of politics merged with unique characters and great world building makes this book hard not to pick up.
The story is interesting but somehow, the lack of dialogue makes it feel like there's a bit of a lack when it comes to portraying the personality of characters something like that. Also, the content of the characters is very short which makes it like I'm reading a report rather than a chapter of a novel. Although each chapter is really intriguing and made me want to know what will happen in the next chapters ahead. Overall, this work really has its own potential. Keep working on it, Author.
The story seemed slightly fast paced in the beginning but it will still hook your attention in the novel! Great story about the supernatural powers! I will make a better review after reading more.
There are only 3 chapters so I'll update my review when the story progresses. The story itself has a lot of potential. There's an interesting power/strength regime for each character's supernatural abilities. Wish there was more chapters released for story context. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to see how it goes.
Captivating storyline with immersive writing and great hooks. The witty integration of politics merged with unique characters and great world building makes this book hard not to pick up.