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Story: Ok Character: Ok Translation: Ok? Especially for the name that changed, sometimes [img=recommend][img=recommend] ...............,.......................,.................... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm sorry but this is bad. I think this is supposed go be a Chinese work that's being attempted at making it not so.. Chinese. So it's only posted by its translater. Well the story chosen has an MC that can do all sorts of things regardless of what his system gives him access to. Able to understand tech that he doesnt even gave access to. An arrogant and non thinking MC. Making things in ridiculously short times and without them being mentioned. Just suddenly having them. His super advanced creation with its ability to hack anything and subdue Jarvis is somehow amazingly dumb too. Not understanding real obvious stuff and him not bothering to give her any warning despite being some super genius. Now hes taking his crush that thought of him as a little brother to a club hes too young to be at and she doesnt seem to mind being there. Too much forcing and too much dumb for me.
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thank you please keep translating it the real version was trash even I could not read more than 100 chapters of the real version then I kinda dropped it it was too boring and the plotline quality kept decreasing reached in minus with all the Chinese stuff add in it
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this work has already been translated here, I abandoned it because it was too much Chinese MTL, simply unbearable to read, I hope this is not the case.
Hi, I would like to know the name of the original story and the author, if possible thank you, I believe your translation has potential but I would like to read the original and see if it has more chapters, thank you.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.
Its good so far so keep it up!!! I need to add additional words to post this review so i am typing additional words so i can have enough words
O autor é um bocó literalmente As ideias são excelentes mas o autor cagou na fanfic É sério essa fanfic parece um delírio de um punheteiro debiloide
Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Story: Ok Character: Ok Translation: Ok? Especially for the name that changed, sometimes [img=recommend][img=recommend] ...............,.......................,.................... [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
I'm sorry but this is bad. I think this is supposed go be a Chinese work that's being attempted at making it not so.. Chinese. So it's only posted by its translater. Well the story chosen has an MC that can do all sorts of things regardless of what his system gives him access to. Able to understand tech that he doesnt even gave access to. An arrogant and non thinking MC. Making things in ridiculously short times and without them being mentioned. Just suddenly having them. His super advanced creation with its ability to hack anything and subdue Jarvis is somehow amazingly dumb too. Not understanding real obvious stuff and him not bothering to give her any warning despite being some super genius. Now hes taking his crush that thought of him as a little brother to a club hes too young to be at and she doesnt seem to mind being there. Too much forcing and too much dumb for me.
揭示劇透 thank you please keep translating it the real version was trash even I could not read more than 100 chapters of the real version then I kinda dropped it it was too boring and the plotline quality kept decreasing reached in minus with all the Chinese stuff add in it
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this work has already been translated here, I abandoned it because it was too much Chinese MTL, simply unbearable to read, I hope this is not the case.
Hi, I would like to know the name of the original story and the author, if possible thank you, I believe your translation has potential but I would like to read the original and see if it has more chapters, thank you.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I have read the greatest novel on webnovel.
Its good so far so keep it up!!! I need to add additional words to post this review so i am typing additional words so i can have enough words
O autor é um bocó literalmente As ideias são excelentes mas o autor cagou na fanfic É sério essa fanfic parece um delírio de um punheteiro debiloide