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This novel is a masterpiece. Honestly, you don’t good naruto novels like this anymore. Keep up the good work author-San.
The author writes very well! She has a lot of writing potential. The story is pretty rushed, and the characters are very weak, the otsutsuki are ridiculously weak. The worst thing is the harem which is total rubbish in any soap opera but other than that it's cool!
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This is one of the best Sasuke SI that I have read!!!Keep up the great work,Author-chan!!!
Another trash author instead of choosing hinata for (m c) as main wife chooses sakura wow like mate It's the F ing Hinata Hyuga in flesh what's the point of this trash fanfic when I read the moon chapter for a sec I was genuinely excited I thought he went to moon so something can happen between him and hinata
is it abandoned? cz no update for so long hopefully author does a mass release. ..................................................................
This is a Ridiculous Story 😂 Are you Watching Boruto? You Made the Otsutsuki Plot Very Weak By Reasoning Sasuke and the others got stronger. Otusuki That Is Very Strong Tier 5B-4C Now Nerf Is Complete And Will Shibai God Otsutsuki Tier Multiverse Will Be Weakened Too 😂. His Timeline Is Too Rushed You Can Make Sasuke Reasonably Power Up After Going To Another World And Fighting The Otsutsuki 👌🔥
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For the most part, the writing quality is okay, but you keep switching tenses in the middle of the sentence for no apparent reason. And all of those POV switches bring absolutely nothing to the table. You have first POV where it's, "I did this and I went there." Followed by a third POV, "Sasuke did that and went there." Just pick one and stick with, don't pointlessly flip between the two. A POV change is supposed to give another perspective to the reader, to show how others react or think of the main character. All of yours serve none of those reasons. They are there just because.
Will Sarada be born or not? And will he also have children with others like Karin? (ps i'm sure sarada was just born out of a one night stand between sasuke and sakura😂)
Bro this novel is so good and there few novel about saskue in boruto world i hope you dont drop it or i will search on you and i will find you and i will make you beg me to kill you😊😊
I have not read it but it is good…the author-san said so. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . We can trust him…right?
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It's really good i just wish that other characters had more screen time but otherwise really good and either way this is a story about sasuke
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Saya menunggu lebih banyak bab. Baru mulai membaca. Ayo saya suka sinopsis anda terlihat sangat menjanjikan. Semangat menulis ya.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
this is really good probably one if not the best Sasuke fanfics out there keep it up [img=update]
This novel is a masterpiece. Honestly, you don’t good naruto novels like this anymore. Keep up the good work author-San.
The author writes very well! She has a lot of writing potential. The story is pretty rushed, and the characters are very weak, the otsutsuki are ridiculously weak. The worst thing is the harem which is total rubbish in any soap opera but other than that it's cool!
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This is one of the best Sasuke SI that I have read!!!Keep up the great work,Author-chan!!!
Another trash author instead of choosing hinata for (m c) as main wife chooses sakura wow like mate It's the F ing Hinata Hyuga in flesh what's the point of this trash fanfic when I read the moon chapter for a sec I was genuinely excited I thought he went to moon so something can happen between him and hinata
is it abandoned? cz no update for so long hopefully author does a mass release. ..................................................................
This is a Ridiculous Story 😂 Are you Watching Boruto? You Made the Otsutsuki Plot Very Weak By Reasoning Sasuke and the others got stronger. Otusuki That Is Very Strong Tier 5B-4C Now Nerf Is Complete And Will Shibai God Otsutsuki Tier Multiverse Will Be Weakened Too 😂. His Timeline Is Too Rushed You Can Make Sasuke Reasonably Power Up After Going To Another World And Fighting The Otsutsuki 👌🔥
Its me, I will say it again..This is good affhbf WFG D D g FGDf DwgfdF gddgDG DGdg DGgd SDGDG DGSdg ddsdsdhuid d d d d d d d d dh vwe vhew we hjewhw ew ejoehoehu
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For the most part, the writing quality is okay, but you keep switching tenses in the middle of the sentence for no apparent reason. And all of those POV switches bring absolutely nothing to the table. You have first POV where it's, "I did this and I went there." Followed by a third POV, "Sasuke did that and went there." Just pick one and stick with, don't pointlessly flip between the two. A POV change is supposed to give another perspective to the reader, to show how others react or think of the main character. All of yours serve none of those reasons. They are there just because.
Will Sarada be born or not? And will he also have children with others like Karin? (ps i'm sure sarada was just born out of a one night stand between sasuke and sakura😂)
Bro this novel is so good and there few novel about saskue in boruto world i hope you dont drop it or i will search on you and i will find you and i will make you beg me to kill you😊😊
I have not read it but it is good…the author-san said so. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . We can trust him…right?
It's good. XxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXxXx
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It's really good i just wish that other characters had more screen time but otherwise really good and either way this is a story about sasuke
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Saya menunggu lebih banyak bab. Baru mulai membaca. Ayo saya suka sinopsis anda terlihat sangat menjanjikan. Semangat menulis ya.[img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend][img=update][img=recommend]
this is really good probably one if not the best Sasuke fanfics out there keep it up [img=update]