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Here I leave my review, even though it only has one chapter I have already read more than 80 so yes, the story is good....
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meh. ..., didn't even bother to read the first two arcs , don't know those stories and never watched them, I think it is a bit too much to call this story naruto in the title if he only actually goes there after 60 chaoters and after living two other lives.. the naruto part is amazing tho.
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I’ve read up until chapter 76, the novel has a not so typical beginning, a man gaining a system to get stronger than he was before, the plot consist of mostly comedy and an overpowered protagonist, and that limits himself to have some challenge, think of it as goku trainning with mortals. the H-scenes are few(which is nice), few female character development, and quick arcs. finally is it a good read? in my case no. is the nostagia heavy on this one? yes. are there other novels that would be worth more? well alot you just have to look. anyway if you want to feel nostalgic abot your past this aint half bad.
First arc, its good and normal.. second arc, its fun and something new because of some twists of the author, it just confuses me because sometimes its not linear storytelling, im the type of a reader that binge y'see so i wait for more chaps first b4 reading again, so sometimes flashback chaps or something similar just throws me in confusion but its not that big of a problem really, just a minor thing.. the third arc, my mannn, same as usual, its good.. its fun how he mess with the characters, especially his interactions with tsunade or even the fights, how he's messin' with tobi and itachi in the 1st chap, its just funnn... but thats it, lemme stack more chaps first b4 reading again 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Author just up and decided to intentionally ruin the story in the middle by bringing in a random godlike entity who in the same chapter caused a lot of problems for mc… and the reason? Author wanted to play at being a ”madman” and give his mc a “new, never before seen ability”.
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hum.... intersestingSubarashi 😌so we'll have some win win too, and first and more important Harem
This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)
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DATOS DE LA NOVELA: La novela en si antes que el autor volviera a corregir los capítulos del 1 al 15 fue bastante basura para decirlo en palabras sencillas. Pero me di cuenta que había cambiado varias cosas al regresar accidentalmente. Y ahora es bastante buena 9/10 inicio que la última vez que lo vi era una calificación de 6/10 eso quiere decir que es un gran cambió por si mismo. (Hay que aclarar que soy bastante experimentado en novelas y creo que he leído más de 5,000 de ellos por lo que mi calificación tiene peso) La trama es bastante buena (esto con mi traducción que me proporciona el google y para mi es impecable y no sé a otros si les traduce correctamente.) La novela cumple con las espectativas más básicas y más allá. Capitulos largos y concisos. A menos que tengas gusto extraños o eres una persona muy detallista hasta el extremo exigiendo que incluso una falta de descripción te haga dejar la novela. Esta Novela es para ti. [Hay que aclarar que su familia son dioses existencia omnipotentes entre los omnipotentes, pero realmente no aparecen en la trama y solo son descripciones que apareceran al final del libro y no necesariamente afectaran a la historia ya que el mc no comienza muy fuerte o muy débil y no es una existencia que este protegido detrás de ecena. Sin embargo si muere es probable que aparezcan borrando el mundo directamente (pero realmente si muere el mc eso sería toda la historia, por lo que no es probable que eso suceda]
The story has potential but the author keeps trying to do many things at once. I don't mind mixing diff worlds but the way it is done here is incoherent. The characters are the strong part of this novel as they are portrayed decently but feel a bit off at times. Also protag gets heavy nerfs to create fake tension and makes the book a hard read. Overall not a terrible book but it could have been better if it made a bit more sense.
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ESTA CHIDA , solo espero que no la abandones a medio Aser, espero también que el próximo mundo sea ischool of the dead 🤯⭐🤯🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎😃😃👋👋👋😅😅😅😃🌎🎖️🎖️🌎🌎😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
just what I was hoping for 🙃 truly a blessing to live in a time with such an inspiring novel. it's one of the few things that makes me was to continue living.
Indifferent MC Dilema The overall content is satisfactory, but approximately half of the story focuses on the protagonist's self-centered nature and an extensive exploration of the functioning of the world... and so on. It's the third fanfiction I've come across this week that portrays the main character as indifferent. While it's understandable that authors have the freedom to write as they please in fanfiction, the concerning issue lies in the widespread admiration for such narratives without any critical feedback. It's disheartening, and it might lead me to discontinue reading fanfiction altogether after this.
The story overall is both average and weird. With the title alone, it jusy screams that its a story for Oshi no Ko but then it starts with resident evil. It feels like the resident evil arc was just their to give him some before actually going to the Oshi no Ko parts. The sudden transfer from resident evil to oshi no ko is just a strange shift in both setting and feel that its just weird.
This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)
The author slices and splices multiple stories, alternate versions of them, and their laws of physics into basically one amalgamation of nonsense. basically excuses every absurd action in the story and justifies its existence. majority of paragraphs involving the story usually are followed up with some sparknotes of the; what, why, when, where, and hows. If not that it'll be fun facts or introspective monologs about the original worlds this reality is based off or his memories. it destroys any chance of immersion. Also, he was supposed to not have powers but he goes from Vin diesel in the first fast in the furious movie then three chapters later its fast in the furious 7 and Vin diesel is stomping and collapsing parking lots. the only law in this story is the Law of convenience. So if you don't care for any framework or actual foundation and are happy with just hanging on for dear life and seeing where this story takes you then its right for you. overall its not a bad story, grammar seems pretty great and its unique overall. MC is basically the trending WN MC but quirkier, basically his moral stance is he doesn't have one.
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Well, here is my review guys. I know many think of the MC as a young master and it's a bit like that hahaha, I'll just say "character development" a lot of "character development" in the future.
Here I leave my review, even though it only has one chapter I have already read more than 80 so yes, the story is good....
C'est nul te pas emmener ses femme avec lui donc Minable [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
meh. ..., didn't even bother to read the first two arcs , don't know those stories and never watched them, I think it is a bit too much to call this story naruto in the title if he only actually goes there after 60 chaoters and after living two other lives.. the naruto part is amazing tho.
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I’ve read up until chapter 76, the novel has a not so typical beginning, a man gaining a system to get stronger than he was before, the plot consist of mostly comedy and an overpowered protagonist, and that limits himself to have some challenge, think of it as goku trainning with mortals. the H-scenes are few(which is nice), few female character development, and quick arcs. finally is it a good read? in my case no. is the nostagia heavy on this one? yes. are there other novels that would be worth more? well alot you just have to look. anyway if you want to feel nostalgic abot your past this aint half bad.
First arc, its good and normal.. second arc, its fun and something new because of some twists of the author, it just confuses me because sometimes its not linear storytelling, im the type of a reader that binge y'see so i wait for more chaps first b4 reading again, so sometimes flashback chaps or something similar just throws me in confusion but its not that big of a problem really, just a minor thing.. the third arc, my mannn, same as usual, its good.. its fun how he mess with the characters, especially his interactions with tsunade or even the fights, how he's messin' with tobi and itachi in the 1st chap, its just funnn... but thats it, lemme stack more chaps first b4 reading again 🤣🤣🤣🤣
Author just up and decided to intentionally ruin the story in the middle by bringing in a random godlike entity who in the same chapter caused a lot of problems for mc… and the reason? Author wanted to play at being a ”madman” and give his mc a “new, never before seen ability”.
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hum.... intersestingSubarashi 😌so we'll have some win win too, and first and more important Harem
This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)
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I like it don't really care if you do🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🥇🥇🥇🤜🤜🥇🥇🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜🤜
DATOS DE LA NOVELA: La novela en si antes que el autor volviera a corregir los capítulos del 1 al 15 fue bastante basura para decirlo en palabras sencillas. Pero me di cuenta que había cambiado varias cosas al regresar accidentalmente. Y ahora es bastante buena 9/10 inicio que la última vez que lo vi era una calificación de 6/10 eso quiere decir que es un gran cambió por si mismo. (Hay que aclarar que soy bastante experimentado en novelas y creo que he leído más de 5,000 de ellos por lo que mi calificación tiene peso) La trama es bastante buena (esto con mi traducción que me proporciona el google y para mi es impecable y no sé a otros si les traduce correctamente.) La novela cumple con las espectativas más básicas y más allá. Capitulos largos y concisos. A menos que tengas gusto extraños o eres una persona muy detallista hasta el extremo exigiendo que incluso una falta de descripción te haga dejar la novela. Esta Novela es para ti. [Hay que aclarar que su familia son dioses existencia omnipotentes entre los omnipotentes, pero realmente no aparecen en la trama y solo son descripciones que apareceran al final del libro y no necesariamente afectaran a la historia ya que el mc no comienza muy fuerte o muy débil y no es una existencia que este protegido detrás de ecena. Sin embargo si muere es probable que aparezcan borrando el mundo directamente (pero realmente si muere el mc eso sería toda la historia, por lo que no es probable que eso suceda]
The story has potential but the author keeps trying to do many things at once. I don't mind mixing diff worlds but the way it is done here is incoherent. The characters are the strong part of this novel as they are portrayed decently but feel a bit off at times. Also protag gets heavy nerfs to create fake tension and makes the book a hard read. Overall not a terrible book but it could have been better if it made a bit more sense.
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ESTA CHIDA , solo espero que no la abandones a medio Aser, espero también que el próximo mundo sea ischool of the dead 🤯⭐🤯🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎🌎😃😃👋👋👋😅😅😅😃🌎🎖️🎖️🌎🌎😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃
just what I was hoping for 🙃 truly a blessing to live in a time with such an inspiring novel. it's one of the few things that makes me was to continue living.
Indifferent MC Dilema The overall content is satisfactory, but approximately half of the story focuses on the protagonist's self-centered nature and an extensive exploration of the functioning of the world... and so on. It's the third fanfiction I've come across this week that portrays the main character as indifferent. While it's understandable that authors have the freedom to write as they please in fanfiction, the concerning issue lies in the widespread admiration for such narratives without any critical feedback. It's disheartening, and it might lead me to discontinue reading fanfiction altogether after this.
The story overall is both average and weird. With the title alone, it jusy screams that its a story for Oshi no Ko but then it starts with resident evil. It feels like the resident evil arc was just their to give him some before actually going to the Oshi no Ko parts. The sudden transfer from resident evil to oshi no ko is just a strange shift in both setting and feel that its just weird.
This story in summary is something like. There was a man who put hamburger In hotdog's bread and trying to sell it telling everyone that it's just a hotdog... Story is too confusing .You gave too much details on the start of the story about his family therefore just making room for your story progression but in the same time just making what everyone else make. You aim to heaven but you forgot that you are still on earth. Writing quality is okay, it some this are slightly better it would be 5 star. Updating Stability is ok. In your place I would change title. it's too confusing and it will only make some ppls hate your novel for confusing them and making them waste time .(like me)
The author slices and splices multiple stories, alternate versions of them, and their laws of physics into basically one amalgamation of nonsense. basically excuses every absurd action in the story and justifies its existence. majority of paragraphs involving the story usually are followed up with some sparknotes of the; what, why, when, where, and hows. If not that it'll be fun facts or introspective monologs about the original worlds this reality is based off or his memories. it destroys any chance of immersion. Also, he was supposed to not have powers but he goes from Vin diesel in the first fast in the furious movie then three chapters later its fast in the furious 7 and Vin diesel is stomping and collapsing parking lots. the only law in this story is the Law of convenience. So if you don't care for any framework or actual foundation and are happy with just hanging on for dear life and seeing where this story takes you then its right for you. overall its not a bad story, grammar seems pretty great and its unique overall. MC is basically the trending WN MC but quirkier, basically his moral stance is he doesn't have one.
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Well, here is my review guys. I know many think of the MC as a young master and it's a bit like that hahaha, I'll just say "character development" a lot of "character development" in the future.