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章節 15: it has been long since i saw her smile like that

<p>  (We were heading to the living room,when I saw a woman approaching us,I knew the  woman was pat mom,pat looks exactly like her mom)hi mom(pat said smiling)You are back(pat added)yes my sugar pie(pat mom answered,she was not too short,has black hair,red lips and well shaped body too).<br/><br/>   Good afternoon ma(I greeted)how are you?(pat mom asked)am fine thank you ma(I replied again)Val,meet my mom,Mrs Leah brown (pat introduce her mom to me)nice to meet you ma(i said again).<br/><br/>                Val pov NARRATOR <br/>  So pat surname is brown,nice,pat look exactly like her mom,she is a carbon copy of her mom,I knew that the woman was her mom immediately I saw her,her mom is beautiful.<br/><br/>    I felt kind of sad,do you know why?well because of that name LEAH,it reminded me of that good for nothing woman that made my dad abandon me and my mom,but I didn't show it out,let's continue.<br/><br/>   Mom,I want to drop her off(pat said as she peck her mom on her cheek) alright dear,be careful (Mrs brown said)sure mom(pat said)bye(we both chorus)wait a minute(Mrs brown said as we were going,so we stopped walking and turned)yes mom(pat answered).<br/><br/>   You did not tell me your name,dear(Mrs Brown said with a soft voice) oh,sorry ma,my name is Valeria(I said wearing a smile)such a sweet name(Mrs brown praises)thanks ma(I said)hope you come visit soon?(Mrs brown asked) yes ma,when I am chance(I repiled, she smiled then left,then we left too).<br/><br/>    (We came out of the house and got into the car)I think my mom likes you(pat said as she starts the engine)well,I don't think so(I said)I am telling you(pat said)well I hope you keep to your promise and come visit us sometimes(pat added)sure(I replied,then she drove away).<br/><br/>     (We later arrived at my house at 4:30pm mom was already at home,i came down from the car)would you like to come in?(I asked as I looked thought the wind of the car)sure,dont need to ask twice(pat answered as she got down from the car).<br/>    (I opened the door and we went into the house) mom,am back!!(i shouted from the living room) welcome,but where have you been?(mom answered then asked as she comes out of the kitchen)You brought a friend(mom said smiling on seeing pat).<br/>   <br/>             Val pov NARRATOR <br/>     I could see the happiness in my mom's eye the moment she saw pat,I know that she normally smile but this her smile was very different,it has been long since i saw her smile in that manner,let just continue.<br/><br/>     Yes,mom meet Patricia brown(I introduce pat to mom)good afternoon mam(pat greeted)afternoon dear, how was your day?(mom asked pat)it was great (pat answered,mom then turned to me)finally you have gotten yourself a friend(mom said holding my cheek and smiling too).<br/><br/>             Val pov NARRATOR <br/>   I know my mom is very happy now,it is her wish that I have a lot of friends,well seeing my mom happy makes me happy too,let's continue.<br/><br/>     Please,I know she can be rude and all that sometimes but please take care of her and don't leave her side(mom said as she hold pat by the hand)mom!(I said feeling shy)what's the matter?(mom asked me then turned to pat)i won't leave her I promise(pat promise my mom).<br/>   Alright,thanks dear (mom said with a smile)i am coming(mom said as she went to the kitchen then she came back with a can of soda and a sachet of Tim-Tam)have it (mom said to pat) thanks ma(pat said as she collected it from her).<br/>   I will take my leave now(pat said as she gave me a hug)okay then(I said)don't forget what we discuss(I added with a smile)not at all,I will get back to you tomorrow (pat said)ha ha ha(I started laughing)what??(pat asked feeling confused)we don't have class tomorrow,we only have class on Thursday(I reminded her).<br/>    Oh my,I forgot,on Thursday then(pat said with a smile)sure(I replied)bye ma(pat said to my mom)bye dear,send my regards to your parent(mom said)alright ma(pat answered as she walk to the door,I followed her out,I watch her as she entered her car and drove away,I smiled and waved at her,I went into the house after she had left).VALERIA(he caused it)<br/> Episode 15<br/>  It has been long since I saw her smile😊☺<br/><br/>  (We were heading to the living room,when I saw a woman approaching us,I knew the  woman was pat mom,pat looks exactly like her mom)hi mom(pat said smiling)You are back(pat added)yes my sugar pie(pat mom answered,she was not too short,has black hair,red lips and well shaped body too).<br/><br/>   Good afternoon ma(I greeted)how are you?(pat mom asked)am fine thank you ma(I replied again)Val,meet my mom,Mrs Leah brown (pat introduce her mom to me)nice to meet you ma(i said again).<br/><br/>                Val pov NARRATOR <br/>  So pat surname is brown,nice,pat look exactly like her mom,she is a carbon copy of her mom,I knew that the woman was her mom immediately I saw her,her mom is beautiful.<br/><br/>    I felt kind of sad,do you know why?well because of that name LEAH,it reminded me of that good for nothing woman that made my dad abandon me and my mom,but I didn't show it out,let's continue.<br/><br/>   Mom,I want to drop her off(pat said as she peck her mom on her cheek) alright dear,be careful (Mrs brown said)sure mom(pat said)bye(we both chorus)wait a minute(Mrs brown said as we were going,so we stopped walking and turned)yes mom(pat answered).<br/><br/>   You did not tell me your name,dear(Mrs Brown said with a soft voice) oh,sorry ma,my name is Valeria(I said wearing a smile)such a sweet name(Mrs brown praises)thanks ma(I said)hope you come visit soon?(Mrs brown asked) yes ma,when I am chance(I repiled, she smiled then left,then we left too).<br/><br/>    (We came out of the house and got into the car)I think my mom likes you(pat said as she starts the engine)well,I don't think so(I said)I am telling you(pat said)well I hope you keep to your promise and come visit us sometimes(pat added)sure(I replied,then she drove away).<br/><br/>     (We later arrived at my house at 4:30pm mom was already at home,i came down from the car)would you like to come in?(I asked as I looked thought the wind of the car)sure,dont need to ask twice(pat answered as she got down from the car).<br/>    (I opened the door and we went into the house) mom,am back!!(i shouted from the living room) welcome,but where have you been?(mom answered then asked as she comes out of the kitchen)You brought a friend(mom said smiling on seeing pat).<br/>   <br/>             Val pov NARRATOR <br/>     I could see the happiness in my mom's eye the moment she saw pat,I know that she normally smile but this her smile was very different,it has been long since i saw her smile in that manner,let just continue.<br/><br/>     Yes,mom meet Patricia brown(I introduce pat to mom)good afternoon mam(pat greeted)afternoon dear, how was your day?(mom asked pat)it was great (pat answered,mom then turned to me)finally you have gotten yourself a friend(mom said holding my cheek and smiling too).<br/><br/>             Val pov NARRATOR <br/>   I know my mom is very happy now,it is her wish that I have a lot of friends,well seeing my mom happy makes me happy too,let's continue.<br/><br/>     Please,I know she can be rude and all that sometimes but please take care of her and don't leave her side(mom said as she hold pat by the hand)mom!(I said feeling shy)what's the matter?(mom asked me then turned to pat)i won't leave her I promise(pat promise my mom).<br/>   Alright,thanks dear (mom said with a smile)i am coming(mom said as she went to the kitchen then she came back with a can of soda and a sachet of Tim-Tam)have it (mom said to pat) thanks ma(pat said as she collected it from her).<br/>   I will take my leave now(pat said as she gave me a hug)okay then(I said)don't forget what we discuss(I added with a smile)not at all,I will get back to you tomorrow (pat said)ha ha ha(I started laughing)what??(pat asked feeling confused)we don't have class tomorrow,we only have class on Thursday(I reminded her).<br/>    Oh my,I forgot,on Thursday then(pat said with a smile)sure(I replied)bye ma(pat said to my mom)bye dear,send my regards to your parent(mom said)alright ma(pat answered as she walk to the door,I followed her out,I watch her as she entered her car and drove away,I smiled and waved at her,I went into the house after she had left).</p>


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