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I like your story so far, just need to keep up the updates, even once a week is better than none. The mc, also need to know more about and people he is close to (like Villetta Nu, could include Orpheus Zevon from Peace Mark mercenary/rebel organization) inserting into the Code Geass world. Overall, a good start
I like your story so far, just need to keep up the updates, even once a week is better than none. The mc, also need to know more about and people he is close to (like Villetta Nu, could include Orpheus Zevon from Peace Mark mercenary/rebel organization) inserting into the Code Geass world. Overall, a good start