3評論
- 寫作品質
- 更新的穩定性
- 故事發展
- 人物形象設計
- 世界背景
與他人分享您的想法
寫檢討
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Eu gostei espero que você continue postando, e uma ideia incrível........................................................... .............. .............................................
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it's fine the only things I think need improvement were the fights and passing
LV 1 ![Badge]()
Eu gostei espero que você continue postando, e uma ideia incrível........................................................... .............. .............................................
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it's fine the only things I think need improvement were the fights and passing
how am I supposed feel about if there nothing there