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寫檢討Soy tu fan pero la verdad supongo que está historia no es para mí, siento que es un tanto demasiado relajada y aburrida en cuestión del puro protagonista, siento que le falta un enfoque un poco más desarrollado que simplemente sacar problemas de la nada para el protagonista (así lo sentí yo una disculpa si no les parece)
Lol, this isn't good at all. The protagonist is mix of the worse traits, such as being obnoxious and clueless, with neither thoughts or plans, and has a personality of a child with npc level intelligence. His abilities are just being lucky and eating food, completely ignoring any magic and spells, simply because he's too lazy to do anything. The plot itself is just illogical nonsense, that consists of random events put together without any reason/structure, and anything interesting is replaced with mindless slice of life and unbearable soap opera drama, that contributes nothing to the plot. The writing, worldbuilding and dialogue is laughable that will make you feel like your are reading a children's book.
I'd say it is average at best. And this is when taking into consideration that this is a FF on Webnovel xD. But for real tho... The Author's English isn't that bad, but this Story feels ...idk, wrong I guess. The Mc is basically a God that can up to the chapters I read influence the World more than logically possible. It just feels out of place because the Author said that he writes Slice of Life Stories with a deep Plot slowly revealing itself and I don't see it happening solely because of how you wrote the Mc. I don't know man. May sound toxic, but the way I would describe this is : " You tried your best"
I'm deceived by this story... i thought its gonna be wholesome but its phenomenal how sad i am for the MC. You want a true rising of a Dark Lord story? Well, this story is for you!
when reading this fanfic for me it's like eating delicious fish with a lot of bone in it. the reason is because mc blood become luck potion at least in my eye those thing scream tragedy for me, despite if i remember correctly author said that mc will only get high reward in high risk situations, it's make me feel uncomfortable and just want to blood thingy to be (solved?).
Not my cup of tea if I'm honest.. a pretty classic isekai type premise but he doesn't care about magic and just eats food while making things slightly easier for the golden trio. the author says in other comments that there are "huge conflicts" but I didn't see any of them and I'm up to date. I mean unless you call the random things he throws in conflict. for example but not limited to Neville trying to use crucio at his sorting ceremony (before he casts Lumos), when he couldn't even muster up that sort of rage against Bellatrix later in the books. its just nonsense drama the author made up not real engaging conflict. its a slice of life novel, no need to advertise it as something else.
MisterImmortal, the one and only GORILLA, is writing this fic. I haven't even read a chapter yet, but this is DEFINITELY good.
I dont think its possible for sir gorrila to actually write something bad. I love you and I would die for you <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
An amazing story that was initially sunny and happy but turned out to be serious nevertheless I find it interesting The writer is wonderful as usual continue the good work I advise everyone to read it قصة مذهلة كانت في البداية مشمسة وسعيدة ولكن تحولت الى جدية مع ذلك اجدها ممتعة الكاتب رائع مثل العادة استمر بالعمل الجيد انصح الجميع بقراتها
I like the story, and his power. And my only request is, please don't let him suffer ever again and let him have a good life so that he can go around the world and eat as many as he can. Also, there should be some bloodbath too.Peace Out
The story has its interesting moment. It is also comprehensible. But for the most part it's boring. The main character is pretty bland and he's way too cheerful and way too positive for me. I guess if you like a slice of life with a overly optimistic and sickly HAPPY protagonist. This might be the story for you.
I like it very much, but just make sure that Happy will not suffer as he have already suffered enough in his first life. And I like his power, even though it is a curse if someone else knows about it very well. I know that it haven't ended, but thank you for a wonderful story,
Literally every other thing our great ape has written has been a banger, of course this would be a slam dunk. Now just to do a bit of a more proper review I love how the story is going (currently on Chapter 21 which is about 2/3 through 1st HP Book). The MC (Happy) is well developed, has goals, feelings, aspirations, faults, and more. Another thing I want to note is how well developed and detailed the world is, everything that needs description is given it and interactions between characters make them come to life. You usually only see this level of quality in published, editor reviewed, novels. Also, usually I'd be a bit critical of an MC who is a bit naive and "dumb" in their actions if they previously were shown to be "smart" but in this case Happy is a reincarnated child who makes childish mistakes that he'll have to pay for later so I'm 100% behind him! Now faults or areas to improve. Starting with the most minor, some spelling or odd syntax statements that really only come about every other chapter once or twice. In terms of characters or the story that is difficult to say when we're only 31 chapters in but perhaps add other student viewpoints to see what they're up to and if Happy's actions caused any direct butterfly effects in their lives firsthand.
My feeling for this novel is uncertain right now. Comparing to the last HP fanfic by the author, I can't see a clear end goal for this. I guess this is more slice of life novel with the mc want to enjoy food, but I kinda see this is a little mis-opportunity because a mc that loves eating should be in a anime world like Toriko, where the food actually gives power. Given that food maybe considered as a part of HP not something that I would think of when mentioning HP. Also, Britain is definitely not one of the place when I think of in term of good food. I think I'm being harsh with this review, but I can't really see how this character will be developed. Since the mc is just enjoy food in a world where food is abundant he has no reason to be stronger to enjoy food, he might need to be stronger but it's unlikely related to food. Second, I guess this doesn't have any romance either since the mc is too passionate about food, and I enjoyed your previous novels that have hints of romance. So, a mc not getting stronger to eat better food (dream) since it's abundant and uncertainty of romance, the two aspects I'm looking for in a novel. Finally, I'm not saying this novel is bad in any mean, but maybe not for me.
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very much loving this very good character development and story progression. and I can't wait for more.
bruh bro since this is from our favorite monke ,I'm sure it will be good Oh by the way on the cover of Monkey D Luffy in the form of a goose?
He should be Hufflepuff tbf ......................................................................................................................................
Soy tu fan pero la verdad supongo que está historia no es para mí, siento que es un tanto demasiado relajada y aburrida en cuestión del puro protagonista, siento que le falta un enfoque un poco más desarrollado que simplemente sacar problemas de la nada para el protagonista (así lo sentí yo una disculpa si no les parece)
Lol, this isn't good at all. The protagonist is mix of the worse traits, such as being obnoxious and clueless, with neither thoughts or plans, and has a personality of a child with npc level intelligence. His abilities are just being lucky and eating food, completely ignoring any magic and spells, simply because he's too lazy to do anything. The plot itself is just illogical nonsense, that consists of random events put together without any reason/structure, and anything interesting is replaced with mindless slice of life and unbearable soap opera drama, that contributes nothing to the plot. The writing, worldbuilding and dialogue is laughable that will make you feel like your are reading a children's book.
I'd say it is average at best. And this is when taking into consideration that this is a FF on Webnovel xD. But for real tho... The Author's English isn't that bad, but this Story feels ...idk, wrong I guess. The Mc is basically a God that can up to the chapters I read influence the World more than logically possible. It just feels out of place because the Author said that he writes Slice of Life Stories with a deep Plot slowly revealing itself and I don't see it happening solely because of how you wrote the Mc. I don't know man. May sound toxic, but the way I would describe this is : " You tried your best"
I'm deceived by this story... i thought its gonna be wholesome but its phenomenal how sad i am for the MC. You want a true rising of a Dark Lord story? Well, this story is for you!
when reading this fanfic for me it's like eating delicious fish with a lot of bone in it. the reason is because mc blood become luck potion at least in my eye those thing scream tragedy for me, despite if i remember correctly author said that mc will only get high reward in high risk situations, it's make me feel uncomfortable and just want to blood thingy to be (solved?).
Not my cup of tea if I'm honest.. a pretty classic isekai type premise but he doesn't care about magic and just eats food while making things slightly easier for the golden trio. the author says in other comments that there are "huge conflicts" but I didn't see any of them and I'm up to date. I mean unless you call the random things he throws in conflict. for example but not limited to Neville trying to use crucio at his sorting ceremony (before he casts Lumos), when he couldn't even muster up that sort of rage against Bellatrix later in the books. its just nonsense drama the author made up not real engaging conflict. its a slice of life novel, no need to advertise it as something else.
MisterImmortal, the one and only GORILLA, is writing this fic. I haven't even read a chapter yet, but this is DEFINITELY good.
I dont think its possible for sir gorrila to actually write something bad. I love you and I would die for you <3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3<3
An amazing story that was initially sunny and happy but turned out to be serious nevertheless I find it interesting The writer is wonderful as usual continue the good work I advise everyone to read it قصة مذهلة كانت في البداية مشمسة وسعيدة ولكن تحولت الى جدية مع ذلك اجدها ممتعة الكاتب رائع مثل العادة استمر بالعمل الجيد انصح الجميع بقراتها
I like the story, and his power. And my only request is, please don't let him suffer ever again and let him have a good life so that he can go around the world and eat as many as he can. Also, there should be some bloodbath too.Peace Out
The story has its interesting moment. It is also comprehensible. But for the most part it's boring. The main character is pretty bland and he's way too cheerful and way too positive for me. I guess if you like a slice of life with a overly optimistic and sickly HAPPY protagonist. This might be the story for you.
I like it very much, but just make sure that Happy will not suffer as he have already suffered enough in his first life. And I like his power, even though it is a curse if someone else knows about it very well. I know that it haven't ended, but thank you for a wonderful story,
Literally every other thing our great ape has written has been a banger, of course this would be a slam dunk. Now just to do a bit of a more proper review I love how the story is going (currently on Chapter 21 which is about 2/3 through 1st HP Book). The MC (Happy) is well developed, has goals, feelings, aspirations, faults, and more. Another thing I want to note is how well developed and detailed the world is, everything that needs description is given it and interactions between characters make them come to life. You usually only see this level of quality in published, editor reviewed, novels. Also, usually I'd be a bit critical of an MC who is a bit naive and "dumb" in their actions if they previously were shown to be "smart" but in this case Happy is a reincarnated child who makes childish mistakes that he'll have to pay for later so I'm 100% behind him! Now faults or areas to improve. Starting with the most minor, some spelling or odd syntax statements that really only come about every other chapter once or twice. In terms of characters or the story that is difficult to say when we're only 31 chapters in but perhaps add other student viewpoints to see what they're up to and if Happy's actions caused any direct butterfly effects in their lives firsthand.
My feeling for this novel is uncertain right now. Comparing to the last HP fanfic by the author, I can't see a clear end goal for this. I guess this is more slice of life novel with the mc want to enjoy food, but I kinda see this is a little mis-opportunity because a mc that loves eating should be in a anime world like Toriko, where the food actually gives power. Given that food maybe considered as a part of HP not something that I would think of when mentioning HP. Also, Britain is definitely not one of the place when I think of in term of good food. I think I'm being harsh with this review, but I can't really see how this character will be developed. Since the mc is just enjoy food in a world where food is abundant he has no reason to be stronger to enjoy food, he might need to be stronger but it's unlikely related to food. Second, I guess this doesn't have any romance either since the mc is too passionate about food, and I enjoyed your previous novels that have hints of romance. So, a mc not getting stronger to eat better food (dream) since it's abundant and uncertainty of romance, the two aspects I'm looking for in a novel. Finally, I'm not saying this novel is bad in any mean, but maybe not for me.
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very much loving this very good character development and story progression. and I can't wait for more.
bruh bro since this is from our favorite monke ,I'm sure it will be good Oh by the way on the cover of Monkey D Luffy in the form of a goose?
He should be Hufflepuff tbf ......................................................................................................................................