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novel excellent shame it has few chapters I recommend developing a novel and more about the character's physique I'm tired of protas always being "thin with compressed muscles" this was or maybe an anti-cliche that turned into a big deal thank you so much for writing bro
This is a good novel so far im looking forward to all the regretful reactions
This history have potential i mean i could be anything and i think it would very interesting Really hope ypu continue whit this novel its very interesting i like that hephestus didnt forgive aphrite so easily See you later
novel excellent shame it has few chapters I recommend developing a novel and more about the character's physique I'm tired of protas always being "thin with compressed muscles" this was or maybe an anti-cliche that turned into a big deal thank you so much for writing bro
This is a good novel so far im looking forward to all the regretful reactions
This history have potential i mean i could be anything and i think it would very interesting Really hope ypu continue whit this novel its very interesting i like that hephestus didnt forgive aphrite so easily See you later