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I really like this, the writing and explanations of the powers of one peice were straightfoward and clear, cant wait for more chapters. question tho, will the main character get a fruit in the future or solely focus on swordmanship and haki?
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I really like this, the writing and explanations of the powers of one peice were straightfoward and clear, cant wait for more chapters. question tho, will the main character get a fruit in the future or solely focus on swordmanship and haki?
author, please up the chapter. i love your writing