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I'm been waiting for Mushoku Tensei fanfic for a while now, even thought there are some good one that still continues. I hope this one not gonna drop like other fanfics out there.
(I use Google translator) There are not many chapters in the book, but the potential is good. I can’t say in which direction the book will go and I can only hope that the book doesn’t turn into a crazy harem. You know, you get tired of stories where the main character picks up literally all the beautiful girls. I wish you good luck author-san!!!
Es muy buena la historia pero muy demorado en la subida de capitulo es muy lento. Sinceramente si sube capitulo con este tiempo depronto queda abandonado la historia
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I'm been waiting for Mushoku Tensei fanfic for a while now, even thought there are some good one that still continues. I hope this one not gonna drop like other fanfics out there.
(I use Google translator) There are not many chapters in the book, but the potential is good. I can’t say in which direction the book will go and I can only hope that the book doesn’t turn into a crazy harem. You know, you get tired of stories where the main character picks up literally all the beautiful girls. I wish you good luck author-san!!!
Es muy buena la historia pero muy demorado en la subida de capitulo es muy lento. Sinceramente si sube capitulo con este tiempo depronto queda abandonado la historia