Naruto: The Fool in Konoha

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_Bruh

Story was kinda cringe And then it became exponentially more cringe when he confirmed it was going to be a harem story Just add the harem tag bro

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The_Crimson_Abyss

Writing:5 Plot: 5 Unique:4 So far I have enjoyed all chapters published and can without a doubt say it is worth reading.

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anubis1650

Current Chapter 17/XVI Review I have to say this has a lot of potential already a good read and I think it will get just get better. Story seems to be decently original and the MC doesn't seem to be following the normal Canon route or the I don't want to mess with the plot cliche. I suspect eventually the butterflies will be many.😁😁

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malinizgeldii

If we give 10 points to the darkness of the original naruto, this novel gets 2 points. The reason is many things. For example, danzo does not react at all. mc is very talented and is friends with itachi and shishu. As everyone knows, uchia are constantly watched over by root and anvu. It's okay if it's just a friend. mc then takes Naruto from the orphanage, because he was taken prisoner. hiruzen allows it. Hiruzen, who placed Naruto there for bad manners in the first place, so he would never allow it. He does nothing to mcye, who spoils a looted one so that he can be mistreated and then save him. let's say hiruzen did not cause any trouble. what about danzo? danzo should have kidnapped mc that same evening and forcefully read his memories. because that's exactly what danzo does. danzo 9 wouldn't let the tail be in the hands of a possible spy (danzo thought so). As a result, such things abound. Also, I think there is a harem, which is another reason not to read it.

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Insta_username

Story is bit all over the place First mc said he will say clear off the story he is not a hero let prophecy child take care of the world Then he kinda somewhat adopted the said prophecy child, then there is his Imoto-chan non-academy student who performed transformation justu within few minutes which mind you is one of the final exams in academy. Then just with some introduction book about fuinjustu he was able to create storage scroll Yes he has instant comprehension but even so it is not like "MC said let there be storage scroll" then there was storage scroll And his secret training place is "A secret room in sewage" Man damzo is Bowery king of konoha he lays there, if you wanna stay clear of danzo don't go to secert rooms with fuinjustu and genjutsu in sewage 😩😩

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Dani

I'm promoting this novel, it deserve it, well written, character with depth and original Naruto fanfiction way better than those Chinese's one ! keep up the good work! [img=recommend] [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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Daoist_Dan

I'm pretty hooked. Imo the story is struggling to find its feat a little bit after the start was finished, but nothing that makes reading unenjoyable, and I'm hopeful things will improve. I suggest giving it a try. For whatever a random person's opinion is worth.

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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EmmericH

Pretty nice and refreshing, I just hope it will not be dropped and will have some updates in the future, the story seems promising

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Ouranos_Gein

Read this, you won't regret it..........👍

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Left_Nut_Of_Madara

While nice the story focuses so much on slice of life that it looses the whole shinobi thing completely and you just get a really nice but shy kid with superpowers so if you are looking for a genuine shinobi fic I would recommend that you dont start here or if it changes in the future at least skip the first 40 chapters at least to avoid it.[img=faceslap]

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Secondworldgod

The story is good, atleast a very good start, with no murderous psychopathic MC who only wants to use everybody for their own gains. So there is nothing inherently wrong with the story, I mean there are a lot of stuff he could exploit from the Canon to gain strength as well. So good job author.

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Himawari13

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Immortalchickenleg

quite rare reading a naruto fic with a fuinjutsu focus, especially with excellent writing. Gonna enjoy reading this , thanks author!.........................

I hope you ain’ going stop writing this fan fic it have soo much potential I love it ✍🏾💙 Keep the good work

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Arman_lesmana

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TIFOEL

Средней паршивости фанфик. Герой тугодум. застенчивый тугодум. Талантливый? Сомнительно талантливый... Я пытался это читать но потом Дружба с Итачи и Шисуи. Кража Наруто! И никто не реагирует, не промывает ему мозги. не расследует... полный бред. Он в деревне ниндзя или милых пони?

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Cj_Ali

so far so good but you need to do time skips to get to the good parts................................................................................................................................................