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bro can anyone tell me where to read this novel for free I'm stuck at ch 19
nah what's up with them female leads being non Indian but having Indian parents bruh
A good start . But the character is getting OP too much very quickly . It feels like he doesn't have to work to upgrade his skills . And bro why are you so greedy? only 11% of the story is unlocked and I have to pay to access the rest of the story. if i knew I wouldn't get to half way part of the story I wouldn't even have gotten started on this .
this is a nice novel to read but, there are just too many gratefulness lines, i mean MC is grateful of everything, i mean its not bad that he is grateful but its very repetitive to read it in every other paragraph.i mean he doesn't experience any other emotions except for gratefulness. isn't that like boring to read?? like he is from kalyug bro but he has more compassion and righteousness than someone who is from satyuga. well that's all and nove has a nice story.✌🏻
Thank you for writing a Novel on Mahabharata. its good to see. hope you write a Naruto fenfic of MCs Journey in Ninja world with power of Karna or Indrajit. Naruto already has concept from Hinduism as Indra and Asura, the sons of Sage of six paths. for those who don't know. Indra(devas) and Asuras are both children of Maharshi Kashyapa (Sage/Rishi).
bro it would have been cool if you let karna have the ability to harness arrors without a quiver
bro can u let me read your whole novel for 500rs ... actually all chapters are are quite expensive .. if u can reply this 🤝
Your story so far is very good. I think you should make a new novel. this is my personal request. "A modern young boy of India who is follower of Tenali Rama show of SAB TV get reincarnated as an extra when the first episode started . he thought that by following the story he can enjoy this ancient life and start doing it but he discover that this is not the same as so because some people have super human strength and some people have magical powers and there are some mysterious beings that are spotted by him" Can you make a new novel using this synopsis please
This is a 90℅ percent copy of the novel "I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata". I know it's hard to start from nothing but taking inspiration is good but not outright copying
constantly my free read but decent book not amazing but it's a good read
Good to see some Indian stuff after reading all the senseless names . I do share your opinion on karnataka he deserved better. All the best
I knew it was gonna be trash when I saw the harem tag. A cringey Chinese novel seems to have been the inspiration behind this. There are many novels and fanfics on this platform written by Indians that don't ape the Chinese and Korean style. They're very much enjoyable. Desi style suits Mahabharat rather than a Chinese knockoff writing style.
Start was good but MC start to behaving like typical Japanese isekai MC. didn't MC transmigrated from kalyug than he should act like that .That other novel Karna with 1million critic system that is dope in that MC feels real.
It's a good story, i really like it but the drama is too much, It's not a bad thing but i hope you slightly decreased it
( This is my first time writing a review ) When this novel showed up, i was very surprised and at the same time, very critical of it. When i read it, i easily binged up about 100 Chaps. Pros : World background is very well fleshed out. Author understood his assignment. Really Loved the mixing of cultivation with this genre, as it actually makes so much sense. Cons : Mc ( personal bias ) And Introduction Of Kurama. Mc gets really annoying [ He really likes to push his luck unnecessarily ]. My Major con was introduction of kurama. Like the story was consistent with mahabharat theme for about 100 chaps, then kurama was introduced. The way, Author introduced Kurama as a character was way too obvious ( ~Wynk Wynk~ ). For me, this novel is massive game changer in genre and potential, hope the author would not use the formula of using Girl1 Girl2 Girl3 Girl4 for the sake of Girl1 Girl2 Girl3 Girl4 in the story.
You can write some new books. One of them will be hit 🔥 So don’t be discouraged🥲
Hey author the story is Great. But I noticed that you have given him both the axe and chaos blades but in God Of War it's mentioned that the one weirding the chaos blades loses his sanity with time and becomes the one to kill his lov3d ones. So isn't it like a curse more than a power for the MC. One thing is that I think is that Karan never used an axe in the mahabharata I mean it's okay that he is using an axe but it would have been better if he used the Vidyudabhi instead of the axe you have given him as it is Lord Parshuram's weapon and it would have been an heirloom he gave to his disciple. But overall great story 5 on 5.
bro can anyone tell me where to read this novel for free I'm stuck at ch 19
nah what's up with them female leads being non Indian but having Indian parents bruh
A good start . But the character is getting OP too much very quickly . It feels like he doesn't have to work to upgrade his skills . And bro why are you so greedy? only 11% of the story is unlocked and I have to pay to access the rest of the story. if i knew I wouldn't get to half way part of the story I wouldn't even have gotten started on this .
this is a nice novel to read but, there are just too many gratefulness lines, i mean MC is grateful of everything, i mean its not bad that he is grateful but its very repetitive to read it in every other paragraph.i mean he doesn't experience any other emotions except for gratefulness. isn't that like boring to read?? like he is from kalyug bro but he has more compassion and righteousness than someone who is from satyuga. well that's all and nove has a nice story.✌🏻
Thank you for writing a Novel on Mahabharata. its good to see. hope you write a Naruto fenfic of MCs Journey in Ninja world with power of Karna or Indrajit. Naruto already has concept from Hinduism as Indra and Asura, the sons of Sage of six paths. for those who don't know. Indra(devas) and Asuras are both children of Maharshi Kashyapa (Sage/Rishi).
bro it would have been cool if you let karna have the ability to harness arrors without a quiver
bro can u let me read your whole novel for 500rs ... actually all chapters are are quite expensive .. if u can reply this 🤝
Your story so far is very good. I think you should make a new novel. this is my personal request. "A modern young boy of India who is follower of Tenali Rama show of SAB TV get reincarnated as an extra when the first episode started . he thought that by following the story he can enjoy this ancient life and start doing it but he discover that this is not the same as so because some people have super human strength and some people have magical powers and there are some mysterious beings that are spotted by him" Can you make a new novel using this synopsis please
This is a 90℅ percent copy of the novel "I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata". I know it's hard to start from nothing but taking inspiration is good but not outright copying
constantly my free read but decent book not amazing but it's a good read
Good to see some Indian stuff after reading all the senseless names . I do share your opinion on karnataka he deserved better. All the best
I knew it was gonna be trash when I saw the harem tag. A cringey Chinese novel seems to have been the inspiration behind this. There are many novels and fanfics on this platform written by Indians that don't ape the Chinese and Korean style. They're very much enjoyable. Desi style suits Mahabharat rather than a Chinese knockoff writing style.
Start was good but MC start to behaving like typical Japanese isekai MC. didn't MC transmigrated from kalyug than he should act like that .That other novel Karna with 1million critic system that is dope in that MC feels real.
It's a good story, i really like it but the drama is too much, It's not a bad thing but i hope you slightly decreased it
( This is my first time writing a review ) When this novel showed up, i was very surprised and at the same time, very critical of it. When i read it, i easily binged up about 100 Chaps. Pros : World background is very well fleshed out. Author understood his assignment. Really Loved the mixing of cultivation with this genre, as it actually makes so much sense. Cons : Mc ( personal bias ) And Introduction Of Kurama. Mc gets really annoying [ He really likes to push his luck unnecessarily ]. My Major con was introduction of kurama. Like the story was consistent with mahabharat theme for about 100 chaps, then kurama was introduced. The way, Author introduced Kurama as a character was way too obvious ( ~Wynk Wynk~ ). For me, this novel is massive game changer in genre and potential, hope the author would not use the formula of using Girl1 Girl2 Girl3 Girl4 for the sake of Girl1 Girl2 Girl3 Girl4 in the story.
You can write some new books. One of them will be hit 🔥 So don’t be discouraged🥲
Hey author the story is Great. But I noticed that you have given him both the axe and chaos blades but in God Of War it's mentioned that the one weirding the chaos blades loses his sanity with time and becomes the one to kill his lov3d ones. So isn't it like a curse more than a power for the MC. One thing is that I think is that Karan never used an axe in the mahabharata I mean it's okay that he is using an axe but it would have been better if he used the Vidyudabhi instead of the axe you have given him as it is Lord Parshuram's weapon and it would have been an heirloom he gave to his disciple. But overall great story 5 on 5.
Any more fanfic’s like this?………………………….