Reviews of A journey in black clover by Ryuma_3391 - Webnovel

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  • 故事發展
  • 人物形象設計
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irfandika

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Ryuma_3391

Hello!, I am the author of this book. I don't have enough confidence to state that this novel will be decent, it will be an average(trash) read and I don't recommend anybody to read this unless they have nothing to read.

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Cibeu
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I'm unable to offer much in the way of opinion given the single chapter, however, given the four-day lapse, I'm assuming the book has been dropped, yet I shall proceed to give my advice on the issues I’ve found. Numerous places could benefit from a coma. I can spot one with a quick glance. Your writing should illustrate rather than declare through excessive adverb use. Adverbs are commonly too lackadaisical in literary works, especially creative ones. However, that’s just my opinion, and a lot of other authors seemed to agree with it. Author, I hope you don’t actually drop the book and continue to publish more chapters!

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irfandika

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Ryuma_3391

Hello!, I am the author of this book. I don't have enough confidence to state that this novel will be decent, it will be an average(trash) read and I don't recommend anybody to read this unless they have nothing to read.

1yr
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Cibeu
LV 12 Badge

I'm unable to offer much in the way of opinion given the single chapter, however, given the four-day lapse, I'm assuming the book has been dropped, yet I shall proceed to give my advice on the issues I’ve found. Numerous places could benefit from a coma. I can spot one with a quick glance. Your writing should illustrate rather than declare through excessive adverb use. Adverbs are commonly too lackadaisical in literary works, especially creative ones. However, that’s just my opinion, and a lot of other authors seemed to agree with it. Author, I hope you don’t actually drop the book and continue to publish more chapters!

1yr
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