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I'm colombian and this book about a Colombian Empire is fabulous. Give a chance.
The novel was great and all 10/10 you should read it it has good story line,well develop Character and love story! Also it's a kingdom/Empire building And rag to richest baby!!! P.S Hope the mc use more technology to paten and make not only him but the empire and the people more wealthy Not only that make it the empire more powerful
It is a very good read, but the grammar is mind numbingly confusing, if the author fixes the grammatical errors, it would be a much better reading experience
I love kingdom building and AU, so the main story idea is very good, although in my opinion, this story have few problem. 1- too much jump in timeline, it is like somebody took a novel and each time randomly post a chapter. you don't know you are reading start middle or the end of it. 2- each chapter or scene change must have a time and location title, to help understand what to expect from environment. 3-too much focus on side stories , how many chapter are spent on sea journey and kidnapping and ... are they main focus of story? I think all could have been a flash back in maybe half of chapter if it affects MC story. I already forgot the where we were before this side story began.
I love the histroy I has potential but I sometimes do not understand who is speaking
the story is good ....but why story line so messed up....at first in present scenario .....and suddenly after that the chapter name is 1855 ....the past scenario.....i think if there is a continuation of storytelling in proper arrangements ...like past to present ....it might be more helpful to read it..... because if not....it became very awkward ....to maintain the flow
simple, creativo y se concentra en un escenario que es dejado de lado por mucho. me encanta ya que es justo lo que promete ser y no le da tantas vueltas
Very good story, with a fairly well-carried development and very well-developed characters, a story that really hooked me to find out what would happen in the future with the empire when it comes into conflict with the world powers of that time.
i knew its too early to review but i guess i should do it , novel is based on history as well as some modern culture which our mc will bring it's kinda like tyranny of steel (vague) but you will like it .
I'm in love with your story, that's the first thing I have to say; the process you're going through is undoubtedly splendid, although there are grammatical points to improve, it doesn't prevent it from being totally simple and easy to read. As for the direction you're going with the story I think it's perfect, everything is very well detailed, as well as most of the real events, everything seems realistic and although I don't really like the harem, it's understandable; since it's an empire we're talking about, but if you know how to handle it I'm sure it will be in line with how you're going so far.
Review as of chapter 11. Preface: overall, this is a well written Kingdom Building/Historical novel. The author knows many readers of this genre dislike system and brainless game-like map-upgrade. His bet paid off, his novel has its own uniqueness and stand out amongst all these mass produced web novels. It has potential to become a hard cover published book. Character development: the protagonist’s growth was insinuated; although the author didn’t flesh out his development; much can be expected during the reminiscence in future chapters. Political exchange: this is a valuable stand out aspect of this novel; the author gives detailed explanations and thought process of all characters involved, not just the protagonist. There are chapters dedicated specifically for different forces’ reaction after the main plot. Business development: the author draws a big cake… how well he will execute one of the important aspects of this genre, remains for future discussion. As of chapter 11, this aspect is there. Militaristic layout: this is the weaker aspect of this novel. Although the author hides his clumsiness in this aspect fairly good; if this novel was evaluated as just another web novel, this aspect can receive a passing grade. However, personally, I have high hopes for this novel’s possibility; as the aspect that will draw in the most readers, I hope he can read other strategy books and improve this aspect in future chapters.
Excelente historia, me gusta el protagonista no apto para corazones débiles, y por lo menos podre ver un imperio gran colombiano fuera del victoria 3
interesting novel nowadays you don't see good historical novel good timeline management need some grammar fixition new genre view noticeable future.
Kingdom Building with a country other than Austria or The Holy Roman Empire. Good details and is quite gory. MC is a functional psychopath.
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Good Sir This Novel is a masterpiece . True literature Classic . I am truly grateful that i got chance to read it.
Wanting updates, empire stories are rare, those with decent premise even more so. mc is gonna be one ruthless mf hope author updates frequently and stably
the story of the novel is very unique has a lot of potential and is fun to read!!!!!.
I love empire stories. i hope to see more chapters soon. There is on thing that irks me though! Why doesn't he have a system?
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very good very good author very good story very good plot very good very good author very good story very good plot very good very good author very good story very good plot
Honestly just upload more consistently and maybe instead of running around to every country to do business hire people and teach them how to do modern investigations on people and make them a department that’s goal is to investigate all corruption in your empire and tell you and train a separate group how to do modern raids as to be in and out of the house with the suspects in less them 5 minutes. also they should be able to prosecute any criminal activity in your company in the USA just tell the local sheriff department if they don’t do anything to protect your company’s your can write ab how bad the cops are at their job.
I'm colombian and this book about a Colombian Empire is fabulous. Give a chance.
The novel was great and all 10/10 you should read it it has good story line,well develop Character and love story! Also it's a kingdom/Empire building And rag to richest baby!!! P.S Hope the mc use more technology to paten and make not only him but the empire and the people more wealthy Not only that make it the empire more powerful
It is a very good read, but the grammar is mind numbingly confusing, if the author fixes the grammatical errors, it would be a much better reading experience
I love kingdom building and AU, so the main story idea is very good, although in my opinion, this story have few problem. 1- too much jump in timeline, it is like somebody took a novel and each time randomly post a chapter. you don't know you are reading start middle or the end of it. 2- each chapter or scene change must have a time and location title, to help understand what to expect from environment. 3-too much focus on side stories , how many chapter are spent on sea journey and kidnapping and ... are they main focus of story? I think all could have been a flash back in maybe half of chapter if it affects MC story. I already forgot the where we were before this side story began.
I love the histroy I has potential but I sometimes do not understand who is speaking
the story is good ....but why story line so messed up....at first in present scenario .....and suddenly after that the chapter name is 1855 ....the past scenario.....i think if there is a continuation of storytelling in proper arrangements ...like past to present ....it might be more helpful to read it..... because if not....it became very awkward ....to maintain the flow
simple, creativo y se concentra en un escenario que es dejado de lado por mucho. me encanta ya que es justo lo que promete ser y no le da tantas vueltas
Very good story, with a fairly well-carried development and very well-developed characters, a story that really hooked me to find out what would happen in the future with the empire when it comes into conflict with the world powers of that time.
i knew its too early to review but i guess i should do it , novel is based on history as well as some modern culture which our mc will bring it's kinda like tyranny of steel (vague) but you will like it .
I'm in love with your story, that's the first thing I have to say; the process you're going through is undoubtedly splendid, although there are grammatical points to improve, it doesn't prevent it from being totally simple and easy to read. As for the direction you're going with the story I think it's perfect, everything is very well detailed, as well as most of the real events, everything seems realistic and although I don't really like the harem, it's understandable; since it's an empire we're talking about, but if you know how to handle it I'm sure it will be in line with how you're going so far.
Review as of chapter 11. Preface: overall, this is a well written Kingdom Building/Historical novel. The author knows many readers of this genre dislike system and brainless game-like map-upgrade. His bet paid off, his novel has its own uniqueness and stand out amongst all these mass produced web novels. It has potential to become a hard cover published book. Character development: the protagonist’s growth was insinuated; although the author didn’t flesh out his development; much can be expected during the reminiscence in future chapters. Political exchange: this is a valuable stand out aspect of this novel; the author gives detailed explanations and thought process of all characters involved, not just the protagonist. There are chapters dedicated specifically for different forces’ reaction after the main plot. Business development: the author draws a big cake… how well he will execute one of the important aspects of this genre, remains for future discussion. As of chapter 11, this aspect is there. Militaristic layout: this is the weaker aspect of this novel. Although the author hides his clumsiness in this aspect fairly good; if this novel was evaluated as just another web novel, this aspect can receive a passing grade. However, personally, I have high hopes for this novel’s possibility; as the aspect that will draw in the most readers, I hope he can read other strategy books and improve this aspect in future chapters.
Excelente historia, me gusta el protagonista no apto para corazones débiles, y por lo menos podre ver un imperio gran colombiano fuera del victoria 3
interesting novel nowadays you don't see good historical novel good timeline management need some grammar fixition new genre view noticeable future.
Kingdom Building with a country other than Austria or The Holy Roman Empire. Good details and is quite gory. MC is a functional psychopath.
Looks good to me Should be read. Update chapter as soon as possible [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Good Sir This Novel is a masterpiece . True literature Classic . I am truly grateful that i got chance to read it.
Wanting updates, empire stories are rare, those with decent premise even more so. mc is gonna be one ruthless mf hope author updates frequently and stably
the story of the novel is very unique has a lot of potential and is fun to read!!!!!.
I love empire stories. i hope to see more chapters soon. There is on thing that irks me though! Why doesn't he have a system?
I made this public so I could force myself to finish a story. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Praise Lord Kek. Shameless Review...
very good very good author very good story very good plot very good very good author very good story very good plot very good very good author very good story very good plot
Honestly just upload more consistently and maybe instead of running around to every country to do business hire people and teach them how to do modern investigations on people and make them a department that’s goal is to investigate all corruption in your empire and tell you and train a separate group how to do modern raids as to be in and out of the house with the suspects in less them 5 minutes. also they should be able to prosecute any criminal activity in your company in the USA just tell the local sheriff department if they don’t do anything to protect your company’s your can write ab how bad the cops are at their job.